OK, I knew someone would find those sheets of paper eventually, but never in a thousand years did I expect it to be Emmett and Rosalie. Frickin hilarious - I busted out laughing when I read that scene.

Tattoo of his name was a really nice touch. And Bella putting the phone close to her heart so Edward could hear it was incredibly touching. Uh, no pun intended.

Love your story as always ... next chapter eagerly awaited!

Author's Response:

Yes, there was no way they would go undetected now, was there?  Glad you enjoyed!

ok, i have to say i'm a little confused, but damn that was hot!

Author's Response:

Oh no.  Why confused?  Hope you still enjoyed!

I think I have already reviewed the first chapter, but let me just say I really liked it.  I loved SM's books and obviously it is her story, but I can't imagine that Bella wasn't at least tempted to do what she did in this chaoter. 

Onto the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

I agree completely!

um you should quit whatever job you may have and just write forever.

seriously i cant deal.

you should probably never end this story..... :-)

Author's Response:

That is an awesome thing for you to say.  Thank you so much.  If I can just get an agent to pick up my first novel, I would seriously consider doing just that.

That was incredible...seriously u are not writing quick enough for me these stories are great....hahahha more please

Author's Response:

I'm trying I'm trying!  Next chapter will be submitted on Sunday!

So, if we help you come up with more things to add to the list will you keep writing until they're all checked off?  However long that may take?  ;]

I'm totally hooked!  Great work!

Author's Response:

I always welcome suggestions.  And, don't worry, the list isn't complete!  Feel free to make suggestions here or on the new thread I started under Post-Eclipse.

Oh my...That was...AMAZING!!! Seriously I didn't think it could get any hotter than chapter 10, submissive Edward was just so yummy but this blew the lid off the hotness box. Great job!

And by the way, that line "I'm going to feast on you Bella. I'm going to eat you alive." Ugh, I almost fell off my chair. Holy effin hell is right. (Note to self; do not read The List in Starbucks)

And all smut aside I loooove your writing. The dialogue between Edward and Bella is seamless. Can't wait to read more, oh and get well soon.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for this awesome feedback!  So glad you're enjoying!

I think I deserve a big thank you. *grins* I was chatting on AIM with a friend of mine and told her about the fic, and let's just say she loves it just as much as I do. Though she did comment that Bella and Edward are horndogs and should just do it already LOL. Of course by now she should know never to doubt me when recommending a story, *grins like Alice*

Oooo by the way, if you take this all the way to the honeymoon, and you use the cannon honeymoon location of Isle Esme, you might wanna add "on a deserted beach during midday" onto Bella's list. That should definitely be on there.

Looks like everything Bella's doing is not only breaking down Edward's Victoria/Edwaridan thoughts on sex, she's crushing them into nothing. LOL! Good for her. Can't wait to see what you add next! Update soon!

Author's Response:

Awesome--thanks for the recommendation.  I bow down before you.  Yes.  The question of when/how this ends is on my mind.  I have started a thread for this under Post-Eclipse, and I'll be seeking thoughts via reviews and the threads.  In an upcoming author note I'll be posing some questions to all you fine peeps along these lines...don't worry, though, the list remains a work in progress.

hmmmmm i want a piano

Author's Response:

You and me both.  There's about to be a nationwide run on pianos!

Well, maybe you should get sick more often! :0  That was a GREAT chapter - and of course, nice and long!  Bella's list better get longer or she's going to run out of things to accomplish before the wedding!

Being a piano player, I loved the whole piano bit.  Edward + Baby Grand = hopefully good dreams tonight! 

Seriously, I hope you're feeling better - nothing worse than being sick.  Thanks again for a great chapter - can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Not to worry, Bella's list remains a work in progress!  Glad you're enjoying!  More soon!

All I have to say is holy freaking crap. Whew!

Author's Response:

Awesome!

Oh...my...fucking...god.

i have just read all 11 chapters in one go. and bloody hell was that hot. i love it when edward says "fuck" thats just...wow. haha i guess im very partial to this because i have my own list, and all i can say is im adding some more on after reading this. I absolutely loved it, very very well written, funny, erotic, irrisitible. Please update soon!

Author's Response:

This is an awesome review--so glad you found and liked my story!  Maybe we should share lists?!?

*super massive grin*

THANK YOU!

LOVED LOVED LOVED This chapter. Edward never stood a chance when Bella set her mind up to getting that list done. The boy seriously needs to get over the whole angel/harlot idea he has regarding Bella, though I can see he's starting to lose part of it... slowly but surely.

Author's Response:

You are so right about that.  And I love your super massive grin--I immediately heard that Muse song in my head and that is win.