Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
"Bad vampire" lol! Great chapter! So sad at the end though! I hope she gets to see Charlie again!
Reviewer: AliciaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
It took me over three days to read this and can I just say I loved every single moment of it!
Amazing writing.
All of it just wow.
Thank you so much for writing it!
xx
Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
O. M. G.
Reviewer: Alaska Rose (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Awww... that letter was very sweet. Very Edward. I can't believe Bella actually got a tattoo! And... right now, Em scares me... lol :D
Reviewer: Alaska Rose (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I'm really bad at leaving these reviews, but this is awesome.
Reviewer: jo4twilight (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I always wondered how her gift of blood would play out very awesomeness!!! Their gifts to each other and their love for each other and their family!! wonderful thank you so much!! I will keep you on my favorite authors just so I can catch more of your awesomeness as well! : )
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Loved the chapter! :)
Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
This is the first story I've read on the site. I only discovered SM's series about 6 weeks ago and have been all consumed by it since. I've read the first 20 chapters since yesterday, some mean feat considering everything else life required me to accomplish today. I've been waiting all day to be able to get back to it and I have to say, while I have liked every bit of the writing and content thus far, this chapter has me in tears! So touching. So true you've been to the story and the characters and adding a dimension that fills out the fiction completely. I wish it wasn't going to end so soon! You rock, LauraCullen.
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
LOL so freacking good :-P
Reviewer: Toniesme (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Awe just do it already!!! Haha XD I know it's coming! (pun intended)
Reviewer: Toniesme (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I love the interaction between all the characters! I tmakes me laugh and melt all at the same time!
Reviewer: Toniesme (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wow it just keeps getting better... I would buy Alice a present too! ;)
Reviewer: Alaska Rose (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
You are my first review! :D (Just had to say, 'cause I'm excited.)
I really like the story thus far, especially Alice's little heart-to-heart with Bella. I thought it was very realistic. Good job. :)
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I have to say I love this version of the wedding/ wedding night/ Jacobs gift more then the original story! I love SM but everything is just so perfect how you wrote it! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: lizzie__cullen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
totally forgot about jasper's gift!! lol I would feel unconfortable if I was in Bella's place, too... I really liked Bella & Alice's conversation about the lack of privacy and the acceptance... I think it's really beautiful and it shows their love for each other... really loved that part of the chapter....
Reviewer: lizzie__cullen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
soooooooo.... not completely sure if Alice saw... but knowing her she probably did!! and, off course she knew about the notebook... lol
and Edward should have been constipated... or maybe not... I wonder if he'll always react that way, when she's aroused... guess I'll have to click 'next' and find out...
Reviewer: lizzie__cullen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
hi! I was bored out of my mind and decided to look for a new fic to read... found yours and decided to give it a shot! lol I should warn you though... I'm not much of a reviewer... never know what to say and all...
so, after boring you about me... my opinion on the chapter... I liked it and I think it's well written...
have to tell you though, when Bella entered the shower, I started wandering if Alice saw her decision...lol
anyway, good first chapter!!
Reviewer: MrsLenaBlack (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OMJ! I can't stop reading this story!
Reviewer: MrsLenaBlack (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Lol! Has Alice looked at it???
Reviewer: MrsLenaBlack (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Wow! This was amazing! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Reviewer: jo4twilight (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Cried.. Cried... their love is so incredible! What a wonderful idea with the book she created for Edward! love it!
Reviewer: Amnotkim (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I loved this story! It was amazing! Thank you for writing it!
Reviewer: kellyk (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Bravo, Bravo, Bravo
I am not an editor but I have my opinion. You took the ball and ran with it.
In your own style and with grace (and grammer), these characters are so much better developed and real. You made them your own.
I abolutely LOVED this!
I look forward to following your career.
KathyK
Reviewer: hschafe1 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I just finished The List and it was AMAZING!!!!It couldn't have been any better! GREAT JOB!!!
Reviewer: Cullen1621 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I loved the talks she had with everyone, especially Alice and Jasper. I was laughing so hard when she realized Edward read her list.... and I like Edwards possessive fantasy! Hell yeah!
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