Reviewer: Velvetwhispers (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I loved this sooo much, I am in awe of our talent,I'm not sure i have the words to describe just how much your story has touched me. You are an amazing writer .Thank you fior sharing your gift with us.
Reviewer: Janners (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
(standing ovation) Bravo!! Bravo!! Loved seeing into Edward's past and loved that he finally felt connected to himself. Bella's surprise could not have been better.
Thank you!!!
(tosses roses at Laura's feet)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm clutching my roses to my chest right now! :)
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
First of all - congratulations on selling your novel!!!
This epilogue was absolutely amazing!!! I think that it might be the most romantic thing I've ever read. The love Bella and Edward share poured out of the screen and settled right in my heart. Your attention to detail is astonishing and the mental pictures you conjure is simply magical!
Thank you so much for making my world a more beautiful place!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
What a wonderful outtake. It made my heart flutter and made me cry like a baby. A great chapter as always, and of course, congrats on publishing your book!
Is there an ETA for Edward's List? I'm dying to know! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Time flies. I can't believe it has been 7 months. This was a beautiful snapshot of their lives! Congrats on the novel!
Reviewer: KristinHazzard (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Such a lovely surprise to find this update in my inbox. This was an awesome extra to read. Loved every word of it. Thank you and good luck with your book!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
congratulations on the book and good luck with your professional writing! i really loved this extra epilogue with the trip to chicago. carlisle would have arranged for edward to keep all of his inheritance.
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I'm completely blown away. This was one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read. What a fantastic idea to have Edward and Bella at his house in Chicago. Truly, I am speechless and moved beyond belief. Thank you so much for sharing your story and your writing talent, I feel blessed to be able to read your creations.
Reviewer: IleanaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
That was Amazing! As always! The perfect surprise, like Edward seemed really bare there. Ya know what I'm trying to say? Like he finally let his gaurd down completly not just for Bella! LOVED IT!!
As for your amazing news...like I said I can't wait!!! So happy for you!! My farmville friend!! LOL!!
Reviewer: KCBC (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Alice Alice Alice....let's hope her presence is going to help properly build all the sexual tension for this story.
Reviewer: sweek539 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Wow, Laura! You just made me cry! I love the thought of Edward getting back a bit of his past. The train, the pictures... it was all so amazing! Not gonna lie, I freaked out for a minute when I saw that you'd updated- thinking the story had been deleted and you were just letting us know why it had been taken down. Thank you so, so, so much for writing this! It truly made a horrible day brighten up!
xoxo,
Starla
Author's Response: Sorry to scare ya! Not to worry, I won't be removing this story! So glad you liked! :)
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
thank you for the wonderful surprise and gift of this addition to the list!
And congratulations on your book being published! You are gifted:)
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Oh Laura! I absolutely loved this! What a wonderful outtake. I love your Edward and Bella. The love and devotion that Bella and Edward have for each other is so passionate and sweet. Naughty and nice. Such descriptive and emotional writing...so well done! Loved this 5th Anniversary surprise of Bella's. What a great idea. Anyway thanks so much for donating your time to such a worthy cause. Thank you for writing. Keep us updated on Forever Freed...I recently read it through and was waiting for more. Glad you are getting it published. Let us know!
Reviewer: KCBC (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Definitely makes you want to keep reading...the tone of Bella in general is just like the books - although that really doesn't matter much to me b/c I am addicted to FF!
Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
You made me laugh, cry, and made my skin tingle. Wow.... I think I need to reread the whole story. Thanks for being just plain AWESOME. Luv your skills. I am looking forward to reading your novel at the end of the year.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Great chapter! Wow, Bella's gift to Edward was amazing. The perfect thing for him; to help him gain back a piece of his humanity. I wish I could have been there with her and Jasper when they were opening up those boxes for the first time. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your novel coming out!!
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
After such a hiatis what a beautiful one shot! It was just sweet just moving and touching with a taste of lemony goodness.
Congrats on your novel you are an excellent writer and i look forward to buying a copy of your work!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
OMG! I was so surprised and happy to see this today. At first I thought there was a glitch or something because I just knew that The List was over and done with. This was such a great surprise though. Thanks for sharing it. I loved seeing what they have been up to in their married life. Oh, and congrats on the book deal. That is really exciting. I hope it becomes a best seller. Good luck with it and keep us posted on when it will be out.
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I absolutely loved Bella's fifth anniversary surprise to Edward. It was wonderful.
Reviewer: emilychar (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
What a fantastic way to finish!!!
Lots of sweet, just enough lemon...REFRESHING!!!
:-)
Great writing.
Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
how much Edward grew through this proyect, ha?
not that I totally hate Emoward but kinky Edward is hot!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
That was simply awesome...
what a wonderful gift from Bella!
I was so excited to see my little update email- confused and bewildered...and so excited to see a new chapter in the story that started it all for me.
Thanks Laura. For such a beautiful story.
And Congratulations on your novel! So proud!
love you!
MWAH!
steph
Author's Response: Yes, I thought people might be like, wait, what? That can't be right. The List is done! LOL So glad you liked! :)
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Oh, this was wonderful! And super congrats for your novel....go, you!
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Love it. Had me tearing up as he moved through the house. Great idea. :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
This was great!
Bella's gift was so wonderful! It really was. =) Excellent work on writing it.
Congrats on your book!!
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