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Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I love this story I can not wait to see what comes next
Author's Response: Glad you found and are enjoying my story!
Reviewer: gkk (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Well... I suppose the only review I can leave that fully expresses how I feel is.... "THAT'S IT???" Well, okay, now I know how B & E are feeling! I want MORE! LOL
Seriously, bravo! I wasn't reading this as it was coming out chapter by chapter, so I was lucky enough to get 13 chapters all at once. I was laughing out loud, quoting passages to friends, and frankly enjoying the heck out of this!
I'll be tagging this story in the hopes of getting updates.
Author's Response: So glad you had fun reading this--that's definitely one of my goals for this story. Glad you're enjoying and more soon!
Reviewer: Masha (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
i want more!
Author's Response: XD Soon!
Reviewer: onyx8514 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I amdying to read his turn!!!!
Author's Response: I know--it's gonna be good. Soon!
Reviewer: LadyJ86 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
"Unggh!" Lol, dieing to hear more!!!!!!
Author's Response: XD Soon!
Reviewer: MeiraV (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
mmmmmm . . . can't wait for 8am tomorrow. This Edward rocks. Sweet and cute and sexy!
Author's Response: Glad you like our boy here!
Reviewer: monkeylover95 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
this is ine of the best stories onthe site and i think you shouled keep writting cus its awlsom
Author's Response: Thanks for that--I appreciate it! More soon!
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
This is one of my top 2 favorites stories. I love seeing this side of Edward. Makes me love him even more. Can't wait to see what he has planned for Bella for the weekend. Looking forward to updates!
Author's Response: Top 2? That's awesome! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Whoa! So totally HOT! I was suprised he didn't stuff those panties in his mouth! I was not grossed out at all by the blood talk. I'm actually hoping that what Rosalie mentioned does come into play. Please!!!
I can't wait until she's changed and she gives him the blood. Yes, that does have possiblities. Many!
I love this story, and you write so good. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Thanks for your detailed review! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Shereberry (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Just want to say that I love this story! Keep up the awesome work! =]
Author's Response: Thanks for that!
Reviewer: Egyptgirl (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Hey this is the first time I have reviewed ur story as I wasn't a member b4 but this is my fav story out of all the ones I have read and believe me I'v read lots!
I wasn't even slightly disturbed by the blood talk with actually freaked me out until I saw that most other people liked it as well so that was a relief :).
I also wondered whether you were intending to add more fantasies to the list or whether that was it. I hope u do add more as this story can't continue for long enough as far as I'm concerned.
Hope u update soon as I may suffer from withdrawal symptoms from a lack of fresh smut!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you joined up and thanks for reviewing! Glad you found the blood stuff reasonable and, you're right, most people seem okay with it! The list can definitely still yet expand. Thanks!
Reviewer: myedwardismine (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow!
I had to register just so I could review your story. It is, by far, the best story going and I do hope you continue writing until well past their honeymoon and her transformation. I check this site daily just for your updates!!
It is so beautifully written. I like how you've pretty much kept them in character but have explored their sexuality as normal 17 year olds would in their situation.
Great work. Please keep going...quickly!!!!
Author's Response: Wow--thanks for registering and reviewing! Thanks for the comments about their characterization--I try hard. I will be continuing at least past their wedding and probably past her transformation.
Reviewer: sazzy872 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
This is such a good story... more soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks for that!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I love piano sexy times. And his reaction to her dropping the f-bomb was excellent -- "OFF!" That one word was so incredibly sexy.
The Bella Cullen was adorable.
Author's Response: I know--I liked when he called her Bella Cullen too. Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Dag nabbit! I've caught up! lol I certainly hope you update soon!
This is a brilliant story! It's fun, loving, passionate, erotic, embarrising, caring and much more all at once! Not to mention brilliantly written, thanks. :) I'm really enjoying it.
Do you have any idea of how many chapters there is left?
Author's Response: I haven't plotted out the remaining chapters because I've only recently decided to take it past the wedding and possibly past her transformation. So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Nooooo! Emmet is so going to make her squirm! lol. Poor Bella. And how can Edward dare them to spend a week apart!? That's just cruel, lol, but great fun for you I guess. he he. Oh and Edward's love letter was so lovely! I love that poem he chose. Good choice!
Great chapter! I can't believe I've almost caught up already! Dammit. lol. I'm guessing that Bella's tat is either on her hip or over heart..... but of course I could be wrong on both accounts. lol
Author's Response: I know--everyone was frustrated over Edward's dare. Don't worry, it doesn't work out exactly as he planned!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Bella's got excellent BJ skills. I love that Edward went with it. I hope we get to see the damage to the couch in the morning. :-)
Calling him out for taking the white panties was awesome!
I look forward to when he's in charge!
Author's Response: Yes, when he's in charge will be interesting! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
That was so fulll of both love and lust it was amazing! I loved the begining, when Edward found out that she could play a bit of piano, that was so sweet. And then of course it just got better. Lol, they're certainly getting better at the whole control thing, aren't they. lol.
Anyway, really great chapter! I don't know how they're going to wait another three weeks. lol
Author's Response: Glad you liked the piano chapter! It was sweet...thanks!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Congratulations for reaching 1000 reviews!!! I'd only just realised after my last review. You completely deserve it!
This is a brilliantly written story. It so fun, but incredably passionate and full of love as well!
Author's Response: This story is so fun to write because of reviewers like you who keep taking the time to offer feedback! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Geeze. I mean...wow.
Author's Response: Love it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
I'm so glad you've decided to continue it on. Imagine what you'll be able to do when there's no barriers.... but perhaps that's half of the fun, thinking up creative ways for Bella to get thorugh her list. Anyway, great chapter for an equally great story!
I can only imagine how fustrating that cliff hanger would have been when you first posted. lol. *quickly skips off to the next chapter*
Author's Response: YOU SUBMITTED MY 1000TH REVIEW! THAT IS INSANE! Yes, I did a lot of ducking behind couches for that cliffhanger initially!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Good games. The UST is AMAZING.
I see hot wax in their future. Very much looking forward to the #18 chapter:-)
Author's Response: Yes, yes you do. #18 eh? Stay tuned!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
There's something about the Cullens going dancing that's so good to write about, isn't there. You certainly did it justice anyway! he he
Anyway, I was thinking. Are you finishing the story when the marry or continuing it on? Maybe you could do your own version of the wedding night. lol
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the dancing! Yes, I have decided to take it past their wedding night!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Aww poor Edward. It's easy to forget that he was brought up to caught, marry and then get the girl.... but that was a hundred years ago. Surely he lived through the sixties!? lol *funny image*
Anyway, great chapter! It's nice to have ones that develope the story as well. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, his head must've been spinning on his shoulders in the 60s!!! XD Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for mentioning plot development!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Wow... yep.... another point to Bella. Another one crossed off the list. lol I have a feeling these types of things will get easier now that they've crossed the boundary. Anyway, really great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
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