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Reviewer: chocolatelover (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
...um actually im sorta liking the car idea.... : )
Author's Response: Yes, yes, the car is good. In general, I almost can't see a silver Volvo without thinking irrationally of this freaking fictional character!
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Love this story! So hot!! Can't wait for Edward to find the list. :)
Author's Response: THAT'S the moment I think many are anticipating, myself included!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I am completely loving this. Especially cause Edward isn't a complete prude in your story. :) Update SOON, please?
Author's Response: Thanks so much! More in a day or two at most!
Reviewer: peaches23 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
pleaseeee write more
Author's Response: Shouldn't be too long until another update!!!
Reviewer: professormoody (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Awesome! Look forward to your next chapters!
Author's Response: More soon! Thanks!
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wow. So, I was disappointed when Alice interupted their conversation last chapter, but this more than made up for it! This. Was. Hot. and sweet, too. I'm having a lot of fun reading this! Can't wait to see what she adds to the list!!!
Author's Response: Glad I redeemed Alice for you! Stay tuned for more list!
Author's Response: Glad I redeemed Alice for you! Stay tuned for more list!
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Okay that was frickin awesome!!! Way to go bella!!! :D Oh man i can't wait for the rest of the list to come true!
The black leather couch. That was a place i thought of too XD i remember seeing it in the movie and started reading this. I thought hey thats big enough to hold both of them XD lmao!!!
oh man i can't wait!! PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad people are appreciating a more assertive Bella and, of course, the idea of the leather couch!
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
woohoo, finally a step forward for them!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This is awesome! It's both hot and sweet. Beautiful scene against the tree, and I love the tenderness of her wanting to reciprocate, but waiting until he is ready. That is a lovely intimate moment. Also loved them carving into the tree. They both contributed and that was sweet.
I loved how Bella was very resistant to Alice's help. This is a great line, “Encouragement.” La, la, la. Conversation not happening. La, la, la. I resisted the urge to plug my fingers in my ears like a child. A little MadTV influence maybe?
But then Alice explains how they all accept the lack of privacy. I thought you stated this very well, "We do what we can to give one another privacy. But, though we try not to intrude, we also just accept the reality. And we do so in part because the things we do with our mates are natural. They’re a natural expression of the love we have for each other. And so there’s no judgment, no sideways glances, no embarrassment. There’s just acceptance. And love.”
I look forward to your updates! I am favoriting this now. :D
Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful review! How very encouraging! More will be on the way soon!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I LOVE THE LIST!!! I think it's an excellent, productive way to channel her frustration. I like how you have written this; it's very IC. I can entirely believe this happening in the books. I loved Edward's reaction to her smell, and that he asks her about it. Well done! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback on IC!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I love this. I think it's a great idea, and I like your Bella characterization. I look forward to more! Reading on... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the great feedback!
Reviewer: Asha47110 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Sweeeet!!! This chapter was hot, I'm glad Bella got something on her list accomplished! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, it feels good to cross something off a to-do list, doesn't it?
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I see what you mean now about Alice facilitating the good stuff! Awesome chapter, I had to fan myself off! And I loved the reference to "A Lesson in Release".
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!
Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wow, this just keeps getting better and better! Geez... that was intense. I love it. Please update soon! The last line about Alice made me laugh so much. She is quite an extraordinary sister, isn't she?
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, Alice does good here!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, Alice does good here!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Really great. I am loving this story. Of course I can't believe she only came up with 8 on her own, LOL LOL.
Author's Response: Never fear, she's got more ideas. Edward just interrupted her before she could really get on a roll!
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This was just the thing I needed. I have been reading too much wonderfully dark things. But I needed some air. You were perfect. I really enjoy the way you write. You're quite gifted. Not everyone can do the smutting without making it trite or stupid or the only one tracked narrow view to the whole plot. Even though it IS your plot, you manage to flesh out the details so that it's a story, not simply an attempt.
~Mia
Author's Response: Wow--great review! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
WOWOWOWOWOW!! This is pretty awesome!!! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Whoo-hoo! Well, one of the items on the list HAS to be her...um...pleasuring Edward. If not, poor Jasper is gonna explode (not to mention Edward, too!)
Author's Response: Come now, would I not see to Edward's satisfaction?
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
And I knew, in a big white house not too far away, somebody was squealing in delight. Hehe, awesome. Cant not wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Fantastic, as usual! I love Bella's crack to Emmett, too. Keep going...
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love Emmett. He's so easy to play with. Uh, wait, sorry, that's another story...!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I don't know about Edward, but I definitely need a VERY cold shower (and, um, what was the make of that shower head attachement? TEE HEE)
Get with the rest of the list!!!! If you run out of ideas..I have a few. Hmmmmmm
Author's Response: More list is on the way! Thanks!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Good lord, that was hot.
Author's Response: Thanks! And that was fully clothed!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Great story. Can't wait for more. Fantastic #1 on Bella's list.
Author's Response: Thanks! She'll be adding more items to her list shortly!
Reviewer: lrynmjv (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
One down.... I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Yes! One down, many more to go. And more yet to be added!
Reviewer: Mayfair1285 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
lol...i love Alice
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying her in this story! Thanks!
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