Reviewer: ChalleN75 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
All I can say is hot - Hot - HOT!!!
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Sex 8 times on the honeymoon. That doesn't seem like that much for 18 days. I'd think they'd be sexing everyday.
But i love the story. Love love love the sex scenes.
Reviewer: mdnghtsn (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
You are so right about the car.....
I love your story - This version makes so much more sense, not to mention it's way more fun to read..I'm so glad there aren't any vampires living in my house while I read this
Reviewer: dazzledby17 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Thanks a MILLION for such an entertaining story!!!! Definitely a favorite:)
Reviewer: ChalleN75 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Mike watching from the back of the store... priceless!!!
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
bow chica bowwow! woot for Edward!
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I loved the use of the blood! It covers areas we all wondered about in the books. It's a little gross w/the blood on the panties, but for a vampire,blood is blood,right? I love how turned on Edward got. I like when he called Bella in the a.m. and just said "Hello, Bella" I could hear the tone is his voice when I read it.
Reviewer: mrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I love the builfmd up...the love. that she has for him...
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
The tattoo has to be hidden where her dad wouldn't see it. I'm thinking on her hip, lower back or inside her thigh. Great writing. You are getting into the minds of the Twilight fans; what we wanted to read in the books!
Reviewer: mrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Your doing. An amazing job..
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That was amazing. I'm not even sure what to say. I love how Bella took control of Edward!
Reviewer: xtashax_123 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Ive already read this story loadsss. But I keep coming back to it. I'd definitely say it's in my top 3 stories on this site. Not entirely sure what rank yet... XD Pleasee.... write more? Another story perhaps? Even a one shot? I'll love you even more, and eternally be your slave. :):) <3
Reviewer: Fayebaby (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Just the right mixture of lust and romance!
Reviewer: mdnghtsn (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
awesome, don't ever stop writing.!!!!
I just finished the most tame reading of the same timeframe and this is so much better!
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I'm glad to see Edward can find his release! Stuff I wish was in the books.
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
That was hot!
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Hmmm, I never thought Bella's smell would change. And I like that it did though. And made Edward horny. I always wondered what the vampires did around women who have their periods.
Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I love this chapter b/c I often wondered what Bella did to relieve herself when Edward wouldn't touch her. Of course, I also wonder if Edward is finding his own release. And will the disucss this at some point in the story?
Reviewer: nadz (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Love it!!Edward can smell her...haha!!
Reviewer: nadz (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
i was laughing hard with this chapter...Bella's internal monologue was very indulgent!!haha!!
Reviewer: mrs_hale_18 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
What a cliff hanger...
Reviewer: mrs_hale_18 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Omg that was fantastic...lol i wish i could write that good.lol
Reviewer: mrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
After reading chapters like this...lets just say my kid is with his grandparents & my hubby thanks you.
Reviewer: mrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Well some one is getting use to his cock...it only took him 108 years & one human horney 18 yr old.
Reviewer: Toniesme (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I love the appetite they have!
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