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Reviewer: DPattz (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
*I READ, I SHOCK, I DIEEEEEE*
PS: PROBABLY THE HOTTEST FF STORY I HAVE EVER READ, SO FARRR
---------------------*STILL IN DIE MODE*--------------------------
Author's Response: Thanks for making me smile! Fun review! Thanks!
Reviewer: gigglefaries101 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
o my god damn this story damn bellas book and damn my pregnancy hormones as i just blubbed like a baby especially at the part she wrote about his family
Reviewer: Jezzelbell (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Who's the Author of A Lesson in Release?
So far great story.
Reviewer: Jezzelbell (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Great start.
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
My favourite is the destruction of the cabin and the applause they received. Espescially whe Bella tells them all to get lost cause she hasn't finished fucking her husband, classic!!!! This whole story has had me hot & bothered much to the surprise & great delight of my ever suffering husband. But it has also made me laugh out loud and cry. I've loved every moment of it, Thank you for writing it and awaking something within me that has, after 14 years of marriage, seriously been in need of waking up.
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I cried!!!!! and then got a little steamy hehe but it is brilliant!
Reviewer: MEC (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Awesome, thank you so much. Good luck with your original work too.
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I thought you had forgotten about Edwards adition to the list so when I read Bella's sudden realisation I laughed out loud & my husband looked at me funny! I loved number 8, I thought maybe this wasn't going to happen until after Bella's change but this was perfect. Thank you again and my hubby thanks you for the inspiration you're giving me ;)
Reviewer: whyuh (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
WOW!
Just......
*stands and applauds*
Bravissima!!
I'm not even sure if you still read reviews on this, but I'm new to Twilighted and although I'm not confident enough in my own writing abilities to review each chapter, I had to say...something!
I listened to the 1st podcast from Twigasm and, genius women that they are, they had recc'd your story. I'm thrilled I was able to not only find it (several stories have been removed :( ), but fall in love with it like so many others before me!
Thank you...
For having the talent to write something so beautiful,
the willingness to share it with the world,
and the wisdom to know just when to fan those flames! lol
Again...bravissima! You have a gift and I can't thank you enough for sharing it.
whyuh
Author's Response: Thanks for these very kind words. I do still read my reviews, and am thrilled that new readers are still coming to read. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: ifidie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
this is hotter and hotter!!! phewwww!! love your work xx
Reviewer: team_smut (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh Edward biting her while they make love and he cums....I love love love it....can't wait to see what happens when she turns.....
Reviewer: vampiremerlot0609 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I just wanted to say wow!! I absolutely love this story! It is def on my top 5. You are an amazing writer, I must say. Some of the ideas that you came up with just melted my heart (and set me on fire!). The recording of Bella's heartbeat was, just, amazing. That was one of my favorite parts. And of course the book! Genius!!! Congrats on an amazing story and thank you so much!
Reviewer: glo4twilight (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
the whole thing was just fantastic and it's hard to pick out specifics from each time but with one week it was definitely the destruction of the cottage/cabin. then with the three week thing i think it would be receiving the album with charlies pics and then with the christmas thing it was definitely his satisfaction in drinking her blood and well your so no fair to want different things from each time cos the whole chapter was epic and rightly called the epiclogue! btw i went to see Remember Me this avo and RPattz is just fuckhot sexy of course and get to see more of him shirtless and having a bit of a nice steamy romp!! mhmm he's awesome and although it wasn't edward he was still hot n sexy n just handsome as ever! i surely cried it was a beautiful movie and he did an excellent job! anywyas congratulations on the completion of this story and the gargantuan task it has been for you! and the pleasure reading experience it has been for me! you are one incredible lady and all the best for the novels you have been writing!
Reviewer: gigglefaries101 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
id have prefered her tatoo in another spot i was thinking wrist or nape of neck so it can be hidden but a sexy start to the weekend
Reviewer: gigglefaries101 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
id have prefered her tatoo in another spot i was thinking wrist or nape of neck so it can be hidden but a sexy start to the weekend
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Hot & steamy as always but i absolutely love the prank on Emmett. He has always been a favourite of mine & is so funny but this was perfect revenge, I could just picture him freakin' out. Also I like that you had Edward seek Bella's help with the new car. Another brilliant chapter, Thankyou.
Reviewer: Isis (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Ok, off to bed now, but I shall continue (re)reading tomorrow (later today). I just want you to know that you rock and you're an amazing writer.
Reviewer: Isis (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I need to go to bed, but I can't stop reading. This is one of my favorite chapters.
Reviewer: Isis (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Where can I get an Edward like that?
Reviewer: Isis (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Did I mention that I love this story?
Reviewer: Isis (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Rereading this story because I love it sooooo much!
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
YAY EDWARD!!!!!! I love it!!! He is just so fabulous, I love that he has finally realised he can control himself to do what he wants to do. Your explicite descriptions are sooooo good. Just Brilliant.........oh when is this movie coming out haha??
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
YAY EDWARD!!!!!! I love it!!! He is just so fabulous, I love that he has finally realised he can control himself to do what he wants to do. Your explicite descriptions are sooooo good. Just Brilliant.........oh when is this movie coming out haha??
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I like this chapter, the blood talk doesn't gross me out I think its great after all its what he wants the most. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: glo4twilight (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
omg i understand about the separation anxiety...i feel that too as i'm many other readers do!! but i guess it would be more so for you cos this has been a collabortion of an incredible idea that has come alive in this story. even tho SM may have originally put the idea there the uniqueness of your own flavour and creativity has just made it so phenomenal and so captivating!! i loved it! the book entries he read and the homework she got him to do and the elation at her waking and the realization and the hunting and of course their first time union as vampires!!!whoa!! frickin excellent you should be so proud of yourself!!
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