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Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Bahaha...Bella defies the very purpose of a cold shower...maybe they should write a new definition...*snort* Love the humor...I've been reading a lot of angsty fanfics lately and this proves that there is an alternative way to go...! I'm liking this already! <3

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the multiple reviews.  Yes, I made a very specific decision that this would be a more lighthearted, angst-free story.  Not that I don't love reading angst, but I do...  Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

This was such a wonderful ending! I hope we hear about these two in the future, they are just too cute. Congratulations on you novel!

Reviewer: Heathgio (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I just want to say this is the best fanfiction I have read on all the sites out there.  It was amazing, everything you wrote about was perfect and exactly what I wanted to read. You are an amazing writer and I truly LOVED this story. I hope you write Edward's list eventually, once again BRILLIANT STORY, thank you so much for writing this, I just can't tell you how much I loved it!!!! 

Reviewer: ambientx (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

That was great! Thank you so much for posting again :)

Reviewer: Taty_1973 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

Wow! Things are proceeding pretty nicely. Nr. 7 is gone and, sweet angels of the heavens, in the fucking ASTON MARTIN! *THUD*
Sorry, but that was... awesome! *lol*

This story is amazing! I'm loving every word of it.  =)

Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Welcome back!

I loved this little revisit, thanks so much for sharing it with us, and congrats on your book! I must admit that I can be cynical when some FF writers talk about publishing, but you got the chops and I wish you much success.

Reviewer: Taty_1973 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

"In that moment, the full significance of our impending marriage hit me.  If I could have shed tears, I would have.  In giving herself to me so completely, Bella was making me whole."  <--- This is beautiful. They're beautiful. And you're a genious.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake


Reviewer: Taty_1973 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

Well... fuck. That was hot. I need a cigarette now and it was just the first of hopefully many points scratched from the list. *lol* I have the suspicion that this list will grow really looong. Thank God Alice is there to help Bella. =)

Reviewer: Taty_1973 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

This story is going to be epic. I just know it. Oh how I love Alice. I hope we'll see lot of her in this story. And I wonder how many objectives Bella will manage to achieve in the list before the wedding and to what length she'll be willing to go to do so. *lmao*  This is so amazing. I MUST keep reading now. =)

Reviewer: Taty_1973 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Poor Bella, that must have been torture... having a man like Edward work you up like that only to pull away at the very best part. I would have gone insane. *lmao*  Good thing that she's taking the situation into her own hands so to speak. *winks* 

Reviewer: KCBC (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Just Wow - I want to take my honeymoon again with The List!!

Reviewer: KCBC (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

You did it!!  You fit in all the necessaries for the wedding (including Jacob)  without going too traditional!  Well it can only get easier from here on for these two.  You have the ability to balance the yummy lemons and their perfect love - ADORE YOUR STORY!

Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

I have really enjoyed this update to your wonderful story.  I kept thinking you were going to give us details on what things might be like in the world 50 years from now, but I liked this even better.  I really appreciate you sharing this with us and a special thank you to those that bought this for charity.  Congrats on your book!

Reviewer: Sabrerob (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

What fun, you had me laughing out loud and then squirming in my chair.  Thanks for the chapter.  REALLY good!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake


Love the pen name. Why kaye? By chance are you an AMC fan?

Loved this bonus ch! Would love more from our listers.

Author's Response:

Kaye is inspired by no more than the fact that my last name starts with that letter!  So glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Awesome!  Everything you write, awesome.  Thank you for continueing to add to the E&B happily forever after.  I couldn't believe when this was updated.  I look forward to reading your original novel, you do great character development.  :)  Please continue to add to this fantastic story, your E&B are the best.


Reviewer: fanfiction9912 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Loved the update!!!

Reviewer: KCBC (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I love the way you wrote the relationship with Alice.  It really is so sweet that Alice stood behind her and Edward from the beginning and just never let it go.

My favorite:  Into her hair I whispered, "That day, Alice, that day you came back to Forks.  You saved my life that day.  I was never so glad to see anyone as I was to see you that day."

I also loved the special talk she had with each family member before she marries Edward - made me cry!

Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Pass me the tissues, that beautiful, thank you.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

in love :D 

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

It was such a wonderful surprise to catch up on your Edward and Bella!  I just love that Bella had a chance to spoil Edward for a change - his reaction to her gift was beautiful and the picture was painted so wonderfully that I could just imagine them moving from room to room. 

I loved reading about all of the history in the house.  From the furniture to the photos and the paperwork, but I must admit that Edward's room got me aswell (esp the toy train)! 

Congratulations again on your novel!  This is amazing news which is well deserved.  As for your pseudonym - perfect.  How very nice of you to add our two names together *wink/giggle*! 


Author's Response:

Ha!  That's great!  Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

There, I found all I'd ever need:  my wife, my partner, my brave little lamb, my beautiful Bella

you lady...are one hell of a writer! just sayin...I heart cha!

Author's Response:

Thankie thankie!

Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

What are your other ideas for pen names?  You should have people vote and see what the most popular picks are!  That might help you decide.

Reviewer: eryka12 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

I just finished the story, and while I wanted to tell you along the way how much I enjoyed it, I couldn't stop reading long enough to compose a review.  The story was amazing, f*uckhawt, tender, and just close enough to canon to make it feel like an outtake and not "just fanfic".

I'm sure other of your super reviewers have also pointed it out, but in your second epilogue, when Bella notices that most of the jewlery is missing from Edward's mothers jewlery box, the reason I assumed the jewlery was missing was because Edward/Carlisle had taken it long ago.  In the Saga, Edward mentions, when he gives Bella the diamond heart, that he'd had some of his mother's jewlery and he'd given it to Rosalie and Alice over the years.  Just a thought!

Congrats again on getting your novel published, I look forward to reading it.

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