Reviewer: spikesgirl247 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
can i just say wow! this is only my third twilight story i've read. this is an unbelievable story! THANK YOU!
Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
it was quite an experience going through this story.i wish bella and edward had done at least some of these things before their wedding in BD;then edward could have controlled himself better on their wedding night and there would have been no need for him to be so emotionally tortured.
i loved the way you go all out with descriptions.i too write stories but somehow i can never go into details with anything pysical,so i concentrate more on the emotional side.and sometimes the psychological;i am very interested in what goes on in people's minds while they are going through the motions of daily life,or in a particular situation.
bye until next time!
Reviewer: luzelena (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
You know???? I've been looking for a chapter like this. I consider the blood thing very erotic, but couldn't find a story with this fantasy. I really liked it.
Reviewer: glo4twilight (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
OMFG!! edward is getting more and more comfortable with this!! but you know now i have to run and have a fucking freezing cold shower thank you very much yet again!! wait till the wedding night...i would probably have to sit in a bath of ice to keep from combusting if this is the foreplay!!lol!! excellent chapter it's wonderful to see edward resolve diminishing yet still being in control!! love it!
Reviewer: Kristine8 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Beautiful chapter. The way you described the wedding and the family's toasts was wonderful.
I'm afraid I have to bring something up, though, that I keep reading in different fics when Bella loses her virginity. A woman's "barrier", the hymen, is a small piece of skin that is on the outside at the entrance to the vagina. This is what breaks when a woman has sex for the first time. There is no barrier that a man encounters within her and has to "push through".
Sorry to be a downer and seeming to be a nitpick, bcause I love your fic and can't wait to read more. I just keep encountering this and don't understand how this misconception originated amongst women.
Reviewer: sclark0925 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
All I can say is that my husband appreciates your story as much as I do!! :) Very well written! Thanks!
Reviewer: MercyIsabella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I love that you included something from Emmets POV he hasn't really had too much of a voice throught the whole series!!
Reviewer: MercyIsabella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Lovin it!!
Reviewer: MercyIsabella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
See this is how the it should have been written in the first place....lol....great work!!
Reviewer: MercyIsabella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I am speechless!!!
Reviewer: MercyIsabella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I really like how you used both Edward and Bella's POV!! Love it so far....I know the rest is going to be great!!!
Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
aw,that letter!Edward can give today's men a few tips on writing his heart out.i almost cried.and emmet's message--i can't even imagine what poor bella (and maybe Edward also) will be subjected to!
Reviewer: MercyIsabella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
A-FREAkIN-MAZING!!!!!!
Reviewer: MercyIsabella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
It's like you are in my head.....I love it so far....I know it's only Chapter 1 but GREAT job!! I will try to review each chapter or every other.....So far I am LOVING it!!
Reviewer: Nrbl (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
This was freakin EXCELLENT!!!!!
So looking foward to Edwards list :)
Reviewer: coryoplayer (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
L.C.
What a lucky gal I was to stumble across this amazing story today!!!! Absolutely mind blowing!!!!!
Thanks to you and your muse for sharing it with us readers!!!!!
Cory
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I was wondering when Bella would see #36 and I wasn't disappointed - cowboy hat indeed! What did she get Edward as a wedding gift? The thank-yous to each family member was poignant and sweet. The fantasy play was great, especially Edward fucking her mouth.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I was wondering when Edward was going to find the list and was happy with his reaction, especially making an addition of his own. I'm looking forward to Bella discovering the new item and putting things together, perhaps even with a surprise for Edward...
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Sob!! It's over! I LOVED everything about this story, and I can't wait for Edward's List! You not only portrayed the sexy side of their relationship, but the romantic side as well. It was wonderful! Can't even think what I liked best - I loved it ALL!!! I definitely will make you a favorite author, and look forward to any updates. Good luck on your novel. You are very talented, and I wish you much success!
Reviewer: DeeCullen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
OMFG!!!!! I have read this story 3 times already and i still cant get to turn away from it. Its so damn HOT and ohhh the images that play on my head over and over again with Edward first been so frustrated not being able to fully touch Bella and then all the things he can finally do.... AHHHH. and so loving the revenge on Emmett. Would have loved to see his face :) All i can say is i cant wait until you write EDWARD'S LIST. PLease let it be soon i'll beg if i have to...lol. And you are now on my favorite authors. Great story i think im going to go and read it again...lol ;)
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Holy crow! :) Stern, disciplinarian Edward all dressed in black leather?!?! What a picture that paints in my mind! Smokin' hot!! I am still trying to recover from that image, but not having much luck! Unghhh! An a delicious Edward ice cream sundae! Yummmmmmmy! I believe I could get into that! LOL! I have replayed this chapter over and over and over again in my mind, and I still haven't recovered from it!! You are the master of fantasy!! No wonder this is on the top 10 list! I am loving this story, and I'm sad that it is almost over! Thanks!!
Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I am depressed I truly adore this story and I wish there would be a sequel of sorts of her vamire life
Reviewer: fallen_angel03 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I've enjoyed your story sooooo much!!!! When I first stumbled upon it, I added it to my favorites to read later. From the description I expected it to be a fun light story but you gave so much more! You really showed the love all the characters have for each other! I truly cherished reading the list and look forward to reading about Edward's list!
Reviewer: dm999 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
What more can I say? HOT!!!!
Reviewer: dm999 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
It's soo funny and HOT!!!!
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