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Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
i read this whole thing again. and you are my favorite.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!!!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Oh my, that was HOT! So right, the Aston Martin is so much sexier that the Volvo!
Bella's "talk" with Carlisle was hilarious, and kudos to her for the guts! Just thinking about discussing sex with your father in law - Ew!!
Edward made me snort with laughter, that boy is SO clueless! "Bella was a beautiful, loving, pure lady. She deserved romance and candlelight and sweet words of adoration. I had not treated her the way she deserved to be treated." "It struck me in that moment that she had absolutely no idea just how powerfully seductive she was." He really has no idea what Bella is REALLY dreaming of and how she wants to be treated.
Why do I have the feeling he might find her posters? And WHAT will he think then...
Author's Response: All good observations and questions! Stay tuned. (And yes, agree on the ew!)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
=D This story keeps getting better and better.
I can't wait until Bella gets more of her list done-even more than that, I can't wait until Edward catches a small glimpse of the list. I mean seriously, he's going to lose it when he sees how kinky Bella really is.
Post more please!
Author's Response: Glad you think so! Yes, the list would blow Edward's mind!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Wow. I am in desperate need of a long cold shower.... although those have a different meaning now after reading this story! Excellent. I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: I had that very thought--this story ruins the effectiveness of cold showers now for me!
Reviewer: ikecheer24 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
that. was. AWESOME.
... lol soooooo hot!!!! more please!!!! =)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! More in a day or two I promise!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Bella's internal dialogue while Edward is taking a shower is absolutely hilarious - and number 10 was seriously hot. I loved the way Edward reacted to Bella's dream, he won't know what hit him once they get down to serious business! Bella's newest additions to the list have potential, her imagination has a nice dirty twist!
DID EDWARD REALLY STEAL HER PANTIES... !?
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
The idea of them out at a club dancing really appeals to me - something normal they can do, when there is so much they have to be careful about. And any time Edward gets to publicly claim who Bella belongs to gets an A+ in my books!!
Yay for the Astin Martin! But of course, now Bella will just have to make it up to the poor, disappointed Volvo, muahaha....
Author's Response: Yes, not to worry. Bella hasn't forgotten about the Volvo by any means! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I've read them all and sorry for not reviewing before now! I'm a recent convert to the twilight books but they did leave me wishing there was more ;-) Having a bit of a thing for edward as I do I was only delighted to find this site! I'm thoroughly enjoying your work. Its my guilty pleasure! I await the next installments with baited breath. I'm only rating an 8 this time as I know theres even better to come
Author's Response: Ooh...high expectations, huh? I will try my best!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
-fans self- I got this update while I was at work and damn my curiosity... because I couldn't just leave it until I got home. Sexysexysexy.
Author's Response: Yes, work is a very dangerous place to read Twilighted fan fiction. I've made that mistake myself quite a few times!!!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OMFG!!!!!! Brain go bye-bye! LOL, Loved this chapter, hopefully what Emmett said sank into Edward's thick hard-headed skull. Now onto our count crossing off the list!
Bella’s To Do with or To Edward List
1) Against the tree by the meadow check
2) Feel his full weight on top of me check
3) French kiss check
4) See him naked check
5) Shower together
6) Against the cold tiles in the shower
7) In his car check
8) On our lab table
9) On his leather couch
10) I want him to come in my hand check
11) IN MY MOUTH
12) His mouth on me, there
13) Whatever it takes to get him to say FUCK again check
14) Get him to talk dirty in general check
15) Submit check
16) See him hunt
17) Have Edward taste my blood
18) Dominate
19) Phone sex
20) His mouth on my breasts, suckling me
21) On his Baby Grand Piano
Author's Response: You are toooo funny! "Brain go bye-bye"--I laughed out loud! The help with the tracking of the list remains *much* appreciated XD!
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
That was so hot.
Author's Response: Why, thank you!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I loved this chapter; from the way Bella enjoyed shopping, to the club, to the rubbing-upon in the Aston Martin... Mmm!
Author's Response: Yes, there was a little bit of everything, wasn't there?
Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Hooray for number 7! It wasn't in the Volvo, but the Aston Martin is good too. I suppose that counts. I loved this chapter. The whole mortifying experience with the poster board and Carlisle was brilliant and hilarious. That whole situation was so well-written that it was difficult to read, because it was so painful for Bella. Seriously, that was terrific. Great chapter once again!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Bella hasn't forgotten about the Volvo! Glad you liked the conversation with Carlisle--just popped into my head and I ran with it!
Reviewer: adorablecullens (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I shouted out loud with laughter - right in the middle of the office - when I read the first line of this chapter. And the scene with Carlisle - priceless. Like it isn't hard enough to talk about these things with your doctor or your parents. Imagine doing it with your future father-in-law! I give Bella huge props for courage.
The Aston Martin scene ... beyond hot. I definitely noticed Edward's fixation on her sucking on his finger, which leads me to believe the little panty thief has a few things on HIS list too!
And I loved it when Emmett called him out on hurting Bella's feelings. It's got to speak volumes when Emmett is more aware of women's feelings than Edward. But then again, this whole story is about Edward finally exploring that part of himself, isn't it? Love it, love it, love it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! Glad you enjoyed! Yes, as Alice said, there are things that Edward wants, he just has to give in and let himself want them.
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Holy shit... that was possibly the hottest thing ever. I'm just a little bit speechless but you are incredible! Update soon pleaseee :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
DAMN! Can't write much else right now.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
GOOD GOD !!!!!! This list just gets better and better. Please keep going. Your writing is excellent. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
such a speedy update!!!! you are perfectly perfect!!!
such hot car action! i couldn't love it more.
i would be sad that this chapter is over, but I'm sure their upcoming time alone will be interesting.....
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been sick so I've been using my time to write! Glad you enjoyed! Don't be sad--it's only Friday night!
Reviewer: STAR1633 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I was mortified right along with Bella when she was talking to Carlisle. I can only imagine what will happen when Edward finds those conversation cards...
And I LOVED jealous Edward on the dance floor. When is Bella going to confront him about the panties?? And what has he been doing with them.... ;D
Author's Response: Hang tight for the full revelation of the panties...and glad you enjoyed the conversation with Carlisle!!!
Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Um Wow! Really good!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I'm so glad Bella decided that the baby grand was deserving of a place on the list!
Author's Response: Yes--that's going to be a fun one...for everybody!
Reviewer: Miss West Virginia (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Wow. I loved the Alice/Jasper scene.
Author's Response: So glad you did!
Reviewer: McKenzieMac (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Number seven in the Aston Martin? Thats a high class orgasm!
Author's Response: No lie!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Not good to read before work. #7 in the Aston no less. I need to go take a cold shower. Heck, my husband needs to go take a cold shower just thinking about an Aston :)
And, here's to #21 being added to the list -- I always hated the tag line for "Pretty Woman" -- this generations Cinderella story -- I mean, really? A hooker mets her prince charming -- this is what we should feel all romantic and dream about?. Now E&B on the piano, that's another story...
Author's Response: Ha! Glad you enjoyed!
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