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Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
fabulous. i think this is my new favorite fic. omg. i love u!! lol.
Reviewer: STAR1633 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Oh sweet Jesus... I was actually panting as I was reading this! Best chapter by far. I was a little disappointed when they stopped playing truth/dare earlier, but this game was a way better idea. Everyone should play it everyday!
Im glad we found Bella's panties and I think it's great that Bella is starting a collection of her own. What's up next? Edward's turn? I'm way excited for #19 phone sex too. Keep going!
Author's Response: Don't forget, Edward still has his dare to do yet (remember he was going to take his turn after the shower but then her stomach growled and he insisted on dinner). That game isn't necessarily over yet!
Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
SO. FUCKING. HOT.
*takes a minute to take a breath*
Loved dominant Bella- you wrote her well, still in character. Loved Edward's new vocabulary, and the changing points of view...can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Yes, do breathe! Glad you found her still in character!
Reviewer: il_suo_cantante (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
i was literally salivating through his entire chapter; felt like edward and his venom. so hot. christ jesus.
can't wait for edward's turn!
Author's Response: Yes, Edward's turn WILL be fun, won't it?
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Holy crap!!! more please...
Author's Response: More soon, I promise!
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
you have outdone yourself on this chapter! OMG that was...there are no words. I love a dominant Bella, and apparently so does Edward ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Unbelievably hot. Seriously. I need to go do really bad things to my husband now thankyouverymuch. Wow.
The image of Edward on his knees is probably the sexiest thing EVER.
Author's Response: Sounds like hubby is about to be a lucky man! Yes, Edward, knees, all good.
Reviewer: wren (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
mmm very nice :) as always!
Author's Response: Why thank you!
Reviewer: PatzRob (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
It just occured to me that this fic will end and when that day comes i will bawl like a frickin baby! I dont think I could handle it ok? now mull that over will ya :)
Author's Response: Don't start mourning yet! I started out thinking this was just going to be a couple chapters and this beast seems to be taking on a life of its own!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I'll have you know I read all ten chapters in one sitting. Your story is that good.
:)
Books
Author's Response: That's awesome! Thanks!
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Very, ultra, uber hot! Wow! And you've done a very good job in making Edward walk that delicate line between IC and OOC Although at first reading this seems very OOC, you have made it acceptable, even beginning at the mindset of the books. Well Done!
Author's Response: Thanks for the in-character comments. Obviously, SM's Edward would never consider this. But hopefully I painted this that she had him so tightly wound by the time she broached the deed that he couldn't stop him. Plus it's always been a matter of trusting himself for Edward. And hopefully all these experiences are teaching him that, in fact, he can.
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
W-O-W!!!! This is my favorite chapter so far! Write more soon! I love that your Edward and Bella are so true to the books. I love that Edward allowed Bella to be in control this time around- totally hot!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked, and thanks for the in-character comments!
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
W-O-W!!!! This is my favorite chapter so far! Write more soon! I love that your Edward and Bella are so true to the books. I love that Edward allowed Bella to be in control this time around- totally hot!
Reviewer: Weredragon (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Damn that has to be one of the hottest descriptions of a blow job I've ever read! And I've read literally thousands of the things. Of course it involves Edward so it's difficult to go wrong but still. Very nice. ;)
And Bad Ass Domminant Bella commanding her vampire? Bra-fucking-vo. No joke that was well done.
*Applauds*
Author's Response: Glad you thought so. I am hoping folks didn't find it to be too drug out but it seems like all their firsts take on a nearly epic quality given the safety issues involved...
Reviewer: bigred (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
now what can i say that i havent said before, AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME, and good on bella being all domineering! ace long chapter and very speedy for a busy lass, all the best with the novel ur writing is amazing and i for 1 would read anything you wrote!
xx
Author's Response: Being sick for the third week in a row has helped clear my calendar some...but thanks for that. I got my novel submitted to the contest and now I just have to wait and see if I make it through the first round of judging!
Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
"Oh God, there’s no way I’m going to make it through this without imploding. Oh, but what a way to go!" I couldn't have said it better myself. This story is going to make me implode, but man, what a way to go, indeed! More please!
Author's Response: Yeah, I might have been channeling my own thoughts there too!
Reviewer: violin3679 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I'm sorry...did you say something? I couldn't hear you over the cold shower.
Author's Response: Heeeee!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
=D A fantastic and amazing chapter.
You really outdid yourself. I loooooovveeed it.
hehe. I am quite jealous of Bella now.
Author's Response: Aw shucks! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Oh Bella is good. Real good. I'm so impressed with her right now... And to think she's only going to get better when she's a vampire... *grin*
You are all sorts of awesome.
Author's Response: Yes, I know, can you imagine how these games might go then????
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
review earned! omg, this is great. really great. i want you to adopt me and make this my bedtime story.
Author's Response: Aw, isn't that sweet! I'd be happy to tell you bedtime stories like these! But what that REALLY help you SLEEP????
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Best lemon Ive ever read.
Author's Response: NO WAY! THAT'S SAYING SOMETHING ON THIS SITE!
Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
WOW,WOw, Wow, wow....that could be the hottest thing I've ever read. LOVED IT!!! I can not wait to see what's next! More, More, More, please. :-)
Author's Response: Phew--so glad you liked!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Ican’ttakethisIcan’ttakethisIcan’ttakethis! Post other chapter soon. I knew what was going to happen with the candle but marking him with the B was creative. i can't wait to see how Bella gets Edward to "play" on the lab table. But from his momentos he seems to have fond memories from science class. So how many chapters before Edward gets to be in charge :)The best line in this chapters was...before I threw her down and helped her find God..Sign me up for that sunday school class :)
Author's Response: Yeah, you and me both! So glad you liked! And my mouth is zipped tight on what's happening when!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Hot Damn! Okay, not only was this the longest chapter (which automatically means you rock), but it was definitely the best chapter to date! I like Edward’s thoughts at the end, when he realizes that Bella may not be as innocent and pure as he imagined, but that it is in no means a problem! Loved it...she’s gonna have to start adding to the list again – at this rate she’ll have nothing left!
Author's Response: Ooh--liked that one best didya? And, not to worry, the list remains a work in progress!
Reviewer: jasperskiki (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I think that edward saying fuck is quite possibly the hottest thing i've ever experienced.
You rock.
And since iforgot to mention it in my last review..Mistress Lillie sent me.
And i am so glad she did.
Author's Response: Yeah, I gotta agree with that. And thanks for letting me know--Lillie has been too kind to me!
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