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Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Holy God. I just found this story and I feel like, a) like hitting myself for missing so much before, and b) like I found the Holy Grail. Or won the World Series.
I think that expresses quite obviously how much I love everything so far. Yes?
That list is pure genius. I don't know how in the world Bella plans to do the blood thing but seriously, I heartily approve of everything on the list.
Author's Response: Yes, I got the picture. And wow! Glad to know you're in full support of the list!
Reviewer: sugypunk (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Wow... that was hot! Keep up the great work! I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter... after I have a cold shower...
Author's Response: Seems like a lot of folks were taking cold showers today. But, ya know, Bella especially enjoys her cold showers...
Reviewer: MisguidedAngel (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
OH that was HOT....nicely done!!!
I am off to take a very cold shower:-)
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks!
Reviewer: Cullen0128 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Wow that was really hot, that was an awesome update. I made an account just so i could review your story. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Wow--what a great compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
All I can say is: YUM! ;)
Oh, and I love how you ended it. With Bella and Edward, no matter how dirty it gtes, it's really all about the love, and the last two lines were absolutely beautiful. What can i say...I'm a sap whose mind is always in the gutter. :)
Author's Response: I agree completely--I'm glad you saw that.
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Whew! That was hot. Love when Edward lets his guard down a bit. Good stuff!!
Author's Response: Me too--thanks!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
This was perfect. I loved that he allowed himself to feel his desire, and fulfill her desire. AND finally made the connection that her need for the physical relationship was becasue it is an extension of the emotional one - the marriage.
Loved it...can't wait...you better be typing and not reading reviews! LOL
Dr Karen!
Author's Response: You made me laugh out loud--the reviews are addictive! I can't help myself! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
*fans self* Ooooo man.... gotta love Dominant Edward LOL.
Author's Response: That's the truth!
Reviewer: Razzlebedazzled (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
You managed to make that super hot scene one of the sweetest I've ever read.
Author's Response: Thanks--I was trying to strike that balance.
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Fuck, Edward Cullen is inside of me. That made me LMFAO, because it was so like "yess"but in a Edward Cullen fan way! And I loved it!. Seriously, aside from the insane hotness of this chapter, the inner thoughts of both Bella and Edward were so sincere and so blunt. Like someone real in that situation would really think. I loved it!! it was so hot.
Oh God, I can’t handle dominant Edward. Oh, but us, your readers can. So please make DominantEdward come out to play more!
PS: this chapter is total "quote" material!!
Author's Response: I love this review. Thanks for letting me know lines that especially caught your attention.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Such hotness and longing. Wow! That was so well done. I could really feel their tension and excitement of trying new ways to experience each other. Beautiful! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you saw all that in the chapter--exactly what I was aiming for!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
mmmmm.....
Author's Response: Indeed!
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
I feel like I should be saying so much to you right now, but I feel like my brain is completely fried after reading the hotness of this chapter. You are killing me. By the end of this story, I will be nothing but a pile of... Goo, wherever I am.
Author's Response: Well, in this case, goo is good!
Reviewer: STAR1633 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Wow. Disclaimer for chapter 6: "Sizzling hot chapter. Do not read at work. People will notice your heavy breathing and flushed face. You have been warned." ;D Amazing. Keep the steamy chapters coming!
Author's Response: Good disclaimer! My lawyers might agree with the need to add it! Ha!
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
That was Unbelivable just so very freakin hot and Way to go Bella she got #10 and a taste of 15 to go with it. I cant wait to see where this leads, Update soon you have to Update soon. And am I the only one who thinks Bella is going to have to buy lots of new underwear ? I just see Edward keeping this pair to and the next and the next..........
Author's Response: Yes, Edward definitely has his sights on those white panties. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Wow... that was hot. Hooray for number 10!! Bella is victorious once again!
10/10 for number 10!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Number 10 really does deserve a review! That was awesome.
Author's Response: I'm glad you agreed! Thanks!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
That. was. so. hot. -fans self-
I'm a bit breathless. And I read this at work. Oops.
More please, immediately.
Author's Response: Ah, yes, how many times have I made that mistake with some of the stories on this website?!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
GOOD GOD !!!!!! You just keep getting better and better. Don't you dare stop now. I am wanting to see you work through the whole list !!
Author's Response: I'm trying my, er, hardest! Thanks!
Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
10 for #10!!! Awesome!
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OOOOHHH! Wow, what a reaction :) Thank you for the update. Hot!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you!
Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
wow :) it is all i can think to say oh and where is my next chapter button
Author's Response: It will appear before too long!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Can't wait for THAT conversation ! ROFL
Author's Response: I know! Thanks!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Now I need a cold shower! Too hot! Off to read the next chapter (tee hee)
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Reviewer: bigred (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Amazing, i have had like the most stressful past few days and was so fucking happy when i logged on today and all my faves have been updated, and this was exsactly what i needed, a turned on wet edward!! best de stress pressie ever!
Brill i cant wait to find out what he does to get bella back!!
xx
Author's Response: So, so glad I could help!
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