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Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Yes! love the introduction of Alice here and his instincts kicking in to her "smelling different"...such raw passion!great chappy!
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
how am i just now finding this??? lol...awesome 1st chappy..and i can already tell im going to like this..ALOT! lol..about time there was a story where bella got hers from jump!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Oh my God. I am absolutely STUNNED & simply can't think of the right words to express how I feel right now. I have read hundreds of these fanfics, "The List" obviously being a forever favorite. But THIS? I cried!! I flippin cried!!! My heart was literally fluttering. Full range of emotions. Where-How you came up with this idea astounds me!! WOW..just Wow! Bravo & Standing Ovation worthy!
I had to smile at your wonderful & well deserved news about being published, cuz I thought numerous times reading this & "The List" that you simply must get published as you are a HELLA-AWESOME writer!!!!!!!!! I'm very very excited for you dearest! Linda
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I adore this story. I have re read it and recommended it to friends thanks so much for sharing
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Well hello Ms. Laura,
First, congrats on your published book! That's wonderful! Second, this chapter was just so loving and sweet. I really enjoyed it. I loved being able to walk through the Masen house with Edward. What fun to see his memories as well as the realization that he's not only *always* been loved, he's always been *worthy* of that love. Great job.
love, Ms. Richelle
Reviewer: fabbydulcinea (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
aw poor Edward..come here and i'll ease you up to it..lmao
Reviewer: beckybrit (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Awww!!! I prefer your version to SM's!!
That was just fab!!!
Reviewer: beckybrit (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
"Bella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze. She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind. Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker. "
That is by far my favourite bit of your fic so far! I fucking love that line!!!
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
You went with the less creepy imprinting option for Jake ;) No Nessie then I pressume...?! lol
Sweet wedding, sweet chapter in general! Carlisle's and Charlie's speeches were beautiful! =') <3
Reviewer: darcy23 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wow! I'll never think about the meadow in the same way again! Great chapter - apart from being really hot, I really like the bit before with Alice and Bella talking in the car. It's nice to think that Alice sparkles too - haven't had that described before. And I also thought the bit about Jasper feeling her frustration was great too - brings teh whole family to life, making for a well rounded story.
Also nice to Edward swear - well, you would, woudn't you in tat situation!
Reviewer: darcy23 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Hi, I know that you've already finished the story, but you said that you welcomed comments as the chapters progress so i just thought I'd let you know that I think it's a great start. Your characterisation of Bella and Edward is great - really how I imagine them. And Bella is way more real the way you write her. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters!
Reviewer: beckybrit (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Oh I love that he saw her list and added to it!! Can't wait til she realises. I wonder if I made one and left it lying around, would it have the same effect, lol!
Reviewer: Breaking Aurora (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Ummm, wow! I'm read quite a lot of lemons/smut here and on FF and the tree scene was pretty darn hot!!! :-) Who would have thought grinding on someone could be so hot?! Poor Edward though.......
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
loved it !
Reviewer: reader_giggles (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
what fun her list is! cant wait to see what goes on to it!
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
The "biology scene" was hawt!!!! Many items on the list all at the same time! ;) Sweet and spicy mixed togehter in a wonderful way! I loved the "talks" and that Bella invited Rose to come along with them to go shopping...and Alice & Bella are a dreamtem of scheaming ;) <3
Reviewer: beckybrit (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OMG! I think that went far beyond my expectations!!
Just awesome.
Reviewer: HRiffner (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I love this book!!!! I am hanging on your every word :) Thanks for the fantastic reading, it's fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: fabbydulcinea (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
WOW...that was freakin hot! hehehe but really wow i'm going to end up coping this list lmao
Reviewer: somanywards (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Oh Alice!
Reviewer: somanywards (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Have heard about your fic, all good! An after seeing the banner I'm all in
: )
Reviewer: fabbydulcinea (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
oh snap! lmao @ mike newton watching hahahaha
i want some Edward 2! :/
Reviewer: fabbydulcinea (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
so i just found this story...i'm new here at twilighted..since pretty much all my favorite stories have been deleted from fanfic... but i clicked on the top ten and found this one... i gotta say so far... me likey!..hehehe but yeah i'm going to keep reading...so i'll probably be here all day...
xoxo
fabby
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
As soon as he climbed out of bed and onto the floor I knew he would find the list...and I love that he did! It's his turn to be schemeing! The romantic parts were my absolute favorites in this chappie *sigh* <3
Reviewer: Phoenixliv (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Your first scene here, with Alice is so sweet, I have tears in my eyes too! You do such a great job of making the characters in character even when this story goes way sexier than canon.
Romance, Heat, Sweetness. Everything :) I think this is my favorie chapter. (this is my second time reading through)
Thanks again, for writing all this!
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