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Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Okay... I am just writing this to say two things:
First, CONGRATS ON MAKING THE TOP TEN LIST!!! WOOO!::throws party in your honour::
Secondly, your response to my review made me SOOO happy! hooray for submissive Edward! I could practically dance I'm so happy to hear that :D
okay. /end squee-fest
No go write us a chapter, woman! :)
Author's Response: Yes! All of your devoted reviewing pushed me up onto the list! I couldn't be happier! And, while I am a HUGE, read HUUUGGGEEE devotee of Domward in stories such as The Submissive, for some reason in this particular relationship he seems more submissive to me....so, you have reasons to be happy! SOON!
Reviewer: piratehannelore (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
An update! An UPDATE! YAY! lol. Seriously, this is my new fav. and DomEdward is beyond hot. This entire story is an amazing blend of smut meets plot. Love it! :D
Author's Response: I really loved your smut meets plot line--thanks for that!
Reviewer: PatzRob (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I love the boys and all and I know this was a set up but ur killing me! On with the weekend!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, yes, I know the anticipation is killing everyone! But hopefully you'll think it was worth it!!!!
Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
amazing. all of it. it's great.
Author's Response: Thanks for that! I'm glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: imnotuniqueimmonique (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Really great. I love the setup, but stop teasing us! :D. Keep up the great work, I really appreciate the proofreading.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying. No more teasing, I promise!
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
hmmmm thank you for that :)
a suggestion if i may? have bella see something like THAT *points up*
maybe it already happened later on in the story... idk, i'm probably getting ahead of myself hehehe
we'll see
Author's Response: Keep reading! There are so many interesting things yet to happen! I can't respond to your suggestion or I'll ruin the surprises!!!!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
So, at first, I was a little sad because I've been DYING for the weekend, but I really enjoyed this chapter and I think the talk with the guys was important.
I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to that tattoo- great job! And good luck with getting all the reviews!
Author's Response: I'm glad you saw the need for this chapter. It lays the groundwork for some things that will come! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: playing_with_cullens (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
So sorry to hear that you've been sick. Maybe this will make you feel better...YOU ARE A FREAKING GODDESS!!! This is without a doubt my favorite story on here!!! Can't wait for the next update!! xoxo
Author's Response: Your compliment certain DOES help! Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Once again another great chapter. But I always get so sad when I see that im getting to the end of it and know there will be a short wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know what you mean. Whenever I read one of my favorite stories I watch the little bar on the side of the screen slowly slide down to see how much more of the chapter there is to read! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Wow that was good i like seeing edwards bad boy side its hot. I cant wait to see what the weekend is going to turn out when edward finally see bellas new tatoo.
Author's Response: Yes, more of that to come from Edward! And much to be revealed next chapter!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I love this story!
Oh my gosh...is Edward going to go down on Bella while she has her period? I can understand how that would be a turn on for him...but seriously, the thought of that is EEeww! haha
Great chapter!
Author's Response: You know I can't answer that question! And, either way, let's keep ourselves in the vampire mindset! XD Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
epov!! hurray for epov!! and
oh
em
gee
that list... it'll haunt my dreams now!
great job once again
Author's Response: :) So glad you enjoyed! OMG and OME!
Reviewer: rebmatmak (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
That was awesome! Anxiously awaiting the weekend... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Soon!
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
OK, I can't wait to read about the weekend. I loved the angsty Edward at Great Rock!
Author's Response: Yes, Edward needed to work through those questions and get some advice! More soon! Thanks!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
"But then she becomes one of us which is what she wants?" I heard it more bluntly in his mind: what was the big deal if she got turned when that's what we were planning on anyway?
I always wondered this myself...afterall, it makes sense.
When I received the update alert, I did an energetic happy dance with a lot of silent screaming...I didn't want my husband to think I was being murdered, haha! Great chapter, and I can't WAIT for the next one. Please post soon, I have withdrawals!
Author's Response: Of course Edward would have had an apoplectic fit at Jasper's suggestion had it been made in the actual books, but it is sorta, well, obvious. Not that anyone would want that to happen, but worse case scenario is she gets turned a little ahead of schedule. Glad you enjoyed! I laughed at your last lines there!
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Hooray for the update!
I adore your the playful banter between Emmett, Edward and Jasper. It's so entertaining! Well done.
I'm not a fan of the dominant Edward thing. It kind of turns me into a scooby. I'd much rather see Bella tying that boy down (pft, as if *anything* could actually hold him down!) But Emmett saying "You might consider letting her, uh, take the lead, set the pace, you know?" totally makes me hope for future chapters. hahaha :)
It's really so lovely to write my terrible, angst-ridden story and then come on over here and read this incredibly sexy romance. lolol, so thanks for making sunshine!
Author's Response: Yes, Gravity is an angst fest for sure! You're the yin to my yang! Well, the dominant Edward is only going to be one of my fantasies played out. And something tells me Edward will enjoying being dominated more than dominating. So there is hope there...XD Glad you liked!
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Girl...You.Are,Such.A.Tease!!!!! U are worst than Edward!!!! Cool!!! Love it!!
But let me hungry for more!!!! :-( Please!!! More!!
I LOVE Emmett!!! i've always loved him in all the books he is just hilarious!!!
i love that he's so bold!!!!i was laughing so much,keep it up,he really spice things up.
Please again MORE!!!!...
Author's Response: So glad you liked! And I like Emmett too--he's surprisingly fun to write and adds some great comic relief--SM could have done much more with his character, I think! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I don't know why you would apologize for this chapter. As always, it was very well done and completely fits within the story line. Jasper, Carlisle and Emmett's involvement and advice to Edward should not only be expected but REQUIRED. Jasper as always is the painfully blunt logical one. You did great with this.
I laughed out loud with the phrase;
"Emmett I appreciate your enthusiasm, but this would be easier for me to talk about if you could manage to tone down your inner twelve year old."
Thank you so much for including Edward's discovery of the yellow panties. Seeing the simple words; "Holy Hell." as his reaction actually made me wish I had put them there myself....strains of Fiona Apple's "Criminal" sound off in my head; "I've been a bad bad girl...." and I lick my lips in thinking of the punishment.
~rubs hands together~
I am salivating for the rest of this story. Bated breath and all that...
Author's Response: This was an awesome and thoughtful review--thank you so much! I agree that this chapter was necessary for both plot and character development, but I know some people will be disappointed not to move more into their weekend, um, activities! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
oh my god
that's all i'm gonna say
and you were right, alice DID redeem herself
so good... and i'm serious on this, i think this is def the best vamp E and human B story i've ever read
Author's Response: Yeah, she really does. And the fun thing for me about Alice is I never envisioned her playing the big role she has ended up playing in this story, but now that I've written it it seems so obvious. Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: professormoody (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Hooray another update!!!
Author's Response: XD Thanks for reviewing! More soon!
Reviewer: l a (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I'm still so new to all of this, actually thinking of working on my own story, but I'm having a lot of fun reading your stuff. I know you're looking for reviews so I figured I'd help you out and maybe get the next chapter even sooner!
Happy Writing!
Author's Response: You are awesome! You wrote my 1200th review! That is insane! And I love it! Thanks, and good luck with your stories!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
This story is just plain fun to read. I chuckle and laugh at your Emmett (you write him VERY well) and Jasper is sweet! I love the domineering Edward...YUM! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for saying this is fun. That was my intent from the very beginning. I love stories that make me laugh and smile and generally act stupid in front of the inanimate object that is my laptop! Glad you're enjoying Emmett here--he is surprisingly fun to write!
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Ungh. Do you have any idea how terribly arousing this story is? Of course you do, you saucy minx. Seriously. Hot. Damn. My husband loves you, by the way ;)
Author's Response: Ooh. Saucy minx. I love that. Glad you're enjoying, and your hubby too. More power to ya!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I love that Edward realizes that Bella is so courageous & strong. It was fun to hear him admit it in his point of view.
Good interaction between the brothers-of course Jasper would bring that up as the ever-practical tactician.
Well-written!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out that particular observation of Edward's. I think it's pretty important to understand their relationship. Glad you liked!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
OOhhh la la!! I can't wait for more!!! I love this story! I think she is really in for it now...
Author's Response: I think they're BOTH in for it now! Thanks for reviewing!
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