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Reviewer: Aleea-b4u (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Great chapter! Really smutastically raunchalicious. Oh and that love letter, awww just the perfect amount of sweetness. Can't wait to find out the location of that tattoo. It's on her hip right??? It has to be someplace where only Edward could see it...yeah I know... wait and see (sigh)
By the way #26!? huh - really? Can't wait to see how you pull that one off. And #30 oh my God! You are killing me, no really, do it again, pretty please.
Awesome, Awesome writing! Thanks for sharing the talent.
Author's Response: Ha! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
srsly hot chapter.
I love this story. Looooooove it.
Emmett is such an imp. Big ol' goofy imp, and I love him so much. Thanks so much for letting it be him to find the cards. :) Can't wait for the hijinx!
Author's Response: Of course! It had to be Emmett!
Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Love the poem!
Author's Response: Thanks! It seemed perfect...
Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I'm going to have to go back and check b/c I'm in to much of a lust induced fucking fog to remember what the fuck Emmett said. *drools like a mental patient*
I need to talk to you about this story and the Perv Pack Smut Shack review of it if it's kosher with you. Hit me up if you're interested.
xo
Nina
Author's Response: Lust-induced fogs are nothing to complain about bb!!!! Chapter 8--Bella's conversation with Carlisle...
Yay--the pervs are interested? That's awesomesauce!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Firstly, the dare is genius and the phone sex is win.
Secondly, I love a mishievous Emmett almost as much as I love the list. but not quite.
And now I'm sad, because I'm all caught up and there is no next button. :(
Author's Response: I know--don't you hate when that happens?!?
You might be one of the few fans of E's dare!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Piano!!!
also, swoon again about Bella Cullen. I love that.
Author's Response: Yes--those two things make this chapter!
Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Can't get enough!!!
Author's Response: Ha!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
wow. no words for you other than this:
Go Bella go!
Author's Response: Ha!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
oh my goodness. are we going to get number 18? please say yes!!!
Author's Response: Wait and see!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
URGH!!! Emmett is going to ruin Bella's fun!!
I'm also surprised the tattoo artist didn't tell her that it was bad luck to get your spouse/boyfriend's name on your body. It actually "curses" the relationship.
I did like this chapter though...it inspired me to make a phone call of my own =]
LOVE this!!
Author's Response: Well, that shows you my lack of knowledge of all things tattoo...! But now that I went out and read up on it I guess I have this to say: first, they can't die so that particular jinx is gone; second, Edward in the books describes their love/commitment/attraction as more powerful than a wolf impriting, and since they've already lived through one attempted separation and know they can't physically survive it, I'm thinking splitting up isn't happening either. But now you've got me thinking about this though...
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
28) In a hot tub! I'm glad to see that Bella shares the love of water :) The phone sex was very hot and I love the fact that Emmett found the posters. The location of the tattoo hmmm, Well it has to be located somewhere that wouldn't be seen with her wedding dress on so I think it's on her hip.
Author's Response: Like 28 eh? Thanks for all the specifics and the tat guess!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Sweet lord, that car is a turn on in itself...
so good.
Author's Response: That's no lie.
Reviewer: wren (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
:)
You're awesome...if you didn't know that before, you do now.
Author's Response: Simple and to the point. Nice!
Reviewer: strwbrryflds (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I love this story. I just love the new chapter. I really loved new dare Edward has challenged Bella to.
Author's Response: You might be the only one so far not mad about Edward's dare! Thanks! XD
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I love this chapter! I thought somthing would happen with that when she put them there! Em is so funny! And I love the tatoo! Do they stay if you are a vampire? Where did she get it?
Author's Response: Glad you liked! In my universe, I'm going to say yes the tattoo stays. It'll be healed before her change, so it's not technically a wound/injury. But it's an interesting question. The rest will be revealed soon!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Fantastic :) I am rolling over Emmett's text too ha ha ha!
Author's Response: XD Glad you liked!
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Holy hell, you always deliver. As does Edward apparently. ;]
The love letter was so beautiful. I melted with Bella.
I'm guessing the tattoo is over her heart? I'm hoping it's elsewhere though... Maybe her wrist? The suspense! I am anxiously awaiting an update again.
Author's Response: Yes, yes he does. Glad you liked the letter and interesting guess!
Reviewer: changed_by_edward (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Awesome update! I read the whole thing up until this chapter last night and I really like your story a lot! (It's way hot, too!) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Glad you found and liked my story! Thanks!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I'm glad that we're not considering number 15 fully crossed off... I'm very much looking forward to that one :)
Author's Response: Absolutely!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
NUMBER 10!!!!!!!!!!
swoon. I think that there may be health hazards to reading this straight through.
Author's Response: Ha! No! I love that you're reading straight through!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Wet Edward who can't even control himself around a pair of panties... how I wish I was Bella.
Author's Response: You and me both!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Holy cow, that is hot!
Although we never got this side of Bella in the books, at least not to this degree, I really think that everything you have her saying and doing is deliciously in character.
Author's Response: I appreciate that feedback. I understand what the tone had to be, but I always thought after 18 months of being together, they'd be doing more than kissing!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Firstly, love the homage to Lesson in Release... one of my all time faves...
Secondly, this particular item on the checklist is absolutely fantastic. I'm finding it difficult to keep from finding Mr. Historicvamp instead of continuing with the story.
Are you taking suggestions for things to add to the list?
Author's Response: Always open to suggestions! Glad you're liking the list! Fully agree about LIR!
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Ha! I love Emmett, this is going to be great... Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: What's not to like about Emmett??
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Alice, why must you interfere?!? This Edward is undeniably hot!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Alice will help soon!
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