I'd leave a longer review of Edward's shower adventure but I can't wait to see what he foes shen he sees her!!

Alice to the rescue! I just love canon fic. This sounds too fun and I can't wait to read more. I'm one of those catch-up readers who doesn't normally review til the end, but you did ask so nicely. :)

I have to say this is my favorite chapter so far.  The "Book" was genious, and the way Edward was counting Bella's heartbeat at the time of her death was so touching.

it was so good to read about edwards trip with his father and brothers and their interacting and now that i realize why edward wanted a week apart i understand but i'm glad it backfired on him!!lol! the panty incident from his pov was so funny! i really enjoyed this chapter and wonder what exactly edward has in store for bella and himself of course! i love this story and gotta tell you that you totally rock my socks off!! now RL has completely pissed me off cos i have been trying to finish this story all week and keep getting interrupted and man it just sucks!! anyways i'm enjoying it no matter what!

hey who frickin cares about the blood i mean it is part of our human existence! so i think we would just have to deal or not read huh! anyways i for one enjoyed the chapter and felt that alices idea was a great revenge for bella! well look what it led to, it got edward so worked up that he coudn't even speak!lol!! and then when bella got all dominant on the phone to him and made him get his dirty talk back on in full swing WHOA!!!! kudos to bella she gave to edward hard and fast and it obviously affected him very powerfully!!lol!! Huge turn on that was..good on you bella now i wonder what edward has in store for their weekend!!hahaha! i loved when she went to see carlisle at the hospital their conversation was very interesting and easy and  cos of the way you've written this i could really feel the father/daughter type connection that her and carlisle have due to their interactions which i enjoy so much! carlisle is so lovely! 

love it, love it, love it!  MORE, MORE, MORE  -  PLEASE!!!

I love Bella's entries and Jasper's devotion! You are a naughty girl for being so tempted and I know you really wanted to do it. (OK, I admit it would have been a good one, only if you went straight into the actual story.)

Laura,

You have written a beautiful story! I will admit that I hadn't read this because I wasn't interested in reading a story that was just about smut which I thought this would be.

I continued to hear good things about The List and so I finally gave in and started reading it. I have to tell you that I was surprised at how wonderful your is!! For what I was expecting to be just smut, I actually found raw emotions, tenderness and a compelling story line.

I laughed and flicked from chapter to chapter, eager to read more.

I also must tell you that your lemons are honestly some of the best that I have read. You have a talent for writing scenes that are STEAMING hot but not vulgar!

And I will also share with you that when Bella changed into a vampire I cried. For several reasons. I had happy tears for Edward because I knew that he would be able to have her forever but I also cried for the loss of her humanity. I felt an incredible sense of loss for her even though she was getting everything she wanted.

You write beautifully and I am so glad that I decided to read this.

Thank you Laura :)

Hannah xx

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you gave it a try!  Thanks for this great review!  Laura

The goodbyes were spot on. The vamp fantasy was crazy hot. I'm glad you addressed the bruises and Bella getting hurt a bit with sex. Looking forward to vamp and hunting sex...

Hot...hot...hot!!

Wow...wow...wow.  I just found your story, and already I love it!!!  Definitely enjoying these charcters more than the book itself.  Awesome job! 

So sweet, perfect and just plain AWESOME!!

can i just say wow! this is only my third twilight story i've read. this is an unbelievable story! THANK YOU!