Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I love your humor! The talk with Carlisle was priceless. Please forget this ever happened and let us never speak of it again. LOL!! Loved them dancing together and of course everything that happened in the car. Glad Edward has decided to have no more regrets. Great chapter! :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the conversation with Carlisle--it just popped into my head and I ran with it! Yes, Edward may be slowing coming around...
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OMG that was HOTT!! loved the dancing...and then...in the car...*fans face*
I want wait till your next update!
Author's Response: I know--I needed a cold shower by the end of writing it!
Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Very sweet, very dirty and done with only the absolutely necessary crude euphemisms for genetalia: I liked this one a lot! And it's nice that Bella and Edward are doing their part to support the sexy panty industry in these trying economic times.
Author's Response: Ha! Yes, I think the Cullens do their part in general! Especially Alice! But Edward and Bella are glad to help too!
Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
This story is so... well, for lack of better words, hott. I love the sexual chemistry between Bella and Edward, it's freaking amazing!
I can't wait for your updates!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Amazing! Edward, grinding on the dance floor, hickey, Aston Martin...guh.
And I want that green dress.
Author's Response: You said it all!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I love every chapter and this one was no exception. It was very cool what you did with the whole Carlisle/Bella conversation and the whole deal with the posters, that was so funny!! And also Bella dancing and being so forward and seductive... awesome. I really love when you portray her in a bold way (I'm so sick of "poor stupid-ackward-helpless Bella"). Please keep writing! :)
PS: BTW, The number 7 - Aston Martin scene after the club....... gooood!
Author's Response: Yeah, that's why I liked the Bella in the movie better than the Bella in the books. When she leads him up into the woods where they'll be all alone after knowing what he is I about fainted. So hot. Glad you enjoyed the conversation with Carlisle--just popped into my head and I ran with it!
Reviewer: professormoody (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I'm happily married..but dammit I want a Edward Cullen!
Author's Response: I am right there with ya.
Reviewer: schleprock (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
OMG you must update! i have got to know if edward took her panties!!! so hot(swoon,pant).
Author's Response: New chapter is here!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
DEFINITELY hot! But what about Edward...he needs release too, and to not feel guilty about that either.
Hmmm....maybe a little mutual oral appreciation???
Author's Response: Now don't you worry your pretty little head over Edward...
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
That was fUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!! She snaped him like a toothpick To freakin sweet You Rock. A Lot. Dont keep us waiting I cant wait to see what happens when they are home alone. Oh and did I miss it what is 21?
Author's Response: Yes she did. His little woe-is-me speech didn't deter her in the least! Glad you're enjoying. On #21--go back and reread what she was looking at right before....:)
Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Love it....this story is so fun and hot! Amazing job writing it! Can I be like Bella...MORE PLEASE! :-) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! More soon!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Totally hot! E is getting the hang of it :)
Author's Response: Yes he is!
Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
edward cullen and an aston martin.... there didn't even need to be sexin' for that to be ri-fucking-diculously hot.
Author's Response: Ha! Couldn't agree more!
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
SO Hott! And Bella was so confident. Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
That was hot. The Aston Martin included in this one would make James Bond proud.
Author's Response: No doubt!
Reviewer: Cullen0128 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
wow that was REALLY hot im glad he is over his guilt about them being together. Great update.
Author's Response: He's coming around slowly, I'd say!
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
AMAZING!!! Fantastic chapter.... thank you again for sharing your story!
~Sapphire
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
um.. I want my boyfriend now......... *sigh*
Author's Response: Hope you found him--sounds like he'll be a lucky man!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Post soon!!
Author's Response: Your wish, my command. Chapter 8 has been submitted and should post on Wednesday!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Perfect! What can I say?
Author's Response: That says it all! Thanks!
Reviewer: adorablecullens (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I admit that I find the idea of Edward's underwear fetish highly amusing. I guess as long he's not WEARING them ...
Again, huge compliments on this story. The pacing is just right - it's OK that nothing got crossed off the list. Someone else mentioned in their review that too many stories move way too fast and are so unrealistic, you have to laugh. This one is so not like that. It's right on target.
Looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: You're the second person to hope he won't crossdress! Ha! Thanks for the feedback on the story--I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Edwards CD (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This is such a great story Thank you :-) 2 comments though
a) can you update more quickly... PLEASE
b) is it possible to put the list in the notes section at the top of each chapter.... makes it easier to remember when you refer to numbers off the list than having to flick back chapters.
You have done a great job so far!
Author's Response: Hi, thanks! On updating--I'll try. I've been posting at a rate of about twice a week while also writing another story, but I know it's hard to wait too long between updates and stay as engaged in a story. Potentially good idea on the list in the author notes...thanks!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Aww. Poor, proper Edward.
Author's Response: Don't feel tooo bad for him!
Reviewer: Nim (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
i don't hate you. at all. i didn't even notice none of the things being crossed off because it was such a good chapter. it wasn't as if nothing happened in it. i really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next chapter.
:D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm feelin' the lurv!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I TOTALLY was kidding with the 'greedy' comment! Sarcasm and humor don't always convey properly in comments! I'm sorry, my dear. :( I absolutely adore this story, and you deserve every single comment you get!
Author's Response: Te nada, te nada! I knew it!
Author's Response: Te nada, te nada! I knew it!
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