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Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Well... here again.I love Edward's dare it is so loke him to come up w something like that!!! I totally agree w him to leave some thing for after the wedding.
The tatoo... beautifull,i can think of manny places fot it.So i will wait(hardly)
Emmett's Text...pricless...It is so like him thats why i love him!!!! one of my fav characters.
The pone sex...WAY TOO HOT!!!!! i felt like i was there(deep sigh)
Keep up the good work!!! U made my list of fav authors!!!
P.S. Cant wait for the rest ;-)
Author's Response: Yay! Love your review! Glad you found E's dare to be in character--of course he wasn't going to let this all go TOO far yet! Fav Authors! Too cool.
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I love this fic. And you.
Author's Response: You're awesome. XD
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I have decided that this is my favorite story here. I might just explode if you don't update soon. No pressure though. ;)
Author's Response: Fav story? Too cool! Next update in a day or two at most!
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
...... First of all congrats,u have certanly outdone yourself(im sure) i registered to this site just so i could write a review(i couldn't help myself)i found out about this story through a friend in the twifans site(have to thank him later)I have read all 12 chapters an let me tell you(if its too grafic u can delete later)it has been an ORGASMIC experience to say the least my husband was wondering why i was so enthusiastic later on lol.I blushed like an idiot and laughed so hard when i read Jasper's POV that my daughters were wondering what was wrong w me lol.(cant tell them they are teens)Absolutely loved it!!! i love the foreplay and you have showed a very human emotion of then that for obvious reasons Stephenie couldn't put in her books,but honey u did a VERy good job for her can't wait for chapter 13(when is it coming????)keep up the good work!!!!
Author's Response: I love this review! I'm glad you're finding it...inspirational! So cool that you registered to review my story! I'm working on writing Ch. 13 today and will have it submitted in a day or two!
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I love this story!!!! i cant wait to see how far you go with it. i would love it to be up to the wedding night!
and i really want to know where the tattoo is, i would like to to be where edward marked her
=]
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Vanessa Wolf (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Freaking hillarious. I love the story.
Author's Response: So glad!
Reviewer: foreverswt16 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Nice!
Author's Response: Hope you read on and enjoy!
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
TOOO Funny!! Emmett is the little devil isn't he! I am trying to come up with a place that would be unseen by Charlie and that would drive Edward completly over the edge,for the placement of her tat. Not sure yet.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! Keep thinking!
Reviewer: Christina Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I just spent a significant part of my day reading all 12 chapters in one go. I thought I was going to spontaneously combust!! I really enjoyed the story and can't wait for the rest. It's really fun to fantasise and go way beyond the realm of what Stephenie created. Very well done :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you found and enjoyed my story! Yes, her vagueness on all matters sexual has really fueled the fires of fandom, hasn't it?
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
So f-ing hot...seriously! What a fabulous writer you are !
Author's Response: You are so very welcome--thanks!
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Hot hot HOT!!!!
Author's Response: What's NOT hot about Edward in the shower?
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Oh dear! My guess is she got the tattoo somewhere around where he gave her the second hickey?
Another fabulous chapter! Can't wait to read what's next!
Author's Response: Interesting guess--stay tuned. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Loved that chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
This was absolutely one of my favorite chapters!!! It was freaking hilarious AND fluffy AND hot. Emmett's POV was awesome "The damn pixie has dirt and won't give it up." and the tattoo idea was wonderful! :D I love how you're portraying all of the characters, I get totally sucked into the story when I'm reading. This story is fabulous!
Author's Response: That's an awesome review--thanks and so glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
okay so i was thinking.... i hope you are planning to continue this until the .. ahem BIG show?.... if you know what i mean.
i could hardly forgive you if you weren't leading up to the potentially (well, probably) BEST BellaEdward sex scene i've ever read.
how bout just write this forever?
and how bout u get #26 done post haste(ok, take your time)! its gonna be my favorite, i can tell! :-)
Author's Response: OH NO! "BEST BellaEdward sex scene ever"--there's no freaking way I can live up to that expectation! I'm going to go hide under my covers now! XD A 26 fan, eh???
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
is that last line refering to the board in the garage be cause i almost thought it was emmet doing those hot things to her.*whipes swear of of brow* glad that isn't the case (or is it?)
BTW i loved the chapter
Author's Response: No, no! The last text came from "Em" as opposed to "E"--Emmett texted her the words off of one of the poster boards from her conversation with Carlisle (Ch. 8) so that Bella would know he found them...thanks!
Reviewer: Morrisburger (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Sensational. This scene with the candle wax in particular is exceptionally well written. You managed to portray the characters as both sexually charged and yet in character. Domination is a very difficult matter to tackle yet you have done it in a mature and arousing way. Edward's thoughts during this scene are especially wothy of praise.
Author's Response: Thanks an awesome review--thanks!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
LOL, just read this over again and I do have to agree you're definitely keeping the characters "in character". It's easy to see them being like this in canon, plus it would help Edward with his control. After all, the more he knows both his and Bella's reactions while they are "prepping" for the main event after the wedding, the less chance he has of causing physical harm.
Think Alice could help Bella plan payback on Rosalie and Emmett for causing her to go insane with the stupid texts with the lines from her cards?
Author's Response: Thanks for the characterization comment. I appreciate that. Don't worry, just like she's been more assertive in her relationship with Edward in this story, she's not going to just roll over to Emmett's teasing, either!
Reviewer: clumsy like bella (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I've finally managed to register and leave you a long overdue review - I absolutely adore this story!
You manage to keep them so in character, but doing all the things we all want them to do! It's sweet, sexy and funny. I hope you keep it going for a long time!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! And I appreciate the characterization comment. Thanks!
Reviewer: cullenboys4ever (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
i love the story so far. i know you have written more c hapters i'm just not upto them yet, but the last line was classic Alice!
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: tarkonator (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Ugh, that was both steamy, and sweet.
And a response to your response, no problem for reviewing, i love reviewing when i like a story :) I write, although my stuff hasn't been accepted here (it's on fanfic) and I know how much reviews are just like, the best thing ever. I'm like, addicted to them.
This is so great, I was really in need of a good twilight fic, and this has solved/blasted that problem away!
Author's Response: Awesome--so glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: tarkonator (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
That was very steamy :D
Edward's reaction to the panties was PERFECT
Author's Response: Yes! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: tarkonator (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I loved 17 and her whole speculation about it. I find the whole blood drinking thing strangely erotic, but it seems to be left out in most Twilight stories, so I'm happy to see it here :)
Author's Response: I agree--and it's such a core part of the vampire lore. Interesting that SM never went anywhere with it. But it's definitely in play here!
Reviewer: tarkonator (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
That was hoooot. I loved Alice, and the ending was great.
I'm really really liking this story :D Sad I didn't find it sooner!
Author's Response: Well, don't be sad! You're here now!
Reviewer: tarkonator (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
This is so great! I'm having so much fun reading this! Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Having fun is great feedback!
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