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Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Woman, you kill me. In a good way. There were so many fab moments in this chapter that I can't even begin to comment on them.
I am very excited about Bella's new game and even MORE excited about Edward's secret dare that hopefully is coming next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed! Yes, there are many interesting things on the horizon!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Soooo Good!!! I like them playing games... That shower scene was so erotic, and I couldn't help but to think what would be in Edward's list in addition to the kitchen and the piano...(gettin' the hint?) And DOMINANTBella is as good as DOMINANTEdward I can see. Let's hear some whips!!
Author's Response: Yes, the idea of what would be on EDWARD's list is very interesting indeed, isn't it. If you all are good you just MIGHT get a hint of that at some point. Wait--what? Don't tell anyone I said that.
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Holy hell, you're an evil genius. These chapters get better and better. If I knew how to spell a cat call I would enter it here -----> . Submissive Edward? I'm going to have to brace myself. Thanks for another awesome update. Thanks! Oh and good luck with your contest.
Christina
Author's Response: Yes, submissive Edward will be very interesting. If you think about the whole series, he is always in control of their relationship. Possible only exception is when she decides to have the baby without discussing it with him and doing it almost in spite of him. So this will be something new and probably very HARD for him to do.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
*sighs* Gah! Brain go bye-bye again thanks to this chapter. Here's an update on the list.
Bella’s To Do with or To Edward List
1) Against the tree by the meadow
2) Feel his full weight on top of me
3) French kiss
4) See him naked
5) Shower together
6) Against the cold tiles in the shower
7) In his car
8) On our lab table
9) On his leather couch
10) I want him to come in my hand
11) IN MY MOUTH
12) His mouth on me, there
13) Whatever it takes to get him to say FUCK again
14) Get him to talk dirty in general
15) Submit
16) See him hunt
17) Have Edward taste my blood
18) Dominate (coming up *wink, wink*)
19) Phone sex
20) His mouth on my breasts, suckling me
21) On his Baby Grand Piano
Author's Response: 22) Hickey
23) Outside during a thunderstorm
Hope your brain returns soon! Ha!
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Oh Fuck here comes 18 and 9, That was so awesome I need a cold shower realy cold maybe I should just go outside and lay in the snow. wait Dancing, In front of the Fire, Outside in a Storm........ in the snow? hmm
Ok ok clam down
You really need to update asap cause waiting on this could seriously cause blood presure problems
Author's Response: AT LEAST 18 and 9. That's all I'm saying.
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
I hate for that cliffhanger. And by hate, I mean love-Love-LOVE you. A vision of wet!Edward made me go all ddklfjdsoiuj and I love the living room scenarios and all. But. My absolute favorite part of this chapter?
Bella's last "game" and Edward not answering then Bella commanding him to go to the leather couch. I do believe my brain short-circuited. It's just something that always always gets me. And the candle, the towels, and the teaspoon brought images to my head that I seriously should not be having at work.
Now... I'm going to catch my breath back and eat my cupcake from Crumbs in an effort to find some contentment at this point in time.
PS - Good luck with the Amazon contest!
Author's Response: I loved this review! Yes, when he didn't respond to her it made my heart stop, and I was the one thinking this s**t up!!!!!!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Hmmm.....methinks they're playing with fire in more ways than one!!!
Can't wait to see what comes next (pun intended...). Update soon!
Author's Response: You might be right! ha!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
No. No no no no no no no. I refuse to believe that you left it there. Well, okay, it's your story, you can really do whatever you want. I will sit and wait patiently like Edward by his leather couch.
I read this at work again. Yowzers. -fans self- If you get a second, could you send Jasper to my shower? Kthanks.
Author's Response: Mwuhahaha! Told you you guys were going to hate me. But couldn't be avoided! Well, maybe it could have, but this way's more fun! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Great update! Good luck with your novel.
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Evil CRUEL cliffhanger.
I did catch all 3...although I kind of wish that Edward had lost his control a little bit more. Edward Cullen dirty talking was FABULOUS. Bella is a lucky lucky girl.
Good luck on your contest =] I hope you win!!!
Author's Response: Ducks behind couch...Glad you enjoyed! Edward was trying very HARD to be good. But, his control can't last forever...
Reviewer: bigred (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
phwoar all i can say is wowsa that was hot!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: CullenDreamer (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I love you. Marry me. Wait, I mean I love this fic! Favorite so far was the meadow and the tree. Unnnggghhh. Looking forward to Edward dominating, not so much to Bella - she's always aggressive in almost every fic out there, so meh. But Edward? Oh yeah. Can't wait to see how you write it. Keep up the awesome work and update ASAP!!!!
Author's Response: I submitted the next chapter this evening and it should be up tonight or tomorrow. Glad you're enjoying.
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Ahh, the Aston Martin... nice!
Author's Response: Yessiree!
Reviewer: sarabear (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I like how you are giving Bella more confidence in herself. And WOW for the dancing and the scene in the car. Thanks! :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
wow. very hot
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Lillie Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Loved the last line. Beautiful.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
WOW about the last part of the chapter. It was just HOT, the details...Can wait to read more. The poster board talk with Carlisle was sweet. I could picture her blushing the whole time. Every young women should be educated.
Suggestion for the list- Hot tub, everyone should try it at least once :)
Author's Response: Great suggestions. Bella might very well like that!
Reviewer: Lillie Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Lillie Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
That was f'n hot! I heard about your story from a review where they said you had mentioned mine (Thank you!) and I'm so glad I checked it out...this is really good! ~Lillie
Author's Response: Ah, Mistress of LIR! Welcome, welcome! And many thanks!
Reviewer: KelBellaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Best. Chapter. Ever. Ready for more. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. More soon!
Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
You have reduced my vocabulary to the point that all I can say is, "Dude. Dude, man, dude. Wow."
Author's Response: Ha! You sound like Emmett!
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Agh!!!!!! That was so fuckin hot. I can't wait to see what is next on the list. I hope Bella gets to do something to Edward...Maybe a little domination or something.
Author's Response: Yes--the weekend is young!
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I loved this latest chapter, some nice grinding action! Haha please update soon, I can't get enough!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
i love you. enough said. hehe
Author's Response: Aw, shucks! Right back at ya!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
She sniffed, “My little girl is growing up and learning how to shop.” I reached out to smack her arm but she jumped out of my reach easily. “Wench!”
Hehe love that part
And damn, this is so not fair i really want a vimpire boyfriend who can do that to me. Wow did i just write that?
Author's Response: Glad you liked Alice's little shopping commentary! I think we all want what you want. Write it proudly.
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