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Reviewer: Razzlebedazzled (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Bella was a bamf!
Author's Response: Yes she was!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Ok, I made the very big mistake of reading this AT WORK!!!
HOLY CRAP! That was the hottest yet! DAMN! I really should've waited 'til I got home, but MAN! I just couldn't handle the suspense!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR "EDWARD'S TURN"!!!! WOO-HOO!!!!
Author's Response: Work is always dangerous! Glad you enjoyed though!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I didn’t know how much more of this I would be able to take before I threw her down and helped her find God
BEST. LINE. EVER.
I want to have all of your stuff printed, so that I can read it over and over again - in bed!
Author's Response: Yes, and don't think he's forgotten about this particular desire despite the fact he let her have her way at the end of the night...
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
UNF!!! HOLY HELL!!!
Author's Response: I'll take it by that you liked it! XD
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
wow, you go, bella! a 3-pointer!
Author's Response: Indeed!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
HOLY SHIT!! That was amazing!! I need to leave work now, go home and not leave my bedroom for HOURS! LOL!!
Author's Response: Yes, work is a VERY dangerous place to read Twilight fanfic, isn't it???
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
speechless...
do you think if I showed this to himself he'd get the hint? I live in hope ;-)
awaiting with baited breath the next installment! don't take too long
and I thought I was old enough to know better...obviously not!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
speechless...
do you think if I showed this to himself he'd get the hint? I live in hope ;-)
awaiting with baited breath the next installment! don't take too long
and I thought I was old enough to know better...obviously not!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
This chapter is TRULY BAD ASS!!!!! I loved it! More more more!!!1
Author's Response: SO glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
oooooo.....Thanks for the list...i couldnt remember them all. I really liked this chapter....especially what edward was thinking at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
You are hilarious. Bella is hilarious. Of course she would make a freakin list. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: You made me smile!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I'm in love with your story
Author's Response: Aw shucks! Thanks!
Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Damn damn DAMN WHAT THE HELL????? YOU WRITE THIS AND NOW I HAVE TO TRY AND SLEEP??? There isnt enough cold water in the artic to calm down after this I am going to go over to a "friends" at 2 in the AM and get some help all becuase of this fic. Luckly I dont have to be anywhere till 3 tomorrow. That was amayzing WAY TO GO BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!
Every chapter just keeps getting better I cant wait till Edward gets to play
Update soon very soon
Author's Response: Yeah, um, I'd say I'm sorry but if you have a friend that could help you out that way than I am SO NOT sorry, I am jealous!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Woah, cold shower needed...
Wow.
Author's Response: Just be careful, in Bella's world a cold shower is NOT particularly calming!
Author's Response: Just be careful, in Bella's world a cold shower is NOT particularly calming!
Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Dear God! Hottest chapter ever! I was wondering how you were going to pull off the whole Bella/dominatrix thing without them actually having sex, and you couldn't have done a better job! Usually I prefer a dominant Edward in stories of that nature, but that's one of the hottest things I've ever read! I loved the candle wax, very nice touch! I can't WAIT until it's Edward's turn!! I hope that will be next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, she didn't have any illusions that sex was happening; her major goal was that she was going to get to reciprocate since she had not had the opportunity to do so after the Aston Martin incident.
Reviewer: AbbyHale (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Once again, WOW!!!!!! I tried to pick out my favorite part(s) to review but it was too hard, it was all amazing. I love your writing, please continue to update!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked!
Reviewer: blazefury (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Wooooohoooo, Dom!Bella, damn that was sexy!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That was quite an impressive showing. I have to um... take a shower or something. bye.
Author's Response: Ha! If I might make a recommendation on behalf of Bella: she finds that cold ones can be quite...invigorating!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
SOOOO FUCKING GOOD!! this chapter was totally amazing! and good idea the ToDo list at the end of the chapter. BadAssBella rocks so hard!!
Author's Response: THANKS SO GOOD!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
So incredibly HOTTT! Bella's game is my new fantasy...
Author's Response: And one so easily implemented!
Reviewer: krosson247 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That. Was. Fucking. HOT. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Go Bella!!! I'm so proud of her for doing this! Proud of Edward for trusting her and going along with it, too. Also, bloody hot ;)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
This was so freaking good. So Hot. I LOVE when Edward says Fuck. I can literally feel it. Excellent chapter. I am thinking about this story all of the time..... great job. More, please.
Author's Response: Wow--that's great! Thanks!
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
fabulous. i think this is my new favorite fic. omg. i love u!! lol.
Author's Response: Wow--that's awesome of you to say!
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
fabulous. i think this is my new favorite fic. omg. i love u!! lol.
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