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Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
That one may have been my favorite. Very intimate in so many ways! And the ending was so cute ... so them.
Author's Response: Aw--that's awesome!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
This story keeps putting smiles on my face. Bella Cullen =]
Did I mention that I loved this story? Because I do.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear it!
Reviewer: booboo_kitty (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Holy exploding cooters Batman!!! I just sat here and read this whole thing and now I don't think I can see straight. That was most excellent!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you found and liked my story!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
OMG--hottest chapter yet, and it wasn't even Edward's turn! Want.more.Need.more.Now. Pleeeeeeease? Keep up the good work and reward us soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing all the chapters--that was awesome!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
No, I decided that you, Ms. Laura Cullen, are the minx here...OMG! I absolutely cannot wait for Edward's turn--please, please, please don't keep up waiting long!
Author's Response: I'll consider that a compliment!!! More soon!
Reviewer: saga (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Woha! i´m so gonna make my own list and give it to my hubby...! You sure inspired me gal... Your Bella has got one nasty mind!
Author's Response: Great idea--keep us posted on how that goes!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Bella is getting to be such a coy little minx--cannot wait to see what develops! Edward's responses are so great. Thanks for including the list!
Author's Response: Glad you liked their interaction there!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OK--first of all, I am VERY nervous about the cards Bella hid in the garage. We KNOW that some vampire is going to find it and give her hell, but which one? Suspense will be killing me for days! Next, the dance floor action was very erotic, nice choice of venue. Lastly, Edward discovering the thong, in his car, in the middle of heated action--that says it all right there. Can't wait for Chap. 9!!
Author's Response: Good catch on the cards. We haven't seen the last of them. Yes, the car scene's right up there at the top for me.
Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
*Guh* There really are no words for how hot that was. Must take cold shower now! :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked. But, remember, cold showers aren't all that calming in Bella's world!
Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
oh my goodness.. my brain is short circuiting right now & I'm actually pretty amazed I can even type a coherent review. This chapter was so ridiculously hot, I can't wait to see what Edward kind of game Edward is going to play with Bella!
Please keep up the amazing work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, Edward will be taking his turn.
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Yes, a little bummed that no numbers got crossed off, but I will settle for Alice and Bella being devious. Plus, E as a panty thief is something to really look forward to! Keep going!
Author's Response: Don't be too bummed...I'm also trying to work some plot in here too!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Number ten does deserve a review!! Throwing Bella's dream in there as a catalyst to this chapter was shear genius. I still find their dialogue incredibly real and true to character. Well done!
Author's Response: I appreciate the comment on characterization. I would be having her dreams,too. Wait a minute, I already am.
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Yeah, wet Edward touching himself requires a review!! I love that you included Jasper and Alice in there, because you know this has to be getting to them, too! You also get bonus points for Edward talking dirty, too--really hot and realistic!
Author's Response: Yeah, Edward touching himself is gold.
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Panties idea=perfect. Wow!
Author's Response: Yes, that one was pretty inspired!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Each chapter just keeps getting hotter! Yum!
Author's Response: Glad you think so!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Their verbal tete-a-tete is very well crafted and soooo erotic. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks for that!
Reviewer: kimpy0464 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just wanted you to know that I registered for the site simply to have the chance to review your stories! I find yours to be the most tightly written, with almost no typos or word misuse...and you capture Bella and Edward's characters very true to form, which I really appreciate! As for the story, steamy doesn't even cover it! Suffice it to say that "The List" has turned my husband into Pavlov's dog--he salivates every time he learns I'm reading a new chapter in your story!! Keep up the great work and keep adding chapters!!
Author's Response: Your review is awesome on multiple accounts--thanks for liking my story enough to register and for commenting on the writing and character development. And so glad hubby's enjoying too!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
yes for sure start a thread in the forum, I'll certainly be there!
the list needs adding to by the way, I hope you're working on that ;-)
Author's Response: Yes, yes, the list is NOT complete. Okay, I'll start a forum and see what people think! Under post-eclipse
Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
oh, my, god.
amazing.
amazing amazing amazing.
wowowwow, *fans self* well my boyfriend is going to love you for that! haha! oh gosh, upate asap!!!!
Author's Response: Tell him I said he's welcome! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
"If I had Edward and could practice ideas on him, sorry, but I wouldn't be spending my time writing about those practice sessions, I would just be engaging in MORE practice sessions. And, enough of him to go around or not, I'd be damn stingy and feel no guilt about it at all. Jus' sayin'. Do keep me posted on your research!"
Well maybe you don't have Edward, but you must have somebody to give you inspiration *waggles eyebrows suggestively* Though in fairness the thoughts of Edward real or imaginary is enough to send me into a spin so I can only imagine what your world is like and you writing about him.
its not quite noon here and I'm all of a lather just thinking about the next installment, I haven't even re-read anything yet! Sweet merciful hour woman you have a gift! Your turn of phrase is amazing, and I have to say I did wonder what rosalie might say when she goes to use the piano herself!
Have you a thread on the forum by anychance? If you don't you should start one. I'd imagine it would make for some VERY entertaining..em..reading ;-)
Author's Response: I've been thinking about a forum thread for this and wondering if anyone would be interested...
Your message made me laugh and smile, so thanks for that!!!
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Ungh! That was hot. I am enjoying the fact that Edward keeps letting go a little each time, and learn to control his strength so not to hurt her. Bella, is amazing. She can be quite a seductress when she puts her mind to it.
Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Me thinks you were my 600th reviewer! Thanks freakin' awesome! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: PatzRob (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Great chapter well worth the wait. I hope you feel better soon:)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed--and thanks!
Reviewer: STAR1633 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Holy fuck. That was so erotic. I completely soaked myself when Edwards said, "I am going to feast on you”… and then they go at it on the piano ala Pretty Woman style… Fuck. I need to find my hubby to reenact this scene with me immediately!
I am eagerly awaiting Edwards turn at Bell’s naughty game (which I assume I will also need to reenact after reading).
More. Please.
Author's Response: Ha! sorry about the panties, but if you have the ability of recreating that scene, I don't feel too bad at all! Glad you're enjoying! And, yes, Edward's turns (his DARE and his turn to dominate) remain...
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
"No way! I'm a historian too. What is your field, work, etc.? I teach early American history."
Small world! Well, I should clarify that I am a returning college student in my last semester for my BA. I have come a long way to even be able to call myself as a historian, as I never thought I would make it, but no matter what I will always feel like a "student" of history. I am a British historian, although my college does not have a separate degree for British history anymore, so it's just history with an emphasis on Ancient/Medieval and Modern Europe. My classes though are almost all British history. I consider myself a cultural historian more than a materialist, and I really love theory! It kicks my butt trying to understand it sometimes *coughs, Foucault, coughs* but I find the it fascinating.
I did take a breadth course last semester called Women in U.S. Colonial Times. It was fabulous! You probably already know about this, but just in case you haven't, check out the book Cherokee Women: Gender and Culture Change, 1700-1835 by Theda Perdue. There is at least one reference to vampire-like figures that are similar to SM's vampires. I cracked up reading that, and wrote "Twilight vampires!" in the margin of my book.
I don't plan on being a teacher, as I do not have the patience to deal with us crazy students. My hat is off to you. May I ask what level you teach?
As silly as it still seems to me, I am thinking that I might try to write some historical fiction once I graduate. Maybe. I am using fanfic as a way of trying out fiction writing.
Author's Response: I teach college (at the U.S. Naval Academy--MEN IN UNIFORMS, ahem.) and as I always tell my students: you ARE a historian when you're in my class. So, no qualifications, you're a historian.
I love British history. My area in colonial history is the colonial Chesapeake. And in September I had the opportunity to go on a 8-day study tour of British historical sites related to the history of colonial Maryland. It was fantastic. We went to the Isle of Wight where the ships Ark and Dove departed from (that carried the founders of Maryland), we went to several historic homes related to the Calvert family (including Wardour--the ruin that, if you haven't been, you might possibly know as the burned-our castle at the beginning of Kevin Costner's movie version of Robinhood), etc. It was great. And I came up with a possible research topic while we were there. London is one of my favorite places in the whole world, especially now that I know Rob Pattinson is roaming around there somewhere!
I'll have to take a look at Perdue's book for that reference. That's hilarious!
Putting your historical training into historical fiction is not silly at all. In fact, it's a very good outlet for that knowledge. And historical fiction remains popular. So get to thinking up and writing that first novel already!!!
Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Update please! Love it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked!
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