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Reviewer: PaigeDotCom (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
You MUST update this soon!
Author's Response: I will, I will! In the next day or two I promise!
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
WOOT that was great Edward must be about to explode, and I bet this going to help her alot where # 10 and 11 are concerned.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, poor Edward!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
This is about to get very interesting. I can't wait !!!!
Author's Response: I know! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Can't wait to see what he has planned for Bella. Continue...you're doing great.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OMFG, NOOOOOOO!
no, johnny, right before the good part! dear god i love this story. that was hilarious, i loved the double prespective with jasper finding them first. LOVELVOEOIT
Author's Response: You're too kind! Thanks!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Ooh, Bella is in so much trouble... her revenge paid off better than she could have imagined, making mush out of Edward without her even being present! Too bad she doesn't know that leaving her panties behind made number 13 come true. Now they've both relaxed in the shower, unfortunately not in the same one!
During a certain time of the month, she could actually get to tick off number 12, 14 and 17 in one go, provided of course Edward does't throw a thousand fits at the suggestion.
Absolutely loved this chapter, update soon please!
Author's Response: What a perceptive review. Hmmm... Thanks so much!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Gah. SO HOT! This is actually amazing keeeep it up :)
Reviewer: BlueBella (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I love it - Bella driving Edward to complet distraction. When is he going to start swinging from the chadalier - literally LOL
Author's Response: I know! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OH MY GOD YAY!!!! hehehe i can't wait to see how intense this "confrontation" is XD poor Jazz too although I would of said the same thing as Alice *snickers*
Yes and I believe i have noticed that most...Edward and Bella fans have at least SOME chapter with him either in the shower or coming out or just plain getting wet all over lol. In most of the BxE fics I've read so far...are we all waiting to see if the scene from Breaking Dawn will come to life? XD lol I SURE HOPE SO!
Great chapter very entertaining plz update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: flyonthewall13 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
i think its pretty mandatory that you UPDATEEE
Author's Response: Ha! Patience is a virtue! XD
Reviewer: lrynmjv (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Gah!, Intense. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
so now, both of them have released their tensions in the shower :P
Author's Response: Someone is very observant.
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
GAH
That's pretty much all I can say. :)
Author's Response: 'Nuf said.
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
i can't wait to see what he does to Bella now!!!!
oh, and thanks for some A/J action- loved it!!
Author's Response: You're very welcome--a little Jasper surprise there for ya!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I LOVED IT! But you ended it there?! *whimpering and sighing* Oh man, I cannot wait until the next chapter! This was awesome, but now I need more! :D
Oh yeah, I loved this in your opening comments -- "Please keep 'em comin' and I'll keep 'em comin' too (interpret how you will...)." I will hold you to that, you know! Like,seriously, the next chapter better be coming, and there better be coming... soon! ;)
Author's Response: HAAAAAAA! Thank you for feedback comments that made me laugh out loud!
Reviewer: ikecheer24 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I love this story! Especially when Edward says fuck! Ahhh so hott! Please update soon! =)
Author's Response: Yes, there's something about a dirty-talking Edward...thanks!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
:) hehe, I would be in Bella’s room when she awoke. Hehe!
Author's Response: Ominous, no? But in all the right ways!
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Thank you for the awesome dream I'm going to have tonight!
Author's Response: You are VERY welcome!
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
hott damn girl! that was vicious! LOVE HOW YOU INTEGRATED J/A INTO IT AS WELL. awesome!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the Jasper surprise!
Reviewer: ppinecone (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OME, I just discovered this story and it hot! Loved the JPOV treat, and Edward in the shower absolutely fixated on Bella's blue panties. *drool* I like how Bella is taking some initiative (with Alice's help of course) and can't wait to find out what happens when Edward gets to her house with her panties in his pocket! Squirming for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Awesome. Time for Edward to give Bella a little payback :)
Great story so far -- you've been very creative; not the typical wham-bam smut-dom fic. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been trying to work on ways to keep it from being too predictable!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
LMAO! I think Edward should do a Ricky Ricardo Impression when Bella wakes up.... you know -
"Beeel-la! You have some 'splainin' to do!"
That would get a laugh a blush out of her LOL!
Author's Response: I heard that in my mind too! Thanks!
Reviewer: jusfoolinaround (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Ungh! That chapter will give me all kinds of good dreams tonight.
And we got some Jasper/Alice lovin, too! :)
Many thanks!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Yes, Jasper kinda snuck up on me there but it worked!
Reviewer: sugypunk (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I really love this story! I can't wait to find out what he does to her when he gets there... ;-) Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: chocolatelover (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
i like horny edward i hope he stays. i also like how this story is creative with the smut. lots of "dry" smut out there (ha, no pun) and this story is not one of them. love it.
Author's Response: What's NOT to like about horny Edward? Thanks for the feedback!
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