Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
This chapter was SO sweet...I've read a few "Edward and Bella go to Chicago" things, but this one was probably the most 'in character' - just so sweet and romantic!
Reviewer: titschei (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
This was the b.e.s.t frickin' story I have ever read and the ending I liked muuuuch better than in the original saga. Just couldn't wrap my mind around the whole Jake-Renesmee-Bella thing. Your solution took my breath away and Edward's visit at his childhood home was definitely sob-worthy. Great work, huge talent and the right mix to make girls and women love your story. Thanks a million, Laura, you rock!!! <3
Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
wow thats 16 outta 24 now! How is he going to taste her blood?
Reviewer: HaYhAy (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OMG! I LOVE that story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is my FAVORITE bella/jasper story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squeal* its also the reason I'm on team Jasper.
Reviewer: LindseyCullen1979 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG!!! That was so fucking HOTT!
Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Awww, I really enjoyed that! Great story! Im sad to see it come to an end but loved every word of it! Thanks for the good read!
Reviewer: jjjmom (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
What do I think? Hmmmm. I think that chapter DEFINITELY needs to be re-read. After I take a cold shower! Gahhhh! HOT!!!!!!
Reviewer: LindseyCullen1979 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I loved this chapter! SO HOTT!
Reviewer: twicrack83 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
MMMM! I love outdoor schmexiness!! I'm just surprised they didn't take out the tree with all that lovin'!!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Good gawd, just when I think this story has given me all that it had to give you come up with more blissful brilliance. I'm not gonna lie, I bawled my eyes out reading this one. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Congrats on publishing! I'm lloking forward to reading Forever Freed. I've bookmarked your website & I'll be looking you up on FB as well. Oh, I love Laura Kaye as a pseudonym!
All the best!
Kat
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
So its taken me a couple weeks to read through this but I absolutely loved it! Those fiesty two! I love the idea of a 'list' and the book that bella wrote for when she was changing. I can't wait to read Edwards List- I don't even know if you've started posting it yet but I'll find out very soon!
And I loved this second epilogue of sorts. my fav part was the whole 5th anniversary and the restoration of the Masen house. The idea of antique furnishings and clothings and such fascinates me so to see it relived with Edwards past was such a treat! I truly loved it!
And congrats on the original novel- that must be SO exciting!
Thank you for a wonderful read and I look forward to reading more from you! :)
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
*wipes away a tear* I don't ever want this to me over...not in a million tomorrows...
Faves:
One Week ~ Bella's restaint in not "eating" the wolves, Edward & Bella's schmexing destruction of the cabin & the applause/laugher of their brothers & sisters at said destruction. Oh & Bella's come back was awesome!
Three Weeks ~ Bella recieving her Cullen Crest, the photo album, but mostly Edward & Bella reading "The Book".
Christmas Night ~ absolutely, without a doubt Bella's gift to Edward & his reaction to it...totally blissed me out. There are not enough words for that.
I'm gonna miss this story something wicked, but I look forward to reading ANYTHING you write in future.
*smooches* Always.
~Kat
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
without a doubt the best fan fiction i have ever read :) x x
I will keep this story in my Favourites an I know in the future I will read it aain and again.
Thank You x x
Reviewer: NotTooOldForThis (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
What a delight - another installment of The List. Laura, you are my favorite FanFic author. I wish you well with your new publication, and will do my part to ensure your success.
Reviewer: twicrack83 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
The goodbye scene was perfect! I loved how Jake and Bella got some good laughs in there.
Reviewer: twicrack83 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
What an awesome honeymoon! I wish I was half as brave as Bella. That girl has balls!
Reviewer: LindseyCullen1979 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Is it just gonna be her fantasies or are they gonna try to do some of them b4 the wedding?
Reviewer: DrSnuggles (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
laughed out loud! funny.... :)
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
without a doubt the best fan fiction that has ever existed! <3 x x
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
absoulutely brilliant! this is the best fan fiction ever! x x
Reviewer: mtomlinson (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
OMFG! This was like the best I've ever read. This is why I love Fanfiction. You are so blessed and talented and congrats on your novel. I look forward to following you on your journey. Omg, I did not want this story to end!
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
truly amazing! I loved Bella's book she made for Edward it was beautiful x x
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Bella Cullen is a very nice touch! i like the POV switching
Reviewer: awoods123 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This is my second time reading this. I love this story!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
amazing! this is definitely helping me pass the afternoon!
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