HOLY MOTHER OF GOD....  that was so freaking hot... H-O-T! ! !  that was amazing... and I totally dug the blood stuff... so hot!  Your story is amazing...  It totally brightens my whole day when I see a new chapter to read!  keep up the amazing work.... I look forward to reading more!  and I can't wait to see what Edward has planned next! or what Edwards reaction is to the tatoo, or what Bella does to get back at Emmett... or.... well I plain old can't wait to find out EVERYTHING... lol!  well done!

-Gray.

Author's Response:

Awesome review!  Made me smile!  Thanks so much!

It's really funny because through the whole saga I kinda had this thought in the back of my mind how the vampires dealt with this kinda  thing and although it's sort of an  uncomfortable topic I think you broached the way they deal with it quite well. Obviously in the original saga Bella and Edward had discussed it because when she realizes that her period is 5 days late she holds up a box of tampons to explain what she is trying to say to him. So we have to take it from that that they at some point had discussion about the subject. She had a box of tampons packed by Alice so....that leads me to believe they talked about this just we didn't get the details. Now we have more of the details, right? Shouldn't make people uncomfortable really (although it did a little), it's all part of nature. I really liked her revenge for him, very fitting. I also think the gift for him for after she is changed is really interesting. I can't wait to see what he thinks about her tatoo and to find out where she placed it will be interesting as well. Can't wait for the update!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the thoughtful review--you're right--that small scene in BD reveals that they have to have talked about this topic in the past, the reader just wasn't privy to it.  Glad you enjoyed!

I can't wait for the next chapter!  Greatest story ever!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Soon!

I check every day in hope of another installment but alas non! I have to go away for this long weekend so I won't know if you updated until next week.

 

I have really enjoyed this story!!!!

 

So I wonder what Edward has planned for Bella this weekened????

My mind his buzzing with ideas of what he could do knowing that they are both frustrated???hmmmmmm

 

looking forward to Edward's reaction to her tatoo

 

Rachie

Author's Response:

Oh, so sorry you'll have to wait a few extra days!  I know, I've been slow this time.  But hopefully you'll think it was worth the wait!

okay! im dieing here i NEED to know more! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE update more soon ill explode if i dont read more immediatly!!

Author's Response:

No, no!  Don't die or explode!  I am working on the current chapter!  Soon soon!

While trying to wait patiently for the next chapter, I wanted to let you know again how wonderful your writing is.  Of course there are lots of great quotes through the story, for example:

"Only I can make you do that."

"Isabella Swan had just caused me to fall the "F" apart without even being in my presence."

"Your little punishment was....inspriing."

"When I can, I will have you on this piano."

"...before I threw her down and helped her find God."  (OMG!)

"Yes." I was going to make her say it.  (!!)

"Ok, this phone is the devil..."

Of course I could go on and on... but my very favourite quote so far (and shows how much you care about the characters) has to be in his letter when he said:

"I love you because you said "It doesn't matter", and because you said "Yes"." 

That has to be the sweetest because it brought us back to everything Edward was going through in Twilight/Midnight Sun.  It actually brought tears to my eyes!!

Again, great writing!  Update soon!

 

Author's Response:

Wow!  Your review was so thoughtful and so very appreciated.  Some of the quotes made me laugh out loud because they're some of my favorites too (nobody else has mentioned the "this phone is the devil" quote and I thought that was so funny!) and the line from the love letter brings tears to my eyes for the very reason you said.  Thanks for taking the time to do this.

God. I'm out of breath. You're fantastic.

Author's Response:

That's awesome!  Thanks for reviewing!

10, 10, its a 10!!!!!!

Author's Response:

:) Yes it is!

Ooh, I remember so well what Emmet's text is all about, I've been waiting for those posters to turn up again! I take it Edward is still unaware of both the list and Bella's "conversation" with Carlisle?

I'm past being impressed with your writing, you've outdone yourself again. This chapter was fabulous! Once Bella's mind starts wandering there is no telling what new inspiring ideas she'll come up with! The tattoo was pure genius, Edward is so going to lose it. Location? No idea, but the small of her back seems a good place.

Nr 19 done - but tell me, how do you type/hold the phone when both your hands (at least Bella's) are otherwise er... engaged?

Author's Response:

That's right, so far poor Edward is clueless.  I can only imagine Bella was holding the phone against her shoulder.  I think that's workable...and/or speaker phone?  I guess I didn't get quite into the mechanics there, did I???  So glad you're enjoying!

I love this story! I can't wait to see more soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing!  More soon!

I'm way behind with my reviews, sorry! To quote Bella: Holy fucking hell! Edward's piano remained undamaged, but he still has the leather couch to explain, lol!

You keep turning up the sexual tension between them notch by notch, and their physical intimacy has reached amazing levels compared to the first chapter. Every chapter is more erotic and intense than the previous one, you're freakin' amazing! I'm most curious as to how you're going to handle nr 16. That is one issue no author had approached before to my knowledge, and I think the experience could be very intense and erotic. Very much looking forward to your rendering of that hunting expedition!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  Yes, I've been brainstorming #16, that's all I can say on that for now!  So glad you're enjoying the story!

Whew!  i love how this progressed.  It is natural, easy and definately a woolight warning.  Wonderful job.

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story!

OMG. I've just finished reading this and immediately want more. I love your style of writing. You do a great job with continuity of character and have really taken these characters places that I wanted them to go in the books. They're much more rounded and real. I think it's fantastic that Edward has a panty fetish (I always suspected he had some sort of fetish - it's great you gave it a name :) I also like how you've made Bella so much stronger and in control. The domination scene was great - just enough without being over the top. The Sub-plot with Emmett is a great addition as well. I think the blood thing is totally appropriate considering Edward's a vampire. It will be interesting to see how you write the next chapter, because though it's menstrual blood and he's over it b/c he thought he'd lost her, it's still blood and will he be able to stop himself from going further. Hmmmmm. Can't wait for the next installment. Please update soon.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for such a thoughtful review.  I'm glad you found and liked my story.  Next chapter today or tomorrow!