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Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
we are vampire-lovers, bb, the blood-talk is cool.
great chapter, as usual. love the ending scene. almost-out-of-control edward is hot.
*fans self*
i may spontaneously combust when i read about their weekend away. have mercy.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. SO glad you liked! Yes, the ending was hot to write too!
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
*chuckles* Considering who we're talking about here, it's very apt. Poor Edward *giggles* He never stood a chance once the girls ganged up on him ^_~
Author's Response: No, no he didn't, and, you're right, especially with ALL the girls working against him!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OHmg...awesome chapter! And I loved the last line :)
Reviewer: schleprock (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
it's a story about a vampire! if you can't take blood talk or interaction don't read story's about vampires. it was fun and...hot! looking forward to dom edward as long as he's not nasty to her,i don't like the dom scenes where they call women sluts and stuff.i mean saying she's a dirty girl or somthing is fine just not that she's a whore and stuff.
Author's Response: Don't worry about the Dom scene--Edward would never do anything to harm or degrade Bella. It's just not in his nature. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: izzi_love (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OF ALL THINGS HOLY AND GOOD.
That was simply amazing!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Author's Response: Awesome review!
Author's Response: Awesome review!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
gotta love Alice!
Author's Response: Yes, yes you do. She ended up playing a much larger role in the story than I initially planned.
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Sooooo hot! I can't wait until they are reunited!
And "Closer"? That's the weirdest thing because the other night I was listening to that song and thought it would be perfect for the two of them. I thought it was just me. Ha!
Great work, as always. Feel better!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed! Yeah, Closer just rocks in general, and it so fits these two.
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I will not argue with that!
Reviewer: girliegirl (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
All I can say is OMG!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!! HOTHOTHOTHOT.
I can not wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Awesome as always! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Eudora Scott (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
So wonderful!!! I think the blood worked very well with the story. I can't wait to read more^-^
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Naughty!
Author's Response: But soooo nice!
Reviewer: Volexisayang (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
DAMN HAWT!!!!!! LOL
The blood didn't bother me at all coz it made sense :)
Dirty talkin Edward...campbells soup i tell you campbells soup!!! MMmmmm mmmmmm gooooood.....
Feed the addiction baby & update soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. So glad you're liking!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Oh my gawd! Love the revenge plans...and LOVE the effect it had on Edward. The boy's certainly getting past his hangups! Now...time for the weekend. They may not make it till the wedding night...(now wouldn't that be a shame...NOT!)
Author's Response: Yes, their resolve is certainly wearing down, isn't it? I'm not sure Edward realized that time apart would be quite so maddening! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Omigodomigodomigod!!! Thank you soooo much for updating! It wasn't gross at all...personally, I think the whole "Bella and her period" thing, especially with oral, makes complete sense. Translation: I can't fucking wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your translation--it was priceless! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was hot.
And I don't think the blood talk was too gross. I thought it was done in a very tasteful way. :)
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: BreakingHouses98 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Thanks for recycling!
Author's Response: :-) You're welcome!!
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
umm...wow. the last few lines were AMAZING!! dirty talking Edward is the hottest kind of Edward in my book. I cant wait till the next update...its gonna be SWEET!!!
Author's Response: Yes, Edwward kinda lost it here and it was fan-fucking-tastic, was it not???
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Thank you for the update! I love everything about the list. It brings Bella and Edward closer, it brings Rosalie and Bella closer, it just seems to help everyone relax more around Bella and Edward seeing the 'human' sides of each.
Author's Response: I like your observations here about the function the list is serving. Thanks for sharing that!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow. This was so incredibly hot. Love it. SO Fucking Much. Great job!
Author's Response: SO glad you enjoyed! Thanks!
Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I've been loving Bella working her way through her list!! Lucky girl...I think where you're going is only natural. Next chapter, please!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: hollylovestwilight (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I REALLY WANT THE LAB TABLE ONE!!!!
i REALLY WANT THE PUBLIC PLACE AND THE THUNDERSTORM TOO!!!!!!!
THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!
Author's Response: The lab table WILL happen, I just can't tell you when. Glad you're enjoyed!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I'm not sure you understand how much I LOVE this story. It is amazing, perfect, and SO HOT! Keep it comin' and the lemons are amazing so keep those coming as well ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know! I appreciate it! That's what makes writing on this site so much fun! More lemons, post haste!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
BRING IT ON!
Author's Response: THANKS!
Reviewer: foreverbittenbyEC (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
This chapter was FanFuckingTastic!! *melts*
(I hope you feel better soon- that is so shitty you were sick for so long).
Author's Response: Awesome--thanks for your review! And thanks for the well wishes!
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