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Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
There is no way they are going to make it a week and if so they are going to be nuts by Sat, let alone if they try the no orgasm till the wedding they will rip each other apart as soon as they say "I do".
Another freaking sweet chapter and once again HOT
Author's Response: Ye of little faith! Nuts by Sat--definitely!
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
!!! Bella is a freaking GENIOUS! phone sex=dirty talking Edward...and lots good times. I love the tattoo of his name, so romantic!
Author's Response: Little bit of everything in this chappy, eh? Glad you liked!
Reviewer: lissa_rae (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Bwahahahaha!!! Emmett is a little bit evil, and I love it. Also love the tat...what an awesome idea.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the tattoo idea. When it came to me I debated and then I was like, yeah, okay, that's awesome!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Ok here's my guess: if I were Bella, I would put his name over my heart, but since she is hiding it from Charlie it's probably on her butt.
Author's Response: Stay tuned to find out!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Ok, so I think I was just as upset/floored by Edward's dare as Bella. How many chapters will the 5 days equate to, I don't know if I can survive the separation. The letter was super sweet, and the idea for the tat...Genius. My guess is that the tat is located on her ankle.
The addition of Emmett finding out about the questions Bella asked Carlisle is sure to add some humor.
I'm just so glad to have this story. This story is an example that you don't have to go all angsty to have a story that people will love and follow. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm not going to drag out the week and make all of us suffer alongside them in their abstinence day by day! I agree on the angsty factor--and I love me some angst--but I think something can be sexy and a compelling read without it! Thanks for saying so!
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
?? I'm confused about what Emmett said...
That was awesome, though! I really didn't see the tattoo coming.
I'm always terrified that someone is going to find the notebook.
Author's Response: Emmett typed out the text from one of the poster boards Bella showed Carlisle in an earlier chapter! And, your fear is NOT unfounded!
Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I love this story! I hope Emmett doesn't make her too miserable. I hope we see the strong Bella, and Emmett doesn't embarrass her too much! You are an amazing writer. Update soon (we'll have as much trouble as Bella staying away!)
Author's Response: Not to worry--the battle between Bella and Emmett will be great! I think you'll like!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I've just started this story and so far I love it.
Author's Response: So glad you found and are liking my story!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I can't believe how much I love this! I mean REALLY REALLY REALLY love this! HOLY CRAP! Each chapter gets better and better. And just when I think you can't make it any more spectacular, you out-do yourself again!
And btw, I love the TATTOO idea! Freakin' priceless! I cannot wait to see Edward's reaction!!! I can't remember if I already asked you this once before, but how far are you going to take this? Please say you will go up to and INCLUDING the Wedding night! YOU HAVE TO! Have mercy on us and say yes!
WOO-HOO!!! Damnit I love this!!!
Author's Response: Edward's reaction is going to be goood! Almost as good as your review! Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback on how far to carry it out. I'm thinking through that stuff right now!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Okay, not only did we get THE phone sex, but a LOT of new additions to the To Do (Edward) list!!! Loved the tat idea, kudos on that!
I would just argue one point though - it would still technically be possible for Edward to "mark" her after she turns, although not in quite the same way...we know from Jasper that a bit from another vamp can leave scars...perhaps a "love scar" would be an option. However, I totally love the tattoo idea...can't wait for Edward's discovery of it! As for where it is...no idea.
Author's Response: I didn't think of the scars, but you might be right. I'm not sure Bella would have necessarily thought of that, although maybe. I wonder if Edward would be willing to give her that kind of mark though? Jasper's scars are a result of violence and I wonder just how hard one vampire would have to bite another to leave those scars. (Okay, now that I'm talking about this like it's REAL it sounds particularly lameass!!!!) Glad you liked!
Reviewer: STAR1633 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OMG! New additions to the list are fantastic, phone sex with Edward was super hot, dying to see how Emmett torments Bella, and you are amazing for posting so quickly *smooches*
Author's Response: You're so welcome! Glad you found so much to like!
Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
inside of her thigh, where the mark was.... or straight on her baby maker, with "property of" above it. hahaha
sweet sexy and sarcastic. gold star all around.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks for my star!
Reviewer: AbbyHale (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Ok call me a romantic, but I LOVED the letter, how sweet. And at first I was super mad at you for the whole “two-part dare” but don’t worry the end part of the cell phone on Bella’s chest and the line “My heart beats for you, Edward. For both of us. ” {{{tear}}} made up for it. I can’t wait for you to write the wedding night, you do such a great job with ALL your writings. PLEASE keep up the GREAT work!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the letter, and don't be mad :(. XD Yeah, the cell phone on the heart thing got me too. Thanks!
Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Omg, Emmett and Rosalie are the two worst people to find out about Bella's mortifying health-related conversation... I knew those damned posters would come back to haunt her!!! That was absolutely genius about the tattoo though, very original. Hmm, where did she have it done?? My guess is... her thigh, because Charlie won't see it and it's already a place of previous Edward-induced marking. Can't wait for the next chapter! (Thank you for updating on my birthday. :D)
Author's Response: You're right about that! And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Glad you found so many things to like!
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Is there anything this chapter didn't have to offer? Humor with Rose and Em, romantic love letters, tattoos, and finally some hot phone sex. All is right in the world....
Author's Response: A little something for everyone! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I'd like to think her tatt is above her heart, it's poetic... and sweet...and sexy...and every one would see she was his depending on what she wears... H. O. T.
Oh, and the phone sex was very hot. And Emmett is hilarious. Of course he's not gonna let it go. It's too good!!! Can't wait 'til Edward finds out, although I'm inclined to say he's probably not gonna mind her asking Carlisle because it shows him just how much she's actually thinking about her won safety as well as his controll and "sanity."
And maybe one of her numbers on her list could be to go to a sex shop together to get something for their...honeymoon?!?
Author's Response: The heart would be poetic...read on to see! Lots of good observations here! Hmm...toys, eh? I'll think about that!
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Oh God that letter! I am forever ruined. This line was so beautiful:
And so here I am, at your request, writing, and in the process, once again, you give me back a piece of my self, my humanity.
*sigh*
And when she put the phone on her heart? I'm just going to tell you I loved it, because my words could never do your beautiful words justice. I can't wait to see where her tattoo is and his reaction to it. Just beyond wonderful.
christina
Author's Response: Yeah, why don't real guys write letters like that???? Glad you like the sentiment in this chapter! I try hard to keep the emotion in the story as well because they are, after all, two romantics.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OME, this story is like my own personal brand of heroin. Very. Very. Hot. *fans herself* I'm going to guess that her tat is on her hip, where Edward marked her when she straddled him on the couch. And please, for the love of all that is holy, update soon!
Author's Response: Normally I'd say just say no to drugs but in this case abuse away! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OME, this story is like my own personal brand of heroin. Very. Very. Hot. *fans herself* I'm going to guess that her tat is on her hip, where Edward marked her when she straddled him on the couch. And please, for the love of all that is holy, update soon!
Author's Response: Awesome review! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Pretty funny! Bella is turning into a tease slowly but surely!
Author's Response: So true!
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I loved this! The dare is priceless and going to be so difficult for both of them. I absolutley adore that she got inked for him, that is just freaking awesome. The phone sex was amazingly hot, whew. But what I love the most, is Em and Rose and them toying with Bella. This could be oh so fun!
Author's Response: Yes--this chapter had a little bit of everything--fun, humor, smut, and sentiment! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Nice!!! And Emmett is evil! I hope he doesn't embarrass her too much! Love using Edward's signature for a tattoo.
Author's Response: Emmett has to be Emmett, after all! Glad you liked the tattoo!
Reviewer: Lillie Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
The letter and tattoo were awesome; can't wait to find out where she put it. Emmett is evil! Why didn't Bella throw those away???
Author's Response: Glad you liked! Bella got a little distracted. She didn't even remember them until Emmett sent the text!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I have a list for when I get married too. This story is funny to me and well written.
How aggravating it must be to have no privacy. I know the Cullens are used to it, but I feel embarrassed for Bella. Although I suspect she is not going to care about it much longer...
Author's Response: Yes, but Bella is coming around to it! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I LOVE IT!!!!!
Author's Response: SO GLAD!
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