Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Laura,
you are so going to make my day, you have no idea. My latest obsession/fantasy/wet dream, whatever, are Dom/sub stories, and your're about to give us dominant Edward... You're SO my favorite author right now! (Check out The Submissive by tara sue me, freakin' incredibly erotic story).
Back to the chapter. Very much liked the interaction between the Cullen men, Edward needed to discuss his fears and doubts and get some solid advice. Loved Emmett, he's always crude with a one-track mind set on sex, but nevertheless witty and funny and can be counted on to hand out sound and serious advice when necessary. And he quoted Bella's last poster, obviously we're not done with those yet!
"Enjoying your gift, Edward? There's more where that came from."
"She was a human, for Christ's sake. I'm supposed to be dazzling her."
Just brilliant! Hope you have recovered fully now (so we get next chapter asap!)
Author's Response: Oh bb, you don't have to tell me about The Submissive. I've been totally whipped *cough* by that story for weeks. And cannot fathom waiting another minute for The Dominant to finally come out!!!!! So glad you liked the chapter and thanks for mentioning some specific lines you enjoyed!
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
That was fun---I loved the male bonding night. I was mortified for Edward. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed that conversation! Thanks!
Reviewer: mlross (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story. Please hurry with the next chapter! Can't wait.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAASE update as soon as possible!
Author's Response: I will~
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
omg - i have spent all day reading this and i am kicking myself because i didn't find your lovely story sooner! umm..hot, and sexy and oh so delicious!!! on with the weekend woman :)
Author's Response: Glad you found it now and that you're enjoying!
Reviewer: MrsJasperHale (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
OMG that was hot. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
sweet jesus!
that's all i'm thinking about.... just... wow
i have a black couch in my house, i will never look at it the same way ever
ever
Author's Response: Ha! Hopefully you have someone you can recreate that scene with! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Alienore (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
So glad to see another post from you because I know it means you're feeling better. I'm also glad to hear you say you think you're on the mend. Positive thoughts sent in your direction!
This chapter builds nicely towards something very special - we hope! - and you're tackling the characters and the situation in a way that feels so right and so believable.
If you're wanting another place for the list, how about the cafeteria at school? Perhaps the table where Edward and Bella had their chat before he ditched biology class and she didn't? I was going to suggest the Cullens' table at the cafeteria and then thought that perhaps that might freak Alice a bit too much.... as if!
Hope you continue to improve.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the well wishes! I like the cafeteria idea! I'll think about that! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
i got this story rec'd by a friend and all she talks abotu is the couch chapter so the anticipation's kiling me
just thought i'd let you know :)
as always, perfection
Author's Response: That's awesome that people are talking about this story! So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: twilightgirly12 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
You better finish it soon! I love this story and its gonna kill me to wait! Im sure the wait will be worth it though. =)
Author's Response: XD Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: tryfina75 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
OK so I'm new to this site and found your story this morning. I love love love your use of different POV's (especially Emmett's - he is my favorite charater in the Twilight series). I was so into your story that I read thru all 14 chapters and am now anxiously waiting for the next post. Please please post soon!!!
Author's Response: That's awesome! Welcome to the site and to my story! So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: cullen-gal (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
.....because I am loving this story so much!!!!!! Yey!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: cullen-gal (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just thought I would add another, to help you up the review ladder......
Author's Response: That's mighty awesome of you! Thanks!
Reviewer: cullen-gal (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Duuuuuude! That was great..but I want more...more pleeeeeeease!
Author's Response: Is that an Emmett-type 'dude' there??? XD
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
whew! I'm at the lib reading this... if i squeak any louder with the next chappie i'm def getting kicked out lol
soooo good! great job, for reals! beat that moral side of edward down
with a stick
hard, long... i digress heheh
Author's Response: This made me laugh out loud! Loved it! Hmmm....the library...now that's an interesting idea!
Reviewer: mitihifi (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
i wihs i had somethign more original to say, but this really is A-MAZ-ING!!! keep writting!!
Author's Response: Original or not, I like it! Thanks!
Reviewer: ein_gutes_leben (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
yummy. haha can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jedishelly1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Loved it, as ever!
Author's Response: So glad--thanks!
Reviewer: Wendyloohoo (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Holy Crow! I can't wait! I loved the interaction between Edward and his brothers and father. Emmett as usual can be counted on for comic relief as well as a nugget of wisdom, which makes him such a great character. I LOVE that Edward is taking his turn and cannot WAIT to see what happens this weekend. Please, please update soon.
Author's Response: So glad you liked the chapter and Edward's time with his family! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
ur so mean wit the cliffhangers!!! leaving us wit only our crazy thoughts to wat dirty things edward has planned for this weekend!! lol ... Hope you update again soon :)
Author's Response: So sorry to be mean! But, on the bright side, you wrote my 1300th review! So you rock!
Reviewer: serchn4heavensg8 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
What r u waiting for!?!?!
You've got me unable to read anything else!! Where's the next chapter??!?!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ha! I can type 90-100 words a minute but when my chapters are typically 6-8K long, it takes a little while! Not to mention I want to get this one just right since all y'all seem to have scarily high expectations for this next chapter! XD Thanks!
Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Post soon! :)
Author's Response: I will!
Reviewer: mitihifi (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
a-maz-ing!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Incredible...best story EVER!
Author's Response: That's too kind! Thanks!
Reviewer: wolvesnvamps (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
It takes a very strong writer to create a story about love and sex and not have it be cheesy or over the top without any real emotions or believability.
You have made this story fun, smutty and emotional. I feel as though I am getting the real story of Edward and Bella struggling with their sexuality and emotions-not some fairy tale that is completely unrealistic.
You captured something great here-can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I really liked and appreciated your review. So thoughtful and encouraging! Thanks so much!
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