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Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Best lemon Ive ever read.
Author's Response: That's huge! Thanks!
Reviewer: saritat (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Now that was just bleeding hot!! Sorry for such a boring and simple review but it really was. Made me want to jump someone's bones :D
Author's Response: Ooh, "bleeding hot" is quite a visual. I like it!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
WoW, that was hot. I loved it and obviously Edward loved it, lol. Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you were both satisfied!
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
oh my lord!!!!! this was by far my favorite chapter.
i cannot wait until number 12. you are too perfect!!!
Author's Response: Everyone seems very sure number 12 is coming next! Ha!
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
This story is freakin awesome----besides the obvious---I really loved the idea of the momento box --- it brought back a little bit of the innocence of the characters
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment on the memento box--it's such a small thing in the chapter but I really loved it too!
Reviewer: Lillie Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
My favorite chapter yet! Incredible to see Edward not only lose control, but also realize that Bella is not just a 'lady' but a woman. Fabulous!
Author's Response: Mistress Lillie! Thanks so much for the great review!
Reviewer: chocolatelover (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
wow - jesus chr*st!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Indeed.
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
AWESOME!!! Love it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad!
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I love this chapter!!! I can't believe edward actually let her do it .... I like risky edward :) LOL ... I can only imagine that she's gonna get it twice as bed now...lol oops..minds in the gutter now ...lol.. I mean bad 0:)
Author's Response: I don't think Edward can believe he let her do it either. But she had him wound so tight he didn't know if he was going or, erm, coming.!
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
This chapter was smokin'! I really liked how Bella proved to Edward that he doesn't need to put her on a pedestal like that. I think she made her point!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: MandaPanda0905 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Three-fer? That was like a six-fer
4)See him naked
9) On him leather couch
11)In my mouth
13)say fuck again
14)talk dirty in general
18)dominate
All around great chapter! My favorite so far.
Author's Response: How very right you are, of course, I was referring to NEWLY accomplished list items (9, 11, 18)!!! XD
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Shit, shit and another shit. Can I PLEASE take Edward home with me now. He can practice his turn with me so that he doesn't hurt Bella. Fan-fucking-tastic chapter.
Author's Response: How very selfless of you!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Oh dear lord. Is it hot in here? ;)
I think Miss Bella is in serious trouble when Mr. Edward has his turn (#12, anyone?). That was beyond fantastic. I LOVED the box of treasures he has in the closet (nice touch with the onion root lab paper).
Thank you Mistress Laura, can we have another?!?
Author's Response: Who gave you permission to speak to me? That'll be the prone position on Edward's leather couch, for you.
Oh, never mind, yes, speak to me, speak to me, please do review!
Glad you liked the treasure box--I wondered if anyone would comment on it and I thought it was so sweet.
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I'm sorry. Please excuse my last review. It seems I was far too incoherent to fully comprehend the English language in order to leave you my thoughts. I may be a little better now.
My heart is still pounding from reading this. Once again, I couldn't wait and read it while at work so now I'm all, well, I'm probably all flushed and have darty eyes as I hope that no one walks into my office to ask why I look so guilty. Because I may as well be fanning myself from the hotness that was this chapter. Because it was. Hot.
But since you know that I am a HUGE fan of your skills at writing teh sex and teh hotness, I have to say... I love the inclusion of Bella's promises at the beginning. I thought it was a beautiful touch - for both of them - and it made it seem more plausible then just, "Hey, I dominate, you submit, PARTY TIME!" And I really liked Edward's revelation about trusting her. I love that you have these pieces that make this more than just a PWP.
<3s
Author's Response: Puh-lease! I loved both reviews equally!!! I love your "darty eyes" comment--there might be a prescription for that! Glad you enjoyed the emo part too--I can't think of any other way to do this any justice without it, because there's no way that they don't have to also be working through the emotional side of this process of discovery. Thanks mucho!
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
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Author's Response: Why thank you very much. You're so kind!
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
HOT DAM..........
Author's Response: heeeee!
Reviewer: mjwpg (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Okay, wow, I probably shouldn't have read this last chapter at work I'm a little flushed, lol. Can't wait for Edwards turn!
Author's Response: Yes, his turn will be interesting, won't it???
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Whew! Off to have a ciggy! That was HOT!!!!
Author's Response: Enjoy!
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
On a tree, and in a car...in the rain and on a plane? Maybe? I swear this list could be a really dirty dr suess bedtime story.
lets hear it for edward letting loose...in more ways than one.
great update!
Author's Response: The beginning of your review sounds like a Dr. Seuss rhyme! HAAAA! I wrote that before reading your second line. Dirty minds think alike apparently!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
whoa...that was...with the edward and the talking dirty
I have no coherant thoughts, sorry!
Author's Response: Yes, the Edward and the dirty talking always does me in too. Seriously.
Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Holy crap. She'd only gotten through the rules and I was holding my breath. I feel like I should be taking notes. There are so many things she's doing that I want to try... What a seductress she's turned out to be!
"I didn’t know how much more of this I would be able to take before I threw her down and helped her find God." Yes! That's hot!
And anything to get Edward to say "fuck." I swear my knees go a little weak every time.
What was that? #4, 9, 11, 13, 14, 18, AND 22? WOW. I'm jealous of Bella right now.
Author's Response: Glad you were worked up so early in the story!!!! Yes, it was a very good night for Bella's list!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Holy heck, that was hot! I love dominate Bella!!
Author's Response: So does Edward!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
;ha;sdfiy;8o3hd. That's my brain on this story.
Here I go, reading it at work again. I just can't resist an update long enough to wait until I get home.
Anyway, this was incredible. Mind-blowing. Smuttastic. I... can't even say what I want to say because I'm still thinking about that incredible chapter. Oh! I remember! While the whole thing was hot, I think my favorite part was Bella making those promises to Edward. It was such a touching moment because she was all, "Grr, I'm gonna make you scream, but I'm also going to respect your boundaries. Kinda." Lovely.
Dear Edward, please, please, please take your night. Please.
Author's Response: I always love your reviews! I'd say I'm sorry I'm making your brain misfire like that, but I'm really not. Everyone seems QUITE anxious for Edward's turn now, aren't they??
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Brain go Bye-Bye...... for the 3rd time!
Jesus! Damn girl, Loved it! And I noticed you've taken to putting the list at the end of the last few chapters.... You're welcome! LOL.
And do I sense number 12 about to be fulfilled?
Author's Response: Yes, the list is good. And you were a big help with that! Thanks for reviewing AGAIN!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
This was the best
PERFECT
I loved it
Author's Response: Blushes. Thanks so much!
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