That was gorgeous. Congratulations on your book, you so deserve it and Laura Kaye sounds great. All the best for your future projects.

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE!!!!! ok, you definetly rock! i love the way that you wrote it ALMOST better than SM. but still, i have to love SM first, otherwise what kind of a Twilight fan would i be? (i know that people don't agree with me on that... but that's my opinion.) ok loving this story. can't wait to read more!

I can't imagine that you like hearing from me for the first time after 20 chapters.  I have to say that I like your version better than SM's.  I am an old woman and I had no idea such a thing as fan fiction even existed.  I received the first book for Christmas.  I had to go get the other three.  Then I started looking for something on the internet.  I knew Twilight was a sensation, but I didn't understand until I got caught up in it.

I've been reading a lot of fan fiction but yours is the only one I ration out because I know I have to prolong the pleasure of reading it.  Never doubt your ability to write an addicting tale.

I loved your story. I thought Bella giving Edward her blood was an amazing idea. I also liked the way Bella was a bloodthirsty newborn, much more authentic. Sadly, I hated Breaking Dawn as I found it extremly predictable and the plot was full of holes and strangely, I find it sad when I enjoy a fan fiction more than the original. Does that sound weird because your story (and a few other post eclipse fic's I've read) is what the story could (should?) have been. The talent of fan fiction writers never ceases to amaze me, congratulations.

That was a magical ending to a wonderful story. I can watch as you grow in your writing from the first chapter to the last.

It's obvious that we all love Stephenie Meyer and her characters, but I personally feel that you have given them a three dimensional feeling that she was unable to pull off. It might have been the OOC complaints that some of your readers were reacting to, but Edward is kinder, more loving, more worshipful, more alive, and more real than any of Meyer's books. Bella was thoughtful, sweet, compassionate, and sensitive. I have to say that I got tired of her just being giddy at Edward in Meyer's books. I love how you showed specifically how they completed each other- giving one exactly what the other needed emotionally at the time.

I have one complaint...and it's a tiny one at that. Women, even in the early 1900's, held a special place in their hearts for their recipies. I am disappointed that Bella didn't find that cookie recipie in the house and make it for him for their fifth anniversary.

Congratulations on your novel, and good luck with your writing career.

This was a very fun loving story, thanks for writing!

Thank you, I could never find the words to thank you properly (maybe because I am not as good as you are with words, of course). You don't know how much I love 'the list', the way you describe things..phenomenal, please, please, never stop writing and I promise I'll never stop reading... you are sooo gifted, keep doing your magic for all of us...

Laura fan sounds d and Brazil there is a website TWILIGHT BRAZIL where someone is posting to the list as if it was absurd because escritora.Achei also write a fic when I have time. I am married, mother, attorney and reader. Kisses, Sufic Very good!

I love your writing Laura.  So touching.

What Bella wrote for Edward had tears in my eyes at times and at other times almost snorting out laughter.

One week  "Okay," Alice chirped, trying to distract me, "last one to feed has to give the other two pedicures!"

Three Weeks   The locket and the homework assignments

Christmas Night - Edward's reactions!

Loved your ending!

I was wondering how to say how wonderful this road you have taken me on has been, I really have no words.  Then I get to the very end,  and read your author's note:  CONGRATULATIONS!!!  You will make many people very happy Laura.

Christy

Absolutely, wonderful!!!  You are again, amazing!