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Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
You gave me the best. Monday. morning. ever. Squee!
This chapter was soooooo epic. And hot. And a tattoo! (You got the feeling exactly right, sunburn scratched with paper cuts, nicely done.) I want to say it's over her heart... but that could be hard to hide in certain shirts... my other guess is that it's on Edward's lourve mark on her thigh. The possibilities are endless! You're a genius!
Much love, lady.
Author's Response: Glad to start your week off right! I don't have a tat (want one...) but that's what I've heard so hopefully my lack of firsthand experience wasn't tooo apparent. Thanks!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I love the new ideas added. I need a list...
Where did Bella get her tattoo? I keep imagining it on her back, lower back maybe, but I think that's just a common spot for all tats and Bella will probably try to stand out and put it somewhere different. But not somewhere Charlie could see. IT has to be somewhere she can cover... unless Charlie is into tats... doubt it.
What is Emmett going to do? What are Emmett and Rose planning? Why hasn't Alice seen this or stopped it?
Please update soon.
Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading to find out!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
If some of the things on the list can only be achieved after Bella's a vampire, does that mean you're going to include the wedding and her change in this story?
I loved this chapter. Anything that involves a musical instrument is sexy and then you add Edward, naked, and God half the readers will explode
Author's Response: The question of the appropriate ending of this story is one I'm currently working on and any input is appreciated! Couldn't agree more with your assessment of the hot-factor of naked Edward and his piano!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
One small comment, and this is not only noted in your fictions, but others as well. It drives me insane when authors have Edward and Bella writing text messages in "text code": "Ur" and shorthand like "killing me". Bella has not had a cell, and Edward is too eloquent and old fashioned to do this. Plus, you gave her an iPhone, which has a full keyboard. There is no reason for them to not type the words out fully. Sorry for the negativity, it is just a pet peeve that these two would be the least likely people to use that type of shorthand.
The rest of the story, fantastically wonderful! I cannot wait for Edward to find the tattoo - I am thinking she had it done on her thigh where he marked her. I am also so much in love with Emmett and his taunting that I am jumping out of my skin with excitement for the next chapter! This is such a fun story, I love it.
Author's Response: I don't mind that feedback at all because I debated it. For myself, I mostly text writing full words with the exception of things like c for see, b for be, or u for you, but then again I'm not a youngin. So I struggled with what is realistic but the more I think about your comments the more I agree.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I had to laugh at the end, but honestly after everything they've done and all, I think it's funny that Bella can be embarrassed still. Heck at this point Bella should be able to brag to Emmett! Look at how much she's got Edward to do, she's a freakin' miracle worker. *grin* But I can't wait to see what Emmett plans to do to torture Bella.
The tattoo was inspired genius. I bow down to you.
Author's Response: Yes, what happens between them should be good fun!
Reviewer: In_a_blue_bathrobe (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Urg! Where. Did. She. Get. The. Ink.?!
You're such a TEASE!
Author's Response: You'll have to wait to find out!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Gah!! That was... wow. No words. Loved it!
Author's Response: Yeah, I understand!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Thank you for the update!Confused on Emmett's message, PLEASE FORGET THIS EVER HAPPENED? What never happened? Help!
Author's Response: Bella's signs she showed to Carlisle!!!
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I just love this story. I think the whole list idea is brilliant. Can't wait to see how they cope over the next three weeks.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: kellbell0 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
BUSTED!!! haha tatoo thats sweet but edwards gonna free-eeeak to the max .... what on earth is poor bella going to do - no edward for a while...
peace xx
Author's Response: Yes, Edward's reaction will be interesting for sure!
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Oh Emmett is too wicked for words. I was wondering when thoses poster boards would come back to haunt Bella.
Great update...love the additions to the list. Number 30 could be a list all by itself.
Im thinking the tat is on her chest...near her heart, that would be sweet. Or down low on her hip...that would be sexy. As long as it's not a tramp stamp it's all good.
Author's Response: Yes it could! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Really sweet and hot.
I loved the signs. LOL! So funny.
Author's Response: Humor, smut, and romance--what more could you ask for?! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
ooohhh, and I forgot...the tattoo...inside thigh where he marked her already maybe...although I know thats obvious, I don't think she'd have it over her heart, while the sentiment is lovely, its a bit tarty, a bit amy winehouse. I'm sure you'll keep us guessing till the end...
Author's Response: Yep! Not sayin' a word yet!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Right then, this is attempt number 2 at posting a review on the newest chapter, I'm going to copy it before I post in case it disapears too!
First of all...the obvious..The. Phone. Sex. I'm a puddle of goo sitting here at 9.30, on a monday morning (in my sickbed..you sent it across the atlantic) *sigh* Edward naked....talking dirty...thinking dirty...*whispers* touching himself.....mmmm..need a moment here....
But THAT LETTER! It was the sweetest sexiest thing, and the poetry (why arent men in RL like that, at least some of the time!?) I would have lost resolve straight away and gone and jumped his bones immediately (but then I have NO self control when it comes to Edward). I can't wait to see what else he comes up with.
As for Em, that shagger...well, I think that Bella is well able for him, and if she has help from Alice she'll be grand. Edward will not be impressed though...
Loving the new additions to the list...can't wait for the hot tub, or anything water related...Edward wet and naked...again.......*claps hands in glee* well lets face it, it brightens up a dreary monday morning, tuesday, wednesday....ooohhh, I feel better already..
I shall pop over and check out the forums and put in my tuppence worth, have to keep the inspiration going..
Author's Response: So sorry you're sick! My sick has been epic so no doubt I sent it across the pond. Thanks for all the specific comments and sooo glad your Monday morning got a little perk!
Reviewer: Minamizu (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
:O
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
Laura cullen is pure awesome!
I <3 the tattoo part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When will the next update be?
and
thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou for this Fantastic story!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha "I am toast."
:D
Author's Response: Love this review! So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I just wrote a review and the fecking thing disapeared into the wild blue yonder....arrrrggghhh!
give me a bit and I'll do another one!
Author's Response: Oh no--sorry but thanks! Computers can be such a pain!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
That was sweet and so incredible hot at the same time. I love this story so much!
Author's Response: Yes--this chapter had both the heat and the heart!
Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I'm guessing she got a scrag tag? (middle of lower back)
Author's Response: Hmmm...have to read on to find out!
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Another great chapter to add to the amazing mix. :)
The love letter was precious. Loved it.
I'm totally confused about Emmett's statement at the end so I can't wait to read what happens next.
You're writing is brilliant, so I eagerly await an update. Great work.
Author's Response: Bella's signs to Carlisle from earlier chapter--Emmett's letting her know he found them. He knows she'll know what it is! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Ahhh! I love it I love it I love it!!
Author's Response: So glad!
Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
reading your story was totally better than eating my v-day candy!
That was an amazing idea for Bella to get Edward's name inked on her skin; I can't wait to see his reaction to it in the upcoming chapters!
This is one of the best stories on the site, without a doubt!
Author's Response: E's reaction will be goood. Ooh, equating the story with candy, that's sayin' somethin'!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I just read these two chapters..
and I just melted.......
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
and I am going to guess its either on her hip.. or maybe the rib cage area..
Author's Response: Ooh, you had a twofer! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Oh. God. Love it!
Author's Response: Awesome!
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Shit! That was so good! I am losing my ability to review after reading chapters like this. I loved it! I cannot give specifics yet, but the letter was fabulously sweet and gorgeous. Great poem selection. PHONE SEX!!! GD, girl, you get me every time they do something! You are so freakin' good at conveying the emotions here. Plus, the pacing is perfect.
I so wanted to kick your ass for Edward's dare, but you are the author, so I trust that it will all be worth it in the end. The payoff should be pretty fucking explosive!
My fav line: "One of the many interesting things I was learning about myself with Bella was the more sexual gratification I got the more I wanted. Is that normal? " Yeah, that's like me reading this story; the more I read, the more I want. Well done! :D
As for the tattoo... well, my first guess is somewhere it won't show, like on her bum or hip, but I am totally clueless. Will the tattoo last through her transformation though? Won't the venom erase it?
Oh yeah, Emmett. That's all I am gonna say, except that I fucking lost it laughing when he found the cards that Bella wrote. I hurt my hand when I smacked the table in reaction. Just thought you ought to know that! :)
Author's Response: Don't hurt me for the dare!!!!! Glad you found Emmett funny! On the tat, I am going with a universe where it will survive the change. Here's my thinking: 1) it won't be a wound/injury by the time she's changed, so it's not something technically to heal, and 2) vampires with tattoos is just hot. XD But I agree it's a question generally. Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: SpiderMonkey (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
you never said where the tat was placed...reveal? i love it keep it up!
did you have inspiration for a tattoo shop in Seattle, cause i've have some pieces by a Zeke in Seattle. just wanted to know. Cheers!
Author's Response: I know I didn't! And it's hilarious that there's a tattoo shop in Seattle with an artist named Zeke--totally made that up!
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