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Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Wow, that was hot. Whew *fans self* Another great chapter!

Sidenote: Hope you are feeling better soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed!  And thanks for the well wishes!

Reviewer: In_a_blue_bathrobe (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

I think it's nifty that you tackle the blood issue; I think so many folks gloss over it, when it seems like it would be a serious issue.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your support with that--I appreciate it!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Oooh, one more thing. GREAT JOB with the "saving of the blood thing". It would NOT have been a good idea for Edward to have drunk it while Bella was still human. First, not realistic. Secondly, way too dangerous for Bella and too torturous for Edward. But I just thought of something....does this mean you're going to do a flash forward or something of when he does drink her blood? Are you going to continue this throught the honeymoon? PLEASE SAY YES! 'Cause actually, I don't see how some of the stuff on the list is gonna happen without breaking all the rules. But then you're the QUEEN of the unexpected! WOO-HOO AGAIN!!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, there was no way for her to do that before she was changed.  Edward would have freaked out on about ten different levels.  So, I agree.  But, you're right, her saving it for after the change does sorta raise the question of when this story is stopping.  And I seem to keep getting pulled by the story further and further in time.  I am currently leaning to continuing the story past their wedding night--how far yet I'm not sure.  But if I do, it will remain a post-Eclipse fic rather than a BD fic, that is, there won't be any baby and there won't be all the honeymoon sexual angst that occurred in BD.

Reviewer: WithTheVampires (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

i love your story!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but that had to be some of the hottest stuff yet in your story! And no, I didn't find the "blood thing" offensive. It went well with the story and it felt right considering the nature of the characters, vampire and all.

Just curious, are you going to be MERCIFUL at all and give us an EPOV of any of this? Because I would KILL to know what Edward was thinking when he discovered those panties! WOO-HOO!!!

Please post more ASAP! It feels like FOREVER since last you did! This is the most exciting fanfiction out there. And I can't wait until Edward finds out about the tattoo! WOO-HOO SOME MORE!!!

Author's Response:

I don't either.  My mind is clearly a dark cavern of deviance!

Before writing the END of ch. 13, my initial plan was NOT to give you EPOV.  But after writing it, E's POV is now bouncing around in my head and sort of demanding to be heard.  So, yes, ch. 14 will include E's POV on finding the panties.  Hopefully that will make up for my long delay...!

Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

The blood didn't bother me at all.  I think this chapter was great and I can imagine how special it would be for Edward to receive a vial of Bella's blood after she's changed.  I loved his reaction to finding her nickers on his bed!

Author's Response:

Yes, she has plans for the blood after he's changed.  It will be both sweet and smexy.  Yes, that was quite a reaction, wasn't it?

Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Not shocked at all.  It was something that had to be addressed at some stage and it never was in the books. Good plan with the saved blood too.

You've out done yourself with this one Ms Cullen, super hot and bellas revenge is amazing.  I'm a bit em..distracted..seeing as Edward was talking dirty again....kind of need to things *wanders up the stairs in a daze and wonders what hubs will do if I wake him demanding stuff*

More listy goodness soon..PLEASE! can't wait too long for the reunion....this should be a good one!


Author's Response:

Thanks--I'm glad you felt this way.  I realize it's sort of an icky topic, but tell me ONE PERSON who didn't question the whole period thing at some point while reading the books!  XD  Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

No complaints from me, I really enjoyed the chapter!  Can't wait to see what the weekend is like, and what kind of revenge she has in store for Emmett.  Hope you feel better!

Author's Response:

Thanks--glad you enjoyed!  More soon!

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Really good chapter, the period blood was a little weird at first but as you kept going with the details it made more sense. I can't wait for more! Update soon!!!!

Author's Response:

Wow!  You were my 800th review!  That's incredible.  Glad it ultimately worked for you!

Reviewer: lissa_rae (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Damn.  I am totally impressed that it's been, what, ten, eleven days?  And Bella has accomplished 17 items on her list.  That's...damn impressive.

Author's Response:

Yes, she is one productive human.  XD

Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Whew!  Still great, still hot! :)  And of COURSE the blood play isn't yucky; to anyone who thinks it is, ummm.... vampires, blood, sex, HELLO?!?  I'm so glad you went there; very few have the courage to do so!

Author's Response:

Thanks for that--I appreciate the support!

Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

ok so as a human lol that was kinda *but** but being that edward is a vampire I can see how it would be erotic ... so again I cant wait for the next chapter!!! I can only imagine that this is going to be a very naughty weekend! ;0)

Author's Response:

Agreed--have to put yourself into the human mindset.  Yeah, the weekend is probably going to be naughtier now than Edward initially planned.

Reviewer: 18 and Life (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

OMG!  Hot, Hot, Hot.  Not gross at all, very well and tastefully done (no pun intended)


Author's Response:

Thanks for that--I appreciate it!

Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

No, I really liked it. Alot! It totally makes sense to go there, I mean he is a vampire after all. And having him "taste it at the source"? Perfectly something you should do.

Very nice! Very, very nice... And the last little escapade on the phone? U.N.F.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your support!  Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: kaidyn (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

That was HOT. I cant wait to see what Edward has in store for Bella next.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ninapolitan (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Well now.  How about that.  I'm curious to see what's going to happen when Edward returns and she's not uber horny...Is it wrong that I want her to get aquainted with the showerhead again and for him to watch?  Oy-I need a moment

Author's Response:

Edward definitely has some stumbling upon things to do, and not just finding her in the shower!

Reviewer: cullen-gal (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

amazing! i sooo need a cold shower after that one....can't wait to read on!

Author's Response:

Help yourself, but remember, in Bella's world, cold showers aren't relaxing!

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

Something is up with my updates, because I never got hte alert for this new chapter.  But......Mother of God is right.  So hot and so sweet at the same time.  I love the love letters idea.  And let me guess, the tatoo is either just above her heart or maybe at the base of her hairline where Edward's kisses usually start.  Keep us, I mean the story coming.

Author's Response:

Ha!  Well, in a sense you're going to be a very lucky person, because I just submitted the update for the next chapter, so you're going to get two right in a row!  So glad you liked!

Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

::sigh:: you know, this story makes the stresses of being an over worked college girl go far away. You're hands down the best sexy Edward/Bella writer ever. Oh and you should know that chapter 10, Control is my favourite thing EVER. Holy smokes. There is really *nothing* hotter than submissive Edward. UGH!

I really can't wait for the next chapter. I'm secretly hoping #17 is going to happen realllll soon. 

I so hope you feel better, it really stinks to be sick :( Get well soon!!

Author's Response:

Awesome review--thanks so much for taking the time.  I appreciate your enthusiasm of my story and, I have to say, I agree completely with your thoughts on a submissive Edward.

Reviewer: zana (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

Oh my god this story is SO good!!!  I just signed up at this site and just found your story and read the whole thing in one sitting.  It's funny and sexy and romantic and just fantastic though I am worried about this whole no touching/no orgasm thing.  I really want to see Edward's turn at Dominating Bella.  Anyway this story is great.  I'm hooked and I hope you continue.

Author's Response:

So glad you found and enjoyed my story!  Don't worry about Edward's 'turn'--it'll all work out!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ainsleyhayes (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

Holy... wha... fuck! This is... divine. Sinful. Delicious. Like... please note the use of countless ellipses (...'s) in this review - I'm usually rather coherent, but this has reduced me to a stuttering, mindless fool. Seriously, this is ridiculously fantastic. Damn. Thank you so much for writing - you got skillz.

Author's Response:

I like how you used adjectives that might also be applied to an incredibly divine, sinfully delicious dessert.  Yummy.  You are so very welcome!

Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated


Author's Response:

Thanks for that.  The meds are starting to kick in finally--wonders of modern medicine.

Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

You know what might cure you of your illness?  Wirting about Edward.  ;)

Feel better soon! 

Author's Response:

Sure couldn't hurt!!!!

Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

ok so, this story is MY brand of heroin....and i am going into withdrawl ! ! !


Author's Response:

Awesome!  More soon, I promise.  I've been dreadfully sick again, and am just trying to get myself back into the frame of mind of writing...

Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

HAHAHAAHA!!! I love Alice, this is just too good. ;o)

Author's Response:

Glad you think so!!

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