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Reviewer: Janes Rage (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Gahh! Totally effen raunchy and they weren't even together! Alice really is a Godsend. And poor Esme... trying not to listen to the sex talk. lmao This story is too funny
Author's Response: Yes, just IMAGINE what it will be like when they ARE together!
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
How can you expect us to find words to review after something so FREAKIN' HOT ! Words fail me. I love you though.
Author's Response: The words you found worked for me! Thanks!
Reviewer: The Brunette (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Great fun!!! Can't wait for more!!
(Also some of the best written sex on here)
Reviewer: Giselle Giselle (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I seriously LOVED this!!!! It was fucking hot!!!! This is like the sexiest story ever written!!!!
Author's Response: That's awesome of you to say!
Reviewer: feathers_mmmm (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Love you
Love your fic
Love that you are reading my fic
Can you feel the love?
Added you as a favorite, you are on MY list chicken:)
Alice
xoxo
Author's Response: Wow, feathers! Thanks so much! I lurve your fic. Hard. You enjoying mine means a lot!
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
HOLY HELL-- That was the hottest yet.. damn, I can't wait for more.
Really... WOW!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
holy crap that was hot!
Author's Response: Glad you liked!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Jasper and Alice were fantastic! So hilarious and hot. Wonder if and when the rest of the Cullens will be responding to the new E&B action?
I loved how he set the water to warm and warmed his hands - nice contrast to her shower activities.
Author's Response: Yes--they both like the other's temperature. Good catch. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Gothward - yum! I love that she left her panties on his bed. He's going to go nuts when he sees/smells/touches them. Awesome.
This is a super fun story!
Author's Response: Yes, yes he is! Glad you're enjoying! I did very much want it to be 'fun'!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I loved when edward was all domineering and "don't move your hands." Totally hot.
Author's Response: Yeah, more of that to, erm, come!
Reviewer: Zico1225 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
This is so fabulous - very well written, very authentic and very, very funny! Have laughed out loud at this chap. Great job - I can't wait to read the rest of this. PS - note re last chapter - Edward tasted Bella's blood at the end of the fight scene in Twilight (he sucked James's venom from Bella) - so if n17 on the list comes to pass - it will be the second time Edward tastes Bella's blood. I guess you know that anyway.....Loving you work!
Author's Response: That's true about the blood--that's why in this chap Bella says something like, but he'll enjoy it this time, because the first time was so torturous and not at all about pleasure. So she sees a distinction. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I'm a starting my own list righty now. Oh God Don't Stop writing. Thanks for the lemony goodness.
Author's Response: You're welcome! More soon!
Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow... your story is probably the hottest Twilighted fic. Damn! The dirty talking yet mostly canon Edward is so hot!!! Don't shy away with the "honey from the hive" idea. It's oddly arousing.
Author's Response: I know. Isn't it?! Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying our poor little tormented Edward! It does such interesting things to his choice of vocabulary!
Reviewer: changed_by_edward (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Hi Laura! Personally, I loved the blood talk. I think it's hot that she did that! I can't wait for your next update! Anything that makes Edward say "fuck" is hot as far as I'm concerned! I love DTE! I really like this story, and think it's a fun and cool idea! Bella is definitely not the only one having to change her panties over it! lol Great job, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: XD So glad you're enjoying! And thanks for the support on the blood issue--not trying to be gratuitous or anything but it just seems so damn obvious! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mspacman1 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
he couldn't even wait to get her home! that's what i'm talking about!
Author's Response: Absofreakinlutely!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I loved Edward's instinctual reaction to Bella's "enhanced" scent. That was totally hot.
Alice saving the day and the list was excellent.
Lab Table - hahaha.
Author's Response: Yes, Edward was definitely taken by surprise there. You're laughing at the lab table--people have been beggining me to write that one!!! XD
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I love how shocked Bella is at her more "kinky" fantasies. And the cold water was excellent!
Author's Response: Yes, Bella eases in to this whole fantasy thing!
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Ahhhhh, I love it. I love that she gave blood for Edward to taste. I can only imagine what fun they can have with it when she's changed. Oh my. Loved the day out with the girlies, too fun. But of course, the best part was the revenge. Edward jacking himself with Bella's bloody panties, imagining he was pounding into her was so, so, so damn hot. Good lord I can't wait for what comes next.
Author's Response: Yeah, that might be my personal fav from the whole story. Phew.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Totally great! The blood donation, Emmett finding her notes, and Bella's revenge were perfect strokes of genius. I laughed my ass off while reading this chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response: Hee. You said strokes. Yes, I'm a child. XD
Reviewer: jusfoolinaround (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OK...that was just all kinds of delicious! Edward was just so raw. I can't wait to see what he has in store for Bella next.
This might be a weird question, but can Jasper smell Bella's blood from outside of Edward's room? If so, I would love to see his reaction.
Author's Response: Rawward is good, no? Yes, we hadn't seen any of these happenings from anyone besides Bella's happenings, have we? I just MIGHT give you guys the, well, guys' perspective next go-round!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I just reread this story again today because it is my favorite favorite favorite and a few things struck me.
First, was the seamless way you write the characters..some might think the swearing is OOC, I think it's FUCKING HOT. You capture the innocence in the exploration of this young couple's sexuality and still deftly manage to bring us a lemony goodness panty soaking chapter.
Second, you actually make me feel along with them, my own first sexual explorations..the nervousness, the tentative nature of the atmosphere, the absolute trust and of course the thrill of new territory..the drama of it..the pushing of boundaries. To quote Edward...your writing is EXQUISITE.
This story is lemony but it is truly..beautiful. I think that is what makes it so hot for me. These two kids are in love...and a big part of the expression of true love is monumental sex.
Author's Response: This is truly a lovely review and I thank you so much for it. I've tried very hard to keep the emotional connection quite prominent in all of their interactions, so I appreciate your comments on that. Thank you thank you! (You're also my 950th review!!!!) Astounding!
Reviewer: Aspenleaf (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
WOW!!,
That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon, i'm addicted!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I dont mind the blood talk! Hell makes sense to me!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it seems sort of obvious to deal with and it's just so avoided. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: thisistami (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Oh My! at first I was a little put off, but I'm completely over it after Sexward got off from it. Why can't that world be real??? Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, his reaction does sorta help ya get past the yuck-factor, eh? Just have to think like a vampire!!!
Reviewer: Tudor1 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
UPDATE! That was so hot!
Author's Response: Glad you liked! Thanks for reviewing!
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