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Reviewer: krosson247 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Oh my God you're right...I hate you! That was an evil cliffhanger...I hope the lull in updating passes quickly!
Author's Response: At least I'm honest? Come on, you know you love me!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Great chapter! the house all to themselves?? let's get down to business!
Author's Response: Yeah baby.
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
I am not sure how in depth the reviews are from other people---I am relatively new to this site and reviewing so I am not so sure how it all works---but I am loving this story----can't read it fast enough. You are very talented.
Author's Response: Hi Sig--your review is great! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: sizzlinghotcat (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
LOVED IT CAN"T WAIT TIL THE NEXT ONE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Author's Response: Not to worry--I won't keep y'all waiting tooo long!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Great update. LOVE the addition of the piano, I can't believe that was missed off the original list. This story just keeps getting hotter.
Good Luck with the novel!
Author's Response: Yes--just seems so obvious, doesn't it??? Thanks!
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
That is a great list!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This story is pretty hot! It is really well written. I am also enjoying Alice---she is hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks for that feedback!
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
OMG! That was awesome. I'm honestly speechless...I can't wait for the rest. wow
Author's Response: So glad!
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I am really enjoying this---so far it is a fun read!
Author's Response: Thanks--glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Hehe, i love it!! Cant wait for more, lol i couldn't help but giggle when she said number 2 out loud.
Author's Response: Glad you're liking
Reviewer: krissyp8 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Holy hell, that was hot!! Can't wait for the next chapter. You are truly gifted.
Author's Response: Thanks so very much!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Best of luck with your submission to Amazon, and thankyou for this great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, and glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Go Bella! I am impressed with her ingenuity. Seriously, she is pulling out all the stops here. The shower in particular was sheer win. And now the dominating thing? With candle wax on Edward? Oh yeah, he's going to LOOOOOOOOVE that.
Author's Response: Bella has a very creative mind.
Reviewer: Razzlebedazzled (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
ahhhh!!! Is Bella going to dominate?
Author's Response: You'll have to be patient for a few days to find out!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Um, so not only do I want to make out up against a tree, but I also want to shower with my underwear on and wear a man's dress shirt. Ugh, where is a Cullen man when I need one?!
Great job...and that is one HELL of a cliff-hanger.
Author's Response: I know. The Cullens not being real is a crime against humanity. Truly.
Reviewer: Arafinn (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Yeeaaah. Holy teaser! I should know better than to read your work when I'm at....well...work! Simply amazing and sooo frustrating all at the same time.
Author's Response: Ha! Sorry if you got a little worked up at...well...work!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Oh, no! The chapter ended :-0
DomBella, the leather couch, the candle. My imagination is running amok -- but I'm sure the next chapter will be even better than what's going through my head right now.
I squealed out loud when he put her on the piano (so close!).
Thunderstorm on the list will be hot!!!
Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: It almost sounds like clue. Bella, on the leather couch, with a candle. Ha! Yes, I knew you lovies would get all worked about the near-miss with the piano.
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Nooooo! I must have more! I need to know what this devious, little Bella is up to.
Author's Response: And more you will have. Soon.
Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Bella goes all dominatrix! I didn't think that would come to fruition for quite awhile. I'm curious to see how that works out when Edward is still so uptight. I see melted candle wax in his future lol. Great chapter! Although I hope we get to see a Dominant Edward soon. We already got a taste of him when he helped Bella please herself. I hope we see him again when he's less..inhibited. :)
Author's Response: All will be revealed in due time, not to worry!!!
Reviewer: Arafinn (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Oh. My. Gawd.
*faint*
Brilliant, simply brilliant.
Author's Response: Why thank you!
Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
AHHHH. I know you warned us about the cliffhanger, but this is just unbearable! Update soon! And good luck with the Amazon contest. If your original writing is anywhere as good as your fanfiction, you deserve an agent instantly.
Author's Response: I promise--I will update as soon as I can. I've already written part of the chapter and it is gnawing at my attention, but I really need to TRY to focus on other things for a bit! Appreciate the feedback!
Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Okay, that was awesome! I love that they are both very bold and very nervous at the same time. It's like they ask for what they want, but if they get it - even a little bit - they kind of panic and don't know what to do next. So awesome! My favorite line was: !#?&%!?
which may not count, exactly, but it was awesome.
Good luck with your novel!!
Author's Response: No, I think !#?&%!? counts as a line! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
I can't review properly my body is in a puddle on the floor.
Author's Response: Well if THAT chapter caused you to puddle, you should have a towel handy for next chapter. Just saying.
Reviewer: ImCuteLoveMe (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
...
*takes moment to compose herself*
Wow. I am sad to say that I just discovered this story. And now I'm even sadder that I've read all that's available.
Need. More. Now please!
Author's Response: Yay! A new reader! Stay tuned--I promise I won't make you guys wait tooo long!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
THis chapter was so good that I don't even know where to start with the compliments! I loved the truth game & how it started out by revealing their feelings and insecurities (its always nice to be reminded that Edward is insecure) & built into their shared desires.
I'm dying to know what Bella is up to. Between your imagination & Bella's newfound confidence, Edward doesn't stand a chance!
Author's Response: Ha! No, no he doesn't!
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