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Reviewer: edwardsproperty21 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
dear god. you are amazing.
Author's Response: Glad you think so! Thanks!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
"I had folded them and placed them in a Ziploc bag with a one-line note. The same lines Edward had teased me with the day before: ‘I drink the honey inside your hive'."
Jaw.
Floor.
They are so bad! And I never noticed that was even in the song! LOL.
You seriously rock.
Author's Response: Love this. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Tattoo - awesome. I don't think she would want it somewhere she couldn't hide it...
Phone sex - awesome.
Her putting the phone to her heart so he could hear her heartbeat - priceless.
Emmett & Rosalie - trouble. I never thought it would have been them to find the papers though. Gah - Emmett is going to cause so much trouble! xD! I love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing so many of the chapters! And I always love when people point out the specific things they enjoyed, so thanks for that! Yes, Emmett will be a troublemaker, as per his playful nature!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Pssht! Who needs food?!?! LOL.
I know I'm a big puddle of goo right now.
Love the sweet moments mixed in with all the smexy times - Edward watching her play the piano, then them playing together before playing together. hehe.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the sweet and smexy--I'm trying to keep some balance here so it's as much THEM as it can be within the parameters of this story.
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
"...before I threw her down and helped her find God." Holy bejezzus. That is the hottest thing I think I have ever read.
You are awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks for mentioning that line--one of my favs too!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
That was an evil cliffie! But I love it!
Author's Response: XD At least you read the story after the next chapter was up!!!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
That was very cute - with the marker & the posterboard. Gotta love Carlisle. I'm hoping leaving the boards in the garage doesn't come back to bite her - but I think it will xD! Especially since Edward noticed the marker.
Good grief, in the club. Dayum. And in the Aston Martin. Talk about a special occassion car - hehe.
Author's Response: XD Love your review. Yes, it WAS a special occasion, wasn't it? Glad you enjoyed the scene with Carlisle. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bree_Cullen13 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
awesome:]] keep foing~ when are you going to review next?
Author's Response: Next update in a day or two! Thanks!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Edward is going to have quite a panty collection if this keeps up xD!
Love it!
Author's Response: Yes he is!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Working together has never been so damn hot.
Author's Response: I agree--this chapter turned out very nice! Thanks!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Bejezzus! First Jasper & Alice & then Edward.
Edward in the shower.
Damn.
Your Bella is my hero!
Author's Response: Yes, she's managing to get all the Cullen men worked up here, isn't she? It was a double whammy!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Go Bella!! Way to one-up Edward! I'm so proud ;) I really like this more out of control Edward.
And dark-gothic Edward was one of the hotter parts of the movie, IMO.
Author's Response: Out of control Edward is my FAVORITE! Yes, that scene was the hottest thing in the movie. Especially because, having figured out what he is AFTER fantasizing about him drinking her blood, THEN she leads him up into the forest by herself. That ranks number one on my list of why I like the movie every bit as much as the book!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Whew - that was smokin! Alice is a genius!!
It was very cute, how he waited for her to get tired, instead of just finishing the carving for her.
I can't wait for the leather couch!!!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the scene at the tree--I thought it was very sweet!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Bella giggling makes me giggle.
Gotta love Alice!
Author's Response: XD Thanks!
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Me thinks Bella has created a monster! LOL.
Author's Response: XD Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: adorablecullens (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Really nicely done, as always. You took a little bit of a delicate subject and made it interesting, realistic and ... holy crap ... HOT. All that blood stuff is such a taboo in our society - it's nice to see someone tackling it in a new and interesting way.
Keep up the great work ... can't wait for your next update. Wild, horny, out of control, foul-mouthed Edward is a scream, and I'm eager to see a little more of him.
Author's Response: I loved your review and your characterization of Edward there. Awesome! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
i'm frustrated and have been studying all day for my nursing boards. im sick of it :( i need some dirty bella edward action soon!
i suppose i could just re-read this entire story...
....again :-)
Reviewer: amycad4 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG
This is amazing
I love it
Awesome
Author's Response: So glad you liked! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I think this was fucking perfect! When Bella thought of #17, my first thought was how about when you're on your period? but didn't want to say anything in case people thought it was gross. . . I'm SO glad you did this!!! I hope Bella takes that advice from Alice and Rose! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your support on the blood issue--I wasn't trying to be gratuitous or anything but it is kinda obvious, for a vampire anyway! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: wordsofkaos (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Holy Cow Vampire...This chapter is brilliant (along with the rest of the story).I can't wait for more
Author's Response: XD Glad you're enjoying! Thanks!
Reviewer: Kellybear_3 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I just caught up completely. Holy Crap... this story is hot! I love it! This is my first review ever at Twilighted. Your story rocks!
Author's Response: Wow--first review. Very cool. So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: edwardsproperty21 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I love it! You are awsome.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I love the blood talk. Its a great twist, and, he is a vampire, so it makes sense! I'm now fantasizing about how she is going to give him the blood later on - when will you continue!?
Author's Response: Don't worry--I'll be updating soon. Glad you're enjoying, and glad the blood issue worked for you!
Reviewer: Temptress_Kitten (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I love this story! I can't speak for everyone, but the blood stuff doesn't bug me at all. In the context of the story it works and also, and this is from personal experience, not all HUMAN guys are turned off by the idea of going down during that time of the month ;) I guess my only suggestion for handling readers with weaker stomachs and the less...uh...adventurous, would be to focus less on the blood part and more on what he's doing to her and how it feels for both of them. You have a lot of talent, so please keep writing. I can't wait to read more soon!
~Temptress Kitten~
Author's Response: Thanks for your review and your thoughts on the blood issue. And I know your comments about human males is true. Don't worry, more soon!
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I can not wait to hear what Edward has to say about bella and the new tattoo this is such a great story I am hooked LOL
Author's Response: Glad you're hooked--that's awesome! Tattoo reveal soon!
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