Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
That was so scary when I thought people saw him! It was wonderful to see Bella take charge like that and keep her head together!
Reviewer: jo4twilight (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
The dance club ROCKED!! Alice and Bella's girl time is awesome!! : )
In the Aston Martin.....no words left!
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
OH! Heart.Be.Still
WoW!
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
There's nothing like checking off your list, eh? :)
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
i absolutely love Bella and Carlisle moments...they're so endearing!
NOW....Edward and Bella, well that's just jaw-dropping, need a cold shower...HOT!
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Oh for the love of all!
Edward in Bella's shower!
tsk, tsk you pantie stealing!*swoon*
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
'Oh! I am going to die.'
Go ahead put a check...check...& check!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Cold shower anyone??? Holy crow!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Loved the guy talk. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I think you worte this chapter concerning blood really well so it wasn't something gross but intimate. Also, I agree with Carlisle, it is amazing that she would even think of giving him that.
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
lmao!!!!!!!!!!!! Emmett is awesome!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I love long chapters! :) This chapter... yet again HOT! Them playing the piano together was beautiful, I loved it.
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
oh that was priceless! LMAO!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Ah, gifts again...Let just hope she gets a BIG gift from him!:)
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Oh, Edwards moan-in-the-mouth just melts me....
Alice is definitely someone to have on your side;)
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Wow! Edward getting that done to him... on his leather couch.... just wow.
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I'm lovin' the "things to-do- with Edward" *SIGH*
and as always, Alice is so flippin' hilarious!!!!
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
When it comes to Edward...we all need a cold shower!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
I'm so glad I'm reading this when the next chapter is already done! lol!
Reviewer: kellyk (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
ou write such cute ANs and I love the story. It is abolutely wonderful.
Thanks,
Kathy
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Aston Martin + Edward Cullen = HOT
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Don't get me wrong... I like when things get crossed off the list but I'm glad it slowed down for a minute. It's more Edward to need a moment to collect himself when dealing with his own needs and wants. Love the story! :)
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Holy Crow! Bella is one lucky lady!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
A wet Edward does deserve a review! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I like this confident Bella! I hope we get to read about Edwards reaction to her little present she left him! :)
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