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Reviewer: adonica (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Your Bella said, "Without you, Alice, it's very possible that all of this," I waved my hands, but she knew what I meant to be referring to, "would never have happened. If you hadn't seen me. If you hadn't saved me on, God, I don't know how many occasions. If you hadn't fought for me. "
My favorite part of the entire canon, in all 4 books, hands down, is when Alice is waiting for Bella in Charlie's house. It is the only time that I cried during the entire read. I practically read the words off of the page. The power of Alice and friendship and a story that has swallowed us all whole.
I was so disappointed that the NM movie glossed over this important plot point.
Thank you for writing what I wish SM had written.
Your writing style is so enjoyable. This is my first review, sorry, I have been enjoying your work for some time.
Love, Adonica Shelleyskye xx
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review--I couldn't agree more about how powerful that moment was in New Moon. :)
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I think the blood talk was tastefully done. I'm interested in reading further to see how Edward handles it in the morning, with Bella so close. Tempting much?
It's nice to see Edward coming out of his shell.
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I can only imagine what the weekend is going to be like with the distance during the week.
Love the idea of the TAT!! My first thought was of the Cullen Crest, that would be Bad Ass!!
I'm sort of wondering if Edward is going to take his turn this weekend for dominating.
Love the roll playing ideas too!
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Lol that was funny.
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Damned Hot!! I love how Bella uses this game to get him to realize that she isn't as sweet & perfect as he convinced himself she was. How she used it to let him know she has desires too.
I think they covered more than 3 that day though. LOL
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I like the twist of events. I'm interested in finding out how Bella gets past this and what is accomplished next.
I'm figuring phone sex as the cell phone was mentioned...
Reviewer: PartyLikeARockStar (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Wow....this story is just wow. And I mean that in the good way. The very good way. can't wait for the next part....wow....
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Wow! Very intense & hot! It makes me wonder how Edward kept from tearing apart the headboard. :-)
I wonder how much of her list she will actually get from him. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Love the story so far. It's very hot in a tasteful way. It works well with thoughts of the original story line of Edward & Bella. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Ok, Alice entering the picture was definitely a mood killer. :-(
It was an interesting twist though.
Love the list idea. :-)
Reviewer: aws (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I liked the fantasies in this chapter and the descriptions. It's just the start of the story, so I look forward to more.
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I'm here again, for the third time thank you very much !!!! and loving it again......xxxxx
Reviewer: LeeLeeLee (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
excellent it has made my love life spark heaps my partner didnt no what came over me lol.
Loyal fan xx Leonie
Reviewer: niff_katt (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
ohmygod! such a perfect ending! jeez, this beats breaking dawn, cuz no offense to sm but compared to the others, it failed a little bit! :D fyi, i'm skipping church to read this, so if i burn in hell, i blame your kick ass story writing!!
Reviewer: angelburt84 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
damn that was a hot chapter loved it
Reviewer: DPattz (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
*I READ, I SHOCK, I DIEEEEEE*
PS: PROBABLY THE HOTTEST FF STORY I HAVE EVER READ, SO FARRR
---------------------*STILL IN DIE MODE*--------------------------
Author's Response: Thanks for making me smile! Fun review! Thanks!
Reviewer: gigglefaries101 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
o my god damn this story damn bellas book and damn my pregnancy hormones as i just blubbed like a baby especially at the part she wrote about his family
Reviewer: Jezzelbell (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Who's the Author of A Lesson in Release?
So far great story.
Reviewer: Jezzelbell (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Great start.
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
My favourite is the destruction of the cabin and the applause they received. Espescially whe Bella tells them all to get lost cause she hasn't finished fucking her husband, classic!!!! This whole story has had me hot & bothered much to the surprise & great delight of my ever suffering husband. But it has also made me laugh out loud and cry. I've loved every moment of it, Thank you for writing it and awaking something within me that has, after 14 years of marriage, seriously been in need of waking up.
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I cried!!!!! and then got a little steamy hehe but it is brilliant!
Reviewer: MEC (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Awesome, thank you so much. Good luck with your original work too.
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I thought you had forgotten about Edwards adition to the list so when I read Bella's sudden realisation I laughed out loud & my husband looked at me funny! I loved number 8, I thought maybe this wasn't going to happen until after Bella's change but this was perfect. Thank you again and my hubby thanks you for the inspiration you're giving me ;)
Reviewer: whyuh (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
WOW!
Just......
*stands and applauds*
Bravissima!!
I'm not even sure if you still read reviews on this, but I'm new to Twilighted and although I'm not confident enough in my own writing abilities to review each chapter, I had to say...something!
I listened to the 1st podcast from Twigasm and, genius women that they are, they had recc'd your story. I'm thrilled I was able to not only find it (several stories have been removed :( ), but fall in love with it like so many others before me!
Thank you...
For having the talent to write something so beautiful,
the willingness to share it with the world,
and the wisdom to know just when to fan those flames! lol
Again...bravissima! You have a gift and I can't thank you enough for sharing it.
whyuh
Author's Response: Thanks for these very kind words. I do still read my reviews, and am thrilled that new readers are still coming to read. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: ifidie (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
this is hotter and hotter!!! phewwww!! love your work xx
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