Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
was kinda hoping for edward to come back to remind bella of something, or that he heard her heart racing or something to find her in there and to then be thinking HEEEY NOW!! lol but its good, I'm gonna keep reading :o)
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I sm reading this story for the second time. My mind keeps coming back to it as a definite favorite!!
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This one was so beautiful! I liked..no loved!!! all the touching moments! It was so just ugh-maze-ing! :]
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
It was beautiful. I still think the period thing is a little wierd, but I thought about that when I actually read the series, plus I'm not a vampire, so it makes sense and flows... no pun intended. ;]
Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Amazing, I may have cried a bit . . . and I'm definitely NOT a crier! Congrats on your book!
Reviewer: Jess-San (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Awesome
Reviewer: SmittenByaBrit (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
fucking awesomeness! dying here!
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Yay! Weekend soon!
Reviewer: SmittenByaBrit (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Guess I'm not getting any sleep. I'm an addict baby. :)
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The period thing grossed me out a little, probably because I feel like shit when I'm on my period, but oh well. I still LOVED the chapter, of course. :]
Reviewer: SmittenByaBrit (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Number ten SO deserves a review!
You could have at least bought me dinner first, geez. ;)
ABORT ABORT, lmfao!
I'm so rec'ing this to my other e~besties!
Reviewer: SmittenByaBrit (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This is some good shit! Gawwwdd! ;)
Reviewer: nisacullen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
i'd be damned, in the mist of smutty lemony goodness you made me cry!!!!
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Okay... This one for sure, was the best one ever! :] So. Effing. Hawt. :]
Reviewer: SmittenByaBrit (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I found your story on Random Acts of Rob. It was recommended there and I it sounded interesting. The first chapter was a great intro...going to read more.
Reviewer: RobsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
SO HAWT!!!!
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Ungh! Lol. Amazing! The best so far! Rating: A million and two!
Reviewer: rencamwom (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
FAN-TAS-TIC! enough said!!!!!!
Reviewer: Missy96 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
loved wet edward!
Reviewer: prattster666 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Excellent Story Laura!!! I have been absolutely engrossed for the passt 3 days!! am soooooooooooo pleased it was all written cos i dnt think i could have waited!! :O)
Cat x
Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
You're fantastic! I was having a shitty day and decided maybe fanfic could improve it! I was giggling like an idiot for an hour or so . . . my neighbours probably think I'm crazy. Ah well, THANKS!
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Shummy!
Reviewer: Maribeth (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Wow, that was so so great! It was very visual and yeah. :]
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Amazing story. Loved it. Took a sick day and stayed home in pjs just to finish this wonderful love story. Thanks so much for your talent.
Bev
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
There are no words.....beautiful.
Bev
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