please make the next chapter soon this is like my fav story... pretty please with a cherry on top

haha

x

Author's Response:

Well, if you're offering cherries...

You are one awesome storyteller!  Blood be d....d, that's a great chapter!

Author's Response:

That's an awesome thing for you to say!  Thanks!

Oh yes. And about the tattoo. Perhaps the sexing was a little too much for my brain to handle. But I'm just confused about it. Did Bella get the whole letter, just a portion, just his name? Or... 'Cause that was one long ass, but beautiful, letter. I can't quite imagine her having that on her ass or something LOL I'm sure you'll reveal where she got it... but I'm dying to know WHAT it is exactly. I've reread that part and I still can't process it. I'm stupid. IDK. But your writing rocks tons. You don't even know.

 

Well, I'm sure you know very well how great your writing is! But still!

Author's Response:

Just his name...I'll go back and take a look at that and make sure it's clear in the chapter.  Just thinking about the whole letter though is pretty freaking hilarious.  The only place THAT would fit would be on her back!  Picture it.  It's a funny image.  Just his name as he signed it.  :)

Ohhh cursed is the wait for more! I CANNOT believe I have to wait! I hope he tortures her and DIRTY TALKS a mutherfckinload. OMG.

Author's Response:

This made me laugh out loud--thanks for that!

Here's your review~

Love this story. Though I'm sure you already know that, cause i review all the time..

Yeah, I loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

WOW!!! I wish real life didn't get in the way for me to finally finish readingi t but alas i have to go... *sniffles*

that was sooooo incredibly amazing! and the little details always get to me - like how bella has petnames for edward... "baby"

sigh

it always sort of pissed me off she didn't in the books... anyway! great job and so incredibly hot and perfect and wonderful and whew!

Author's Response:

I have a certain softness for 'baby' too!  I know, doesn't it suck when RL keeps you from reading Twilight fanfiction?  That annoys me too.  Don't the kids KNOW I am trying to read about a Dominant Edward right now????  XD  Thanks for the review!

Just because you said you would post sooner if you got more reviews, I will do another review.

You are awesome.  Update soon.  ;)

 

Author's Response:

I accept bribery.  Thanks!

OMG I hate you so much. This was the hottest thing I have ever read. Dom Bella is even better than Dom Edward. I wanted to be her right then. You better NEVER stop writing! <3333 EVERRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!

 

And I really don't hate you. I say it with love!

Author's Response:

This made me laugh out loud!  I sorta have to agree about the Dom Bella.  Well, actually, it's not so much the Dom Bella as it is the Sub Edward that really gets me.  And, I have a feeling that Edward has a hidden submissive in him in this story...

ahh i am so excited to read about what edward has planned for their weekend please hurry!! xoxo

Author's Response:

XD Soon!

Firstly I hope you are feeling better!  Secondly, post faster!!!  :)  I can't wait to see what you have in store for them this weekend... it would be funny if Edward made Bella accept ridiculously extravagant gifts and not let her pout... lol.  Keep up the wonderful work!

Author's Response:

Hmm...someone has been peaking around inside my brain!

Oh my gosh! That last bit was fucking hot. It's fucktastic how quickly the list is being crossed off, one by one! MOOOORE! <3 I think she should come up with a shitload more of things to do.

 

So I really really like your writing. I used to write this really huge piece, but I decided to put an end to it. It wasn't about Twilight, unfortunately, since I didn't know about Twilight then. But something in your story sparked an idea = ] And I do actually want to... request? I don't know lol I loved the raw emotion of their 'talk' in Edward's room about why he had been so distant after them having fun. Bella was so hurt and felt so rejected. I thought it would be something great for Edward to do something - not physically - to harm her... ego, maybe? I have no idea what would be a good hurter lol. But Alice is like her best friend and confidant, besides Edward. So when Bella feels really hurt and gets away from Edward, Alice'll rush to her and comfort her. Then since they're all connected, everyone is like 'wtf' when Alice ushers Bella out to her car to take her home. Edward quickly comes out and tries to talk Bella into staying but she's like pissed off and sad and doesn't want to be around him for a while. So she clings onto Alice and Emmett comes outside. Bella pleads with Emmett to not let Edward near her until she's okay again. BOOM.

Okay, I don't know where this idea came out from all the sexiness of your story, but it did LOL it's just an idea and you certainly do not have to do anything with it if it completely creeped you out or you're just like 'wtf is wrong with her' lol. But I just had to get it off my chest. I think it'd be great to see this scenario in the awesomeness of your writing. OOh! And maybe to make it smutty, it can be like right, literally, before they're gonna sex it up or maybe in the middle of... where she's not expecting it at all. And it wouldn't be the first time he'd done this. So she's fed up and shit. Idk. Okay. I'll stop lol Just wanted to throw that idea out before I bursted. Maybe you'd like to write about it, maybe not = ] Oh yes. And it could be for a whole different/new story hehe

This story rocks my fcking socks off.

Author's Response:

I love that you're so into the story that it's getting your creative juices flowing too!  Reviewers make suggestions all the time, so don't worry about that.  And, as I always say, I'll take it under advisement!!!!  Glad you're enjoying!