Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
excellent! though some how him putting on sox and shoes lost a little bit of the momentum for me.. what is it about men in their sox! just not as sexy =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
wicked! I love the dark side of Bella! thank goodness for your story, i am totally engrossed =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
hot! can't wait to keep reading more, you write very well!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
really cute! i liked this chapter a lot, good banter between edward and bells!
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I very nearly cried, that was beautiful
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
The perfect happy ever after
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I wanna hear Edward's list! Beautiful ending
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Love it love it love, more!!!
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Can't wait to see what happens next, well written
Reviewer: gopaleforjasperhale1843 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
An absolutely amazing story. I loved every second of it. It made me laugh, cry, and everything in between. You are an extrordinary writer and I thank you for the enjoyment you have brought me.
Reviewer: twicrack83 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
You had no reason to be nervous. This was a beautifully written chapter! Thank you very much for sharing it with us! I just wish my first time was that awesome!
Reviewer: twicrack83 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ah, the lab table. Epic!!
Reviewer: ambellisha (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
WOW!!!
Reviewer: glo4twilight (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
omg Laura this chapter was absolutely phenomenal!!! i kid you not!!! how amazing of you to take edward back to his human ties via bellas surprise!! wow it was like you left no stone unturned in order for edward to have his memories come alive to a degree!! i so so cried it was just so beautiful and how the depth of his thankfulness was incredibly endearing!! every detail in this story was truly amazing and had me captivated the whole time!! you really are an amazing writer and i'm sure your novel i gonna do extremely well! thank you so much for this chapter and the insight into edwards life from everything in his family home!! and yes i feel like he's truly not alone, as he felt himself - once connecting with his human past!! AWESOME!!
Reviewer: ambellisha (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
love the list.....considering that most of us have already had one or many of these fantasies including Edward..of course!....
Reviewer: ambellisha (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Terrific writing....even the "extra ideas" seem to totally fit!!! I definitly think this should have been the way she really felt but i imagine S.M. had some reservations due to her expected audience, This audience loves your version!!!!!
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Perfect
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Good thing he called off that bet! Very good characterisation in this. Love that Edward has his own fantasies
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
le siiigghhh that was so fricken SWEET! i loved it!
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I was wondering if Edward would ever read the list!
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Really touching chapter
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I do love Edward letting himself be in control
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Dear God!!! Exquisite!
Reviewer: lee21761 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Loved it just didn't like Edward saying diarrhea
Reviewer: Emily Bowden (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I read your story from start to finish and I have to say that I as amazed. Your writing style is breathtaking. You have a way with words, my dear, that made this story a true love story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
~E. Bowden
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