omg omg omg omg omg.....keep writing!!!!! i got so excited when i saw that this story has been updated...both forms of excitment..haha great stroy... i  love it  love it love it..!!!!

wow...wow... thats all i can think of is wow...

What the $#%$! Now that is some...girl I can't even talk!!!! Thank GAWD I don't have to wait to read the next chapter! I'm off....

that.... was .... so fricken hot

Soooo hot!

OMC.  :)  Love the update... it managed to be super sweet and super steamy all in one.  I'm eagerly awaiting what is to come!

It's offical, Im going to hell, and it's all your fault!

Gluttony and Lust are both deadly sins, and you are like a drug dealer pimpin out both. I think the lust is pretty self explainatory, but the gluttony is because I should be satified with that mega chapter, but I'm not...I WANT MORE! See...straight to hell wearin gasoline panties.

But don't you worry, you keep right on doing what chu do, and i'll worry about my eternal damnation!

 

 

Damn that was good.

Awesome chapter!  I love it.  Controlling Edward is really, really great.

I admit, I may have squealed when I saw this story on the update list.  It's one of my favorites.

*has cold shower*...nope, that won't do it...*has another cold shower*....*considers moving to the antarctic with laptop so as to be able to finish this AMAZING story without combusting*....

 

need i say it, this rocks.

Thank you! Thank you!

Your writing is more descriptive, more compelling, more reasonable/rational (given the fantasy of the whole Twilight universe) than that on which you base your story. I hope that the various Romance erotica publishers scan fanfic for gifted writers, because you REALLY should be getting paid for writing this good.

Can't wait for the next chapter! If it's not fully written yet, why not include an intimate scene at the bow of the ferry? When the weather's bad, everyone stays inside (I lived in the Pacific NW for 20 years), so they would definitely have some privacy! Plus, there's something thrilling about the power you feel as you watch the boat slicing through the deep water ...

Thanks again! Wish they had 20 stars as a rating!

Author's Response:

This is an incredibly kind, thoughtful, and encouraging review--thanks for that. 

*panting furiously* Ms. Cullen, how do I love this weekend? Let me count the ways....

1. Well, you've forever ruined sorbet for me, that's for sure. I will never again be able to eat it without thinking of that last drop going down her chin and neck, and E's response (SO yum)!

2. Not only E watching B shower, but seeing the tattoo reveal from HIS perspective, was probably the hottest thing you've written to date...

3. I KNEW IT! I just knew that tattoo would be his name, written in his own hand, somewhere by her heart. Sigh. So lovely and his response was golden.

4. Her GIVING the blood to Edward, especially her sweet way of explaining that her body didn't need it to further entice him to take it, was exquisite. Watching them both struggle for control during those moments were priceless. You actually convinced your Edward to do it, too, which is so awesome. Sigh again.

5. Edward's claiming Bella's nether regions as his...SOOOO hot...

6. The growl. Oh, the growl. Yes, it's way hot, no surprises there, but you made it so much hotter. Oh, god.

7. The promise of remembrance once Bella is changed and getting even for it...you just may have to keep "The List" going forever, or you will have mutiny on your hands, my dear!

8. Edward, wet, hot, cumming in the shower, ummmm, does it really get any better than that?  Methinks, NO!

And silly Laura, you should know by now that you have nothing to fear about our responses to the weekend--we all needed it to happen so badly and you most certainly delivered! I will ALWAYS be your whore, R+R whenever it is required. Remember, I signed up for the site after many months simply so I could review and sing your praises. Oh, I can't wait for the next chappie!! :)

Author's Response:

As always, a particularly entertaining and encouraging review--thanks so much for all the specific mentions of things you enjoyed--many of my favorites were on your list!  Thanks again!