Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Sad goodbyes but sweet memories created <3 I'm anticipating the Blood-drinking more than the change...am I weird? ;)
Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Can't woat for the revenge!
Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Maybe I'm just too much of a girl, the love and feelings of connection injected into these scenes makes them so much hotter than the sex alone.
Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Really enjoying the other character's POV. It definitely adds to the story quality, and excitement, to hear voices and experiences other than Bella's.
Thank you for Edward's release! OMG, I have been waiting for that for so long. ;)
Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Hehe...Alice don't do anything half heartedly...cowgirl means cowgirl ;) Smut and love...can't get any better ;) <3
Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Love the Em text!!
Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Thank you so much for the humor in this story. It's wonderful to be able to laugh and feel sexy at the same time.
One comment...Edward calling her "baby" just didn't feel right. Other than that, I love how well you've captured the characters and relationships of the original stories.
Reviewer: Julia Dawn (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Loved this FanFic!
Congratulations =)
Reviewer: Tibido (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Loved Alice's last comment, leaving so much hanging in the air unsaid. Couldn't help but laugh at the inevitable moment of shock for Bella.
Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Good chapter. I like adventurous Bella & slowly coming around Edward.
Reviewer: LiRock (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I absolutely LOVED this chapter(28)!!!I love victorian architecture and decorating and your vivid descriptions helped me to visualize this house very clearly. I can so picture Edward and Bella in this house in period costume.I also love that Bella was finally able to give back to Edward something equal(in her eyes)to what he gave her.Thank you for sharing your gift with us.As a name idea: how about Laura Collin or Collins. Very close to Cullen. Just a thought.
Reviewer: Rion (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
What an amazing read !!!. You surpassed SM. This should have been last book in the Twilight series. Why??
Because you captured what SM could not make come alive in her last 3 books.
A love story.
You got it.
- Edward’s love for Bella
- Bella’s love for Edward
- The Cullens were a family, not a coven
- Siblings and bonds within them
- Bella’s choice and Edward’s acceptance of Bella’s choice to become a vampire
- Virgin lovers true sexual awakenings
- And most of all Vampires, Edward’s blood lust for Bella’s blood.
- The emotions of Bella’s last day as a human with Edward was clearly heartfelt and it poured out into writings, down playing the sexual, engaging the readers in depths of their love and finally the bite, Edward as a vampire and the Cullen’s as a family who protects their own
- and yes their story , their love story after Bella becomes a vampire
Thanks God there were no babies...........:)
Job well done………………
Rion
Author's Response: This was truly awesome--thank you so much, Rion!
Reviewer: beckybrit (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG That was so intense!! That s a much better way to be turned, lol! It was just so hot! But is he supposed to be drinking her blood?
Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
That was so sweet to see somthing on Edwards list being knocked off. Bella is so thoughtful
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
What a finish - just brilliant - loved every moment of this chapter!
Perfection at it's best :)
Thank you so much for giving this 2nd epilogue to us... just fantastic is all I can say!
Good luck on your book - great name by the way!
Can't wait to see it in print & read it... all the best x
Reviewer: beckybrit (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Awww, that was all a bit sad, *sniff*!, but good.
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Amazing continuation of The List. I loved it. Congratulations on the book deal. I like the name you are thinking of using and look forward to purchasing your book. Keep us all posted.
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
:::thud::: <~ see that? thats me i fainted! HOLY HELL THAT WAS ON FUCKING FIRE!!!
"I dont know how much more of this i would be able to take before i threw her down and helped her find god" SERIOUSLY! wow i just loved that part!
your story owns me!
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
oh hell yeah! dominating bella! nice!
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
slight change in plans indeed my dear!LOL! that was incredibly hot! great work!
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
i think its only right for him to feel that way! rock on chica this is getting better and better!..im hooked!
Reviewer: darcy23 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Probably not the best idea to read chapters 5 and 6 before geading off to work - how am i going to concentrate?!
Thanks again for writing some great chapters. What I like about your writing is that not only are Bella & edward finally getting somewhere (and you describe that very well!), but around that all that the story is so full and rounded. I love the way you describe their chracters and the others as well. When Alice and Jasper are thinking about colours and ships in the previous cahpter it made me laugh out loud. The only bit I did feel a bit weird about was Alice and Jasper having sex. I guess I've never really thought of them that way - it's all been focused on Edward & Bella - so reading about them doing the do was a bit odd. But I thik that's my own issue!
Reviewer: deeLee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Thank you Thank you Thankyou. I sooo appreciate you adding this it means sooo much!!! I have had this story in my head since the Epiloge. Many questions have now been answered...This has been by far the best story I have read!!!!!! This chapter brought about so many emotions. No ONE has EVER addressed this and it broke my heart and made it swell to read EPOV about "Going Home and his human life" etc, etc.
Thank You and God Bless.
Reviewer: fadingembers (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Lovely addition to this story :)
Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
That was such a great way to end this wonderful story! Congrats on the novel!!!
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