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Reviewer: ACL (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG this was great. I have always thought this would probably be the way menstrual blood would affect Edward and this was tastefully done I think. Love your fic, it's just like 'real' writing - proper grammar, (thank god) and sentences and everything! LOL (So many don't have those.) I just registered and you are my first review. Keep up the good work, and Update, Update, Update.
Author's Response: Wow--thanks for registering and reviewing! I appreciate your comments on my writing. And I'm glad the blood issue was handled appropriately for you. More soon!
Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
...it's so hot in here...great job
Author's Response: :) Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Update, update! Fun story :)
Author's Response: I will--tomorrow hopefully!
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Encore Encore!!!! You're amazing!!!
Author's Response: *Bows* Thanks so much!
Reviewer: gaspingforair (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I thought it was hot.
Author's Response: So glad--thanks!
Reviewer: taniluap (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Although I can't imagine SM's 'so-traditional' Edward doing such "things" :D, I can't wait to read the next chapter! You did great job and I'm literally burning with curiosity where Bella's tattoo is placed :D Your seem to be so imaginative! And I love your sense of humour :D:D Really appreciate your work, thanks !
Hugs and bites from Poland xD
Author's Response: Awesome review! Thanks for taking the time, and glad you're enjoying! Poland! Wow!
Reviewer: Sic Et Non (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Oh boy oh boy oh boy! I totally love this story, seriously, it's genius. And the blood talk? Loving that too. I know it's kinda weird but to me it makes sense, that would be something Bella would want for Edward and it fits in with your pleasure filled story as it's all about pleasure - Edward for the blood and Bella for the giving. Seriously love it, keep it up and, oh yeah, please update faster! lol.
Author's Response: Thanks for this great review! So glad you're enjoying! Next chapter soon!
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
This story is amazing. I love it. So well done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: bri-de-de (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
where did bellie get the tatoo?
Author's Response: You'll know soon!
Reviewer: Weredragon (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
My two cents? The blood talk was H. O. T. HOT! But that is part of the reason I'm a fan of vampires. Great story! I LOVE the List! ;-)
-H
Author's Response: I appreciate that--and I agree! Thanks!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood talk was fine this story was freakin hot I'm fanning myself right now WOW i really love how edward was so demanding at the end super Hot!!!!!
Cant wait until you undate next
Author's Response: Soooo glad you liked! Thanks! More soon!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I love this story cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!! Thank you SO MUCH for doing this! ::does her #17 chant:: I am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. i can't WAIT to see what he has in store. ohh pleaseee do what Rose said. (I love your version of Rose, by the way-- just perfect!)
More authors need the guts to write this whole blood thing. I mean, they're *vampires* for goodness sake! Let's take advantage of being women with periods! woo!
Okay. I'm getting off my soapbox.
This was fabulous! More soon please!!!
Author's Response: Your review made me laugh out loud! Thanks so much for your support on the blood issue--I agree!
Reviewer: singincookie (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
um......wow! LOL *goes to take a cold shower*
I LOVE the entire story btw, please update soon. Can't wait to see what happenes next. Keep it up! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! More soon!
Reviewer: Cordianne (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Ahhhhhh! This is so good! I keep trying to finish my fics, but then I keep reading stories like yours that are so much better!!!! :)
Author's Response: XD Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for reviewing! I know, it's hard to balance writing with keeping up with things you love to read!
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
i am perfectly fine wit the blood talk. its strangely erotic.
Author's Response: I agree--thanks for saying so. And thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: l a (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I'm really having a good time with your story thusfar. I've read a few others and none seem to be as "believeable" as yours in terms of the characters we all know and love. Keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: That's an awesome review--thanks for that!
Reviewer: jas_rachelle (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I found Bella's revenge a little gross... but not enough to stop me reading this amazing story. good work, keep it up!
Author's Response: I know--the blood stuff isn't going to be for everyone. But try to think like you're a vampire...? XD There won't be tooo much more for you to deal with...
Reviewer: oxyouhadme (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
that was fucking amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: cmsotojr (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Well I have been following this story for the last couple of weeks and I am proud to say it is one of my favorites! Waiting for this weeks addition keep up the good work! I love it!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the story! More soon!
Reviewer: Cali Twilighter (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Are you effin kidding me with this?!?! This is some of the best stuff I have ever read, it is insane and I love you for it!!
Author's Response: I kid you not!!! Read on, read on, and thanks!
Reviewer: lusts_temptation (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
continue,
please!
Author's Response: Will do! Next chapter in a day or two!
Reviewer: Ksi (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! In a day or two!
Reviewer: KimberleeMichele (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That's freaking awesome!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Twidazzle (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
theres no time for a review, i have to get to the next chapter!! omg!
Author's Response: XD Read on! Read on! Thanks for the review!
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