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Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Hmmmmm glad you took my idea about suggesting Edward taste her blood during that time of the month. Lovely chapter once again Laura.
Oh, and as payback to Emmett for teasing her, might I suggest that Bella have Charlie get Emmett's jeep towed? I think it would be lovely payback. *grins*
Author's Response: Interesting revenge idea. I'll take it under advisement! Yes, well, let's see how far this goes, shall we??? XD
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was just hot:) Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks, and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Loved this chapter. Bella is a kickass Vixen. Rosalie coined it...blood and sex does go together when you are a Vampire. It's natch'rall, ya know? Don't sweat it...it was a fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow, still loving the story. The blood isn't too much. I can't wait to see what happens on their weekend, or her revenge on Emmett. I had the crappiest day, but as soon as I saw you posted a new chapter, I smiled. Thanks. Hope your feeling better ( and writing) soon! :-)
Author's Response: So glad the story helped cheer you up. I have some that do that for me too. The Nymph and the Waterfall is a very funny read, if you haven't tried that story yet I recommend. Thanks!
Reviewer: SpiderMonkey (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
wow girl, you are some type of twisted...i like it!
keep it up!
**is the tattoo behind her ear?**
also just FYI after a tattoo is finished the bandage only needs to stay on for 6-8 hours, after that it's lotion adn breathing, no bandaid required.
Author's Response: Yes, yes I am. Can't say anything about the tattoo location...I'm a tattoo novice, as I said earlier, but don't you have to keep it dry during showers during the first week or two? I'm happy to be told I have no clue what I'm talking about though... XD
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood talk didn't bother me at all. In fact, it's something I had been wondering about. I guess we're just lucky Bella didn't have her period the day she and Edward met in Twilight!
Revenge is sweet :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Strange, I was listening to NIN earlier today. How can you have a smutty vampire story without bringing blood into it? Keep it going. Still digging it. :)
I'm digging Rosalie's characterization too. Very cool.
Author's Response: I kinda agree with your question there, which is why I went, well, there! Glad you like Rosalie. I really like when people make her more of a three-dimensional character than she was in the books.
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
AHHHHHHH OH MY FUCKING GOD! that was AMAZING omg, lmao. i loved all the blood stuff, it makes it so intesnse. because yyou're so right, everyone pointedly ignores bellas blood all the time. when really, whats the harm when she's gonna be a vampire!? and that phone call.. hooot. you're amazing! can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: I loved the 'hooot'! Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
This story is so much fun! I love it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad!
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Not grossed out at all... in fact in some strange way it makes perfect sense and seems kinda hot.
Can't wait for Edward to pick her up.
Such a good chapter! So glad my hubby just got home from work too, now to send the kids to bed. *blush*
Author's Response: Glad you find this story...inspiring! Thanks for the support on the blood issue. Wasn't trying to be gratuitous about it or anything, but it does seem so obvious and it never really gets addressed...
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Heck yes! Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Gald you enjoyed!
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow, that was hot. Whew *fans self* Another great chapter!
Sidenote: Hope you are feeling better soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! And thanks for the well wishes!
Reviewer: In_a_blue_bathrobe (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I think it's nifty that you tackle the blood issue; I think so many folks gloss over it, when it seems like it would be a serious issue.
Author's Response: Thanks for your support with that--I appreciate it!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Oooh, one more thing. GREAT JOB with the "saving of the blood thing". It would NOT have been a good idea for Edward to have drunk it while Bella was still human. First, not realistic. Secondly, way too dangerous for Bella and too torturous for Edward. But I just thought of something....does this mean you're going to do a flash forward or something of when he does drink her blood? Are you going to continue this throught the honeymoon? PLEASE SAY YES! 'Cause actually, I don't see how some of the stuff on the list is gonna happen without breaking all the rules. But then you're the QUEEN of the unexpected! WOO-HOO AGAIN!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, there was no way for her to do that before she was changed. Edward would have freaked out on about ten different levels. So, I agree. But, you're right, her saving it for after the change does sorta raise the question of when this story is stopping. And I seem to keep getting pulled by the story further and further in time. I am currently leaning to continuing the story past their wedding night--how far yet I'm not sure. But if I do, it will remain a post-Eclipse fic rather than a BD fic, that is, there won't be any baby and there won't be all the honeymoon sexual angst that occurred in BD.
Reviewer: WithTheVampires (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
i love your story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but that had to be some of the hottest stuff yet in your story! And no, I didn't find the "blood thing" offensive. It went well with the story and it felt right considering the nature of the characters, vampire and all.
Just curious, are you going to be MERCIFUL at all and give us an EPOV of any of this? Because I would KILL to know what Edward was thinking when he discovered those panties! WOO-HOO!!!
Please post more ASAP! It feels like FOREVER since last you did! This is the most exciting fanfiction out there. And I can't wait until Edward finds out about the tattoo! WOO-HOO SOME MORE!!!
Author's Response: I don't either. My mind is clearly a dark cavern of deviance!
Before writing the END of ch. 13, my initial plan was NOT to give you EPOV. But after writing it, E's POV is now bouncing around in my head and sort of demanding to be heard. So, yes, ch. 14 will include E's POV on finding the panties. Hopefully that will make up for my long delay...!
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood didn't bother me at all. I think this chapter was great and I can imagine how special it would be for Edward to receive a vial of Bella's blood after she's changed. I loved his reaction to finding her nickers on his bed!
Author's Response: Yes, she has plans for the blood after he's changed. It will be both sweet and smexy. Yes, that was quite a reaction, wasn't it?
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Not shocked at all. It was something that had to be addressed at some stage and it never was in the books. Good plan with the saved blood too.
You've out done yourself with this one Ms Cullen, super hot and bellas revenge is amazing. I'm a bit em..distracted..seeing as Edward was talking dirty again....kind of need to em..do things *wanders up the stairs in a daze and wonders what hubs will do if I wake him demanding stuff*
More listy goodness soon..PLEASE! can't wait too long for the reunion....this should be a good one!
Author's Response: Thanks--I'm glad you felt this way. I realize it's sort of an icky topic, but tell me ONE PERSON who didn't question the whole period thing at some point while reading the books! XD Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
No complaints from me, I really enjoyed the chapter! Can't wait to see what the weekend is like, and what kind of revenge she has in store for Emmett. Hope you feel better!
Author's Response: Thanks--glad you enjoyed! More soon!
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Really good chapter, the period blood was a little weird at first but as you kept going with the details it made more sense. I can't wait for more! Update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Wow! You were my 800th review! That's incredible. Glad it ultimately worked for you!
Reviewer: lissa_rae (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Damn. I am totally impressed that it's been, what, ten, eleven days? And Bella has accomplished 17 items on her list. That's...damn impressive.
Author's Response: Yes, she is one productive human. XD
Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Whew! Still great, still hot! :) And of COURSE the blood play isn't yucky; to anyone who thinks it is, ummm.... vampires, blood, sex, HELLO?!? I'm so glad you went there; very few have the courage to do so!
Author's Response: Thanks for that--I appreciate the support!
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
ok so as a human lol that was kinda gross.lol *but** but being that edward is a vampire I can see how it would be erotic ... so again I cant wait for the next chapter!!! I can only imagine that this is going to be a very naughty weekend! ;0)
Author's Response: Agreed--have to put yourself into the human mindset. Yeah, the weekend is probably going to be naughtier now than Edward initially planned.
Reviewer: 18 and Life (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG! Hot, Hot, Hot. Not gross at all, very well and tastefully done (no pun intended)
Author's Response: Thanks for that--I appreciate it!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
No, I really liked it. Alot! It totally makes sense to go there, I mean he is a vampire after all. And having him "taste it at the source"? Perfectly something you should do.
Very nice! Very, very nice... And the last little escapade on the phone? U.N.F.
Author's Response: Thanks for your support! Glad you enjoyed!
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