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Reviewer: Heather88 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Wow so I just read all of this in one day...I love it
Author's Response: That's awesome! I'm so glad you found and liked my story!
Reviewer: HannahCullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
AMAZING! :]
I LOVE this story!!!
I need more.. now lol
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Glad you like!
Reviewer: AngelFace2176 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Omg!! Okay, I love you. this is fabulous!!! Please update I wanna see what happens when he sees the tatoo
Author's Response: Soon! Soon! I promise! Chapter 14 was submitted over two days ago...should be up any day now! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Hi I came back last night from my weekend away. it was good. Just wanted to let you know that I am still here when you update (which I hope is soon) but I understand the day-to-day presurres of everyday life.
Looking forward to chpt 14 soon
Rachie
Author's Response: Hi--thanks again. I submitted Chapter 14 on Saturday afternoon. It really should be posted soon. And the next chapter is in the works!
Reviewer: christiemariecullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
OMG Im submersed in this story. Please update soon it is the best lemon fic I have her read
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Ok... let me just say, that I JUST was turned on to this story..lol..and WOW.. My comment that I make when telling anyone about it.. is.. "If I wasn't reading it.. my eyes would roll back in my head"
FRIGGIN AMAZING!!
Well done!
Author's Response: That's awesome! Thanks for spreading the word about it! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update NOW! THIS IS THE BEST FF EVER!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I promise! Chapter 14 is on its way--was submitted Saturday!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Just the right amount of blood talk...no worries!!! I think, inside of a vampire canon, there should most DEFINATELY be talk about blood and sex - both are vital links to our lives!
Beautifully done...love some DTB & DTE!!
~Mandi
Author's Response: Thanks for that! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I can't wait for Saturday morning.
Author's Response: Soon! Soon! Although you'll have to wait one more chapter. But I think you'll enjoy!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
WHOA! Edward came that close to totally losing his self-control, as well as his dare! Don't think he saw that one coming. Carlisle is right, he's gonna have his hands full.
No problems with the blood-talk. Come on people, wer'e talking vampires here! Whoever has a problem with blood, human or otherwise, should definitively read something else. It bothered me somewhat that SM more or less totally omitted that subject. I wondered how you would handle number 17, there aren't really that many options. Either er.. Rosalie's way, or Carlisle's way, and by the looks of it you're going for both. The idea of tasting it from the source has actually been broached before, check out Bella's Naughty Idea by Marjojo if you haven't read it. That option will of course accomplish number 12 at the same time...
Further on number 16, I personally feel it should happen before Bella is changed. After she is changed it will be more about Edward teaching her to hunt or them hunting together, the dynamics will be different. Edward would need to be in on it, it's too dangerous otherwise, and I don't think he'd take too kindly to the idea (more like he'd totally freak out), but I find the vision tantalizing. I realize this could be a hard one to write, but so far you haven't let us down!
I've changed my mind on where Bella got her tattoo: On the inside of her right thigh, the exact spot where Edward marked her in chapter 10.
The weekend is going to be SO interesting....
Author's Response: Thanks for such a thoughtful and engaging review! I really enjoyed it!
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Just read your story and its a good read.
i hope you update soon!
x x Cassie
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: victoria2 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
my boyfriend is in trouble now!!! he hasnt been able to say i love you ... Yet. i am sure this stunt will push him over the edge.
Thank you Thank you for the inspiration.
Author's Response: Ha! Happy to provide a little inspiration! Hope your BF enjoys!
Reviewer: IntoTheNight (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was by far the best chapter yet! Blood talk was fine, wasn't hardcore so it was great. :)
Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was so sexy!! A little unorthodox but sexy. You make Edward and Bella so naughty that it's hot! Update soon, I beg you!!
Author's Response: I think that sums it up about right! XD Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I have to tell you that this story is one of the most fucking hotest stories out there! Seriously. So. Hot. Please...oh please keep it coming!!
Author's Response: I appreciate that very much! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I love you. My husband loves you. Dying for more.
Author's Response: Well, I love you both too! Chapter 14 has been submitted!
Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I love you. My husband loves you. Dying for more.
Author's Response: That's so awesome! Glad you -- and he -- are enjoying!
Reviewer: XcloudcoverX (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
wow this is really really good! cannot wait for more!!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
More soon!!! And i mean SOON!!! I'm obsessed with this story... i love the teasing. Still can't wait till number 8! and 28, 29, and 31! But number 8 is the one i'm looking forward to most! lol. Please update soon, this is an amazing story.
Author's Response: Yes, there are lots of fans of #8! Chapter 14 has been submitted! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
They are vampires. Oh no, where's the next chapter. Must have the next chapter.
Author's Response: It's coming! It's coming! Oh. Don't take that out of context...
Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
i can't wait for the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i want to know what happen next please!!!!!!!!!!!this is great work !!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Woohoo! You're my 1100th review! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I can't remember if I reviewed this or not already, so I'll just say that I love it, and I hope there will be more soon. Also, I think having them enact Rosalie's suggestion would only make an already hot fic even hotter.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying! Chapter 14 was submitted on Saturday afternoon and should be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Truly, I don't know what to say. Can't even form words when thinking wet Edward at the same time.
Author's Response: Yeah, you and me both. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood talk doesn't bother me, not one bit. I think it's understandable, and HOT! Please get well and give us another chapter. Please? This story is very addicting!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback on that. Glad you're enjoying! Chapter 14 has been submitted!
Reviewer: lusts_temptation (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
please please please
UPDATE!!!!
Author's Response: next chapter almost done!
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