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Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I really, really love this story! It's got awesome lemons, but it also has a lot of integrity (which, sadly, most mature-rated stories don't). You characterize Bella perfectly! Along with her love and sexual frustration, you also include all of her self-doubt and insecurity. Some other stories are so frustrating because they are sooo far-fetched that the only similarities between those stories and Twilight are the names of the characters. So thank you for writing such a great, HONEST fanfic! Can't wait to read more! (And I don't mind in the slightest that there isn't a lemon in every chapter. It's actually better that way, because as much as I love a great sex scene, the plot is more important).
Author's Response: I appreciate this review so very much. Thanks for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful and encouraging review!!!
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
LMAO...Edward took her white bikinis didnt he?
Author's Response: All signs point to yes.
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
So I take it #19 is the REAL reason Alice is insisting on the cell phone? Hehehe.... Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Some of you are quite observant! And just as crafty as Alice!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Well maybe you could cross off two in the next chapter. I'll keep my fingers crossed. Oh and you've inspired me to start my own list.
Author's Response: I just might do that!
And, interesting, your own list, eh?
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Naughty Edward stole her panties! Hee!
Author's Response: Naughty indeed!
Reviewer: STAR1633 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
So excited for B/E's weekend together. Update soon!
Author's Response: Should be interesting at the very least.
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Holy cow--Edward taking matters into his own hands. In the shower. Whew. I volunteer to release some of that pressure for him. LOL
Author's Response: GET IN LINE! HA!
Reviewer: AbbyHale (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Don't worry, we can't be too mad at you for not crossing something off the list. You left us with Edward in the shower and missing panties. GREAT JOB!!! I can't wait to read more, you do a wonderful job at keeping the updates coming, thanks.
Author's Response: I had to give y'all a little somethin' somethin'! Thanks!
Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Intersting turn of events why do i think a mr edward cullen may have her panties..
Author's Response: Ah, that Mr. Edward Cullen, he's a wily one!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I love the line, "Edward's in my shower....." I can just hear that going through her head!
Great story & great writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! That would certainly be my reaction. I would have to have my shower bronzed.
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Guh, that totally took me back to making out with boyfriends in cars and such. That was such a hot chapter! And I completely got the homage to A Lesson in Release--it's the first thing I thought of when I read that part!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Le sigh. I love this chapter. I also love that you balance sexytime with actual plot. I love smut as much as the next gal, but I also love a story to follow ;)
Something for the list:
Being tied up. Or tying Edward up.
It'd infuriate him. In the good way.
Author's Response: I like the way you think. I will take this under advisement. (!)
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
This is one of my favorite stories. I'll forgive you for not crossing anything off the list IF in your next chapter MULTIPLE things get crossed off. I love the phone sex addition by the way.
Author's Response: Ooh, demanding, aren't we? Well, I just might be able to accommodate you!
Reviewer: peaches23 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
please write more!! i'm hooked..and the waiting kills me, haha
Author's Response: I sure will and I won't even make you way too, too long!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Not a lot of people write from Jasper's Point of View - I liked it
Author's Response: Thanks! It was interesting to do!
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I'm okay with Bella not crossing off another thing from the list... After all, I do like the story aspect too! I can't wait to see where this goes though. I absolutely love this story.
And it's not much and I'll probably randomly work on more graphics, but I threw this together in a super short amount of time... Something about the center picture screamed out Bella & Edward (in this story) to me... So I thought I'd try.. This is take 2...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3100/3230440434_bc72dcc5b7_o.jpg
You don't have to use it of course.. Just thought I'd let you know that this story seriously inspires.
Author's Response: This is such a nice review--the banner image is super hot. I will definitely consider using it. Someone else also offered, so let me take a look and will decide soon. I truly, truly appreciate your effort though!
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I'm loving this fic so much! Can't wait for Bella to cross more numbers off the list. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
18,000 reads? Congratulations!! But, remember that doesn't account for the people who... ahem... maybe, read this more than once. And have always reviewed. Faithfully. So don't give up on us! (And keep the updates coming, I seriously cannot get enough of this story!!) :D
Author's Response: Since I have several favorites I read multiple times, I know that is probably happening, and I appreciate every read and every review. Thanks!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
This is amazing keep up the good work and update soon (with more lemons). :)
Author's Response: Will do!
Reviewer: wolvesnvamps (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
You must write more!! This was one of the best non-sex lemon stories I have ever read. Great job in building up the intensity of their desires and actions.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Great feedback!
Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
teehe he stole her underwear........
Author's Response: I know!
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I sort of like how this chapter had no "action"..... it leaves me craving more for next time!
....I hope their time alone together allows Bella to cross off some others on her list!! :-D
AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEE STORYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Good--I was hope that might happen.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Oh dear, it just figures that Edward's upbringing would rear its ugly head. This is one of those moments where it would have been great if he didn't remember quite so much from his human lifetime.
And where are those panties? Hmm... *grin* If Emmett were to ever find out that Edward (I'm guessing here) had gone and stolen Bella's underwear, he'll NEVER live it down. Seriously.
I wonder what Alice thinks of #17? I'm still stuck on that one for some reason, and how it will happen. I managed to think of something but it's, um, kind of gross. And involves the menstrual cycle. *ducks and runs for cover*
Thanks much for the update! So we haven't gotten to cross out anymore, but it really only makes logical sense to have to deal with Edward's issues and on the up side we got to add something good to the list!
Author's Response: All great points and ideas. Yours for #17 is of course one of the obvious ones....
Reviewer: Gattina (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Wheee I love this story!! (there I reviewed!!)
Author's Response: Perfect!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Considering you have over 200 reviews for seven chapters, I wouldn't be so review-greedy!!...........
I'M KIDDING! This is a great story, and that's why we review. I'm anxious to see whats coming up next... pretty please (with an Edward on top) don't make us wait too long! :)
Author's Response: :( me no greedy, me just need some lurv
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