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Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Loved it! I don't think the blood stuff was gross at all. Bella donating her blood for Edward is so sweet. Ya know what else would make an awesome gift for Edward after she's changed? A recording of her heartbeat. And the panty thing...well if it were me, I would think it was a bit yucky too, but it's obvious how Edward would react to that, so I would have done the same thing. And Bella drunk, yay!! That would be one human experience I would INSIST on lol. Although I wish Edward could have seen her intoxicated. That would have been hilarious. Awesome chapter, totally worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the suggestion!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Don't mind the blood talk...I had always been curious about how SM's vampires handled that, anyway. Bring it! I'm ready to see what Edward has planned for Bella starting at 8 am the next morning. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. The weekend is almost here!
Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood talk is fine, but maybe tone down the F word. I don't mind it occasionally just not constantly. Other than that, it's really good!
Author's Response: Thanks! I realize the expletives aren't for everyone, and I do try not to overdo. But I also try to write what the feels right for the characters. And Edward was way out of control there...
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Girl this was HOT!!!! and we ARE dealing with vampires so HELLO!!! of course u gotta talk blood is only logical,and its been well avoided,so keep it up.
Cant wait for the rest!!!,especially he revenge on emmett too.
And very clever still no hint on where the tatoo is... lol
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Yes, the tattoo was veyr specifically NOT discussed yet!
Reviewer: wearefanpires (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG! I F****** love this story!
Write more as soon as you can!
I love lemonny Edward!
Author's Response: Lemony Edward is GOOD!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OH MY F-ING G--!! Are you serious? that was awesome, and it never grosed me! it was actually really creative? hot? I dunno if that's morally correct, but who cares! I can't wait for the next chapter already. This is sooo good!
Author's Response: Come over to the dark side, and I'll share more of my deviance with you! Glad you likey-liked!
Reviewer: blazefury (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was just HAWWWWWT. I'm fanning myself here. and the blood talk wasn't bad. Gotta deal because we love em vampy's. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
I hope you feel better soon, I can totally relate to being sick for a really really long period of time. Don't use the same mug too often, change sheets even more often, drink tons of fluids and be as comfy as possible and read as many fanfics as possible to feel warm and fuzzy. :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the well wishes!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
*fans self*
DAYUM.
...no like seriously...DAYUM.
This chapter was AMAZING. hehe. Weird because there was some graphic blood talk there but oh well.
I'm so Team Bella =] Get that list done girl!! hehe.
Author's Response: Git r done! XD Glad you liked; hope it wasn't tooo weird!
Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Blood talk is no problem! I always wondered about this aspect of their relationship- the blood part. I just don't believe that it's "dead" blood, so it doesn't bother them. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. The blood itself isn't dead, but the uterine tissue that's a part of the discharge is. Did that just fall into TMI? I spent way too much time reading about menustration today....
Reviewer: Greenever (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow...hot stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
blood is hot, run with it girl and don't look back!
Author's Response: Much thanks!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Holy cow. Your genius just continues to absolutely floor me. Seriously, you are just, gah. No words.
First, Bella going to Carlisle was pure win for the whole blood issue. The only thing I would have suggested she do was to continue storing more blood, because will one pint be enough for the play later? Of course maybe it might be gross for Bella to drink her own blood after she's been changed, I dunno.
Edward's reaction to her panties? Oh yeah, SOOOOOO good. Just mmph. Oh and Bella talking him through it just makes me so proud of her it brought a tear to my eye.
Edward loosening up enough to actually send naughty, nasty text messages? Oh hell to the yes. Pure goodness.
The anticipation for the weekend. Killing me.
Author's Response: Awesome review! So glad you liked--thanks for all the specific comments. And, not to worry, the anticipation of the weekend is killing me too. I'm glad for Edward's dare to be over!!!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
holysweetmotherofgod...that chapter is going in my permanent bookmark file...
Author's Response: Awesome! Enjoy!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I love it! Awesome chapter
Author's Response: So glad--thanks!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
um.. Im speechless. in the best way ever fucking possible. I love you and want to marry your words.... and your mind.. hell maybe even you. someone that thinks like that.. just.. needs.. LOVE. lots of it............ dirty love. rough love. yummy love..
yeah.. MAD LOVE.. to you :)
UPDATE soon or my head might explode and not from the overwhemling amount of homework I have been doing lately..... freaking college life.. yeah.. um..
I need to be excused...
Author's Response: Okay, your review is making me hot. Lurved it. Hard. Thanks!
Reviewer: Eddielover (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
thats fucking hot! im just saying!!! i cant wait to see the next chapter.. their weekend!!!! keep it up! update!
Author's Response: I'm with ya! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Brits23 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
hot hot HOTTTTTTT!!!!!! I puffy heart your story :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! <3 right back at ya!
Reviewer: Edwards Lil Aussie (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG :aura - this just gets better and better! You are such an awesome writer. I am so sorry you have been sick and I hope u get better soon.... and please WRITE FASTER.... more more more.... if Bella is Edward's Heroine.... well this story is mine :-) As I have said before, YOU ROCK!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review and the well wishes!
Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Okay, so I just wrote this long ass review and the damn site kicked me off and I had to log in again! UGH!!! I will try to recreate it for you now....
That was freakin' awsome!! I don't know if I should be ashamed by this or not, but I figure you wrote this story so you're mind must be at least as warped as mine, so here goes.... I thought all the blood talk was freakin' hot!!! I honestly suprised myself a little!!! This story and this chapter in particular is just too hot for words!!! You rock and I honestly think you are one of the very best smut writers I have had the joy of reading, and for some reason lately I have kinda made it my job to find the best of the smuttiest smutt out there :o) You're a smut writting goddess!!
More, More, More!! PS....I'm so sorry you've been sick!! That sucks!! Welcome back to the land of the living darlin'!!
MWAH~Leesh~
Author's Response: I like the line "best of the smuttiest smutt out there"! Well, I'm certainly honored to be at the top of your list. So glad you're enjoying the fruits of my deviance. I think there's quite a few of us at this little party so do not be ashamed! XD
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Oh, so hot!! So very, very hot!! Edward talking dirty and getting himself off--big turnons! The blood doesn't faze me at all, none of it.
I loved this about Rose:
Rose huffed. "Bella, it's blood. And sex. And for us, even for my prude brother, those things go together quite...comfortably." Her expression and posture seemed to indicate her belief that she had just communicated a reat wisdom. Very droll!
Love this fic! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you liked the Rose line--I did too. Thanks!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Blood and vamps go together like cotton candy and a carnival. Still wondering where exactly that tatoo is.
Author's Response: Tattoo answer will soon be revealed! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Okay, this was a good chapter. To be honest, some parts I found as gross, but some part I found brilliant. I kinda found the stained panties kinda gross, but I LOVED Edward's reaction to it. The part I found brilliant was the blood conversation with Carlisle. Here is my favorite line:
"Me, as a vampire. And Edward. In a dark room. Without clothes. And with my blood. Yeah. That has possibilities." That is totally HOT to me. Does this mean, you will continue the story for this to comes to fruition?
Please update soon, I'm ready for this dare to be over.
Author's Response: Yes, well, Bella had to be convinced about the panties thing too, but you see the response...so clearly Rose was right!
I can at least say this much, somehow I will write that scene...!
I'm ready for the dare to be over too, btw!
Reviewer: MaleficentKnits (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Love the chapter, love the blood! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: So glad--thanks!
Reviewer: 9twilightlover9 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
hahaha cant wait for tomorrow morning :] update soon
Author's Response: Soon!
Reviewer: wren (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Ahhh that was great! You have no idea how happy you make me when I see you've updated one of your stories! :)
Feel better soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for that!
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