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Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
WOW! That was not just hot, it was well written, and just... wow. I think that their weekend away is already exceeding expectations, so don't worry about that!
Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Fucking glorious. Incandesent. Lovely. Intense. Gut-wrenching. Hot.
And I loved every single minute of it.
Reviewer: IleanaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
When he said,"...before I help her find God."
That was it for me!!! I'm off to see him return the favor! His turn should be very... very...poor thing he's going to kill her!
Reviewer: mrsalreyami (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Seriously in need of a cold shower now...
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Ohhh, Edward can punish me any time... and seriously... Robert the butler, gotta love that. His last name doesn't begin with a P does it? That resort looks beautiful! Count me in on the fund pooling... Maybe we could convince Robert that there are some 'NM' scenes needing to be filmed there and then persuade him to reinact the scenes from this story... ohh, a whole new realm of fantasies here i come! Brilliant chapter and i can't wait for the rest of the weekend.
Author's Response: Why, yes, I rather do think Robert the Butler's last name begins witih a P....hmm.... Yeah, your little dream there about Rob is such a nice one...!
Reviewer: nrthstr1980 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I should be studying for my midterms, but instead I'm giggling with girlish glee that there's an update to this story.
I love you for giving me something fun to look forward to while studying, and yet I hate you for possibly causing me to flunk out of college.
Updating again this weekend might help me sooth the bruised ego I'm going to get after my miterms tomorrow..... just sayin...
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The amazing, yet scary, thing is that 'Closer' was playing on my iTunes throughout the first half of this chapter....so I was getting a very real sense of what Bella was experiencing....YOU FIEND, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
and the blood didn't bother me, i was just worrying the whole time that one of the other Cullens would overhear and disturb edward on the phone...
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
WOW that was omg great freakin hot i cant wait to see what else happens loved this story
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
smokin' =P
Reviewer: sunshine-sue (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
SO HOT!!
Reviewer: Colonelsam08 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Oh. My. God. Soooooo steamy (tehe). And the first day isn't even over yet. Wow. Excellent job! Positively cannot wait for next chapter!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Laura! I'm... speachless and incredibly upset that aunt flo is visiting and my hubs isn't a vampier ;)
I enjoyed this chapter alot. Poor Edward and the chalenge of his strength, but he did ask for it.
And the reveal of the tattoo? Perfect.
Reviewer: piratehannelore (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
So far, you have blown my expectations out of the water. :D Can i keep Edward, please!? Damn!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
by the way. today is my birthday so this was a perfect gift :)
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
okay. i dont even know what to say. first of all this chapter went far beyond my expectations! I went to Aeries website, and the place is BEAutiful, great pick.
Im not sure why, but this whole blood thing is EXTREMELY hot. I mean, i love it. I only wish Edward didn't have so much self control. The way Bella was begging for it....
and finally, Edward touching himself= such a freakin turn on. Especially his thoughts and visions while he was doing it.
Anyway, Congratulations for the total success of this story. I've loved it from the beginning and I knew others were bound to love it to. Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: This is an awesome review! So glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
okay more then 3 words. I can do this..
um.. you rocked my world?
I will be dreaming of this chapter tonight when I go to sleep?
This might be the best damn smut like story I have ever read? yeah
all of the above
Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I am not going to elaborate but that chapter was freakin awesome! I think I need to re-read it.
Reviewer: myedwardismine (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OMG OMG OMG!!!! And you're worried we might be disappointed?!?!!? Ha! As if!!! As usual you've totally blown us away!!! Did I say... OMG?!?!?!!!! When my in-box chimed with your update I actually said "YES" out loud. Yes, that was OUT LOUD!!!! You have us so hooked!
I loved Edward's reaction to her tattoo...it was perfect how you switched to his POV right there. He was trying to be in control for the first time in two weeks and she goes and turns him to mush...yet again!!! It always backfires...love it!
".....and it's mine all mine all mine all mine."
"But I'm not done with you. You will come again."
"For the love of God Bella, stay still." (!!)
"...and I couldn't give up what I was managing to get." (Almost fell off the chair there.)
I loved how he got to "taste" her at the source without him actually doing that deed...yet! That's what makes your writing so much more realistic...the fact that he was holding back his tongue, afraid to lose all control with her. Through everything, you still manage to maintain their real characters.
Also loved how you ended this one. The fact that her blood and everything else had him pushed so far over the edge was...well... there are no words so I won't even try.
And then how you still manage to sneak in those little comedic bits...like when he's trying desperately to leave the room thinking, "Must go now" but she calls him back and he leans in "Yes Bella?" Well we can just picture the torture the poor man is in at this point! LOL!!!!
This is without a doubt the best chapter yet Ms Cullen!!! You're writing is "exquisite" and we can't wait for the next installment. Thanks for getting this one out so quickly.
Ok, now that I've finished my wine, I must go for that shower!
Author's Response: Thanks for mentioning so many specific things you liked here. The "Must go now" line made me smile too. Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for the thoughtful review!
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
wow what a great chapter I loved it and I can not wait to see what will come next
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
oh dear lord.
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
hahahaha nice line from Alice at the end there!! great way to end the chapter!
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
YEEEHAWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! GO BELLA!!!! urgh, am so very jealous of your imagination....but in awe of it also...*bows down in reverence*
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
ome, there are no words...that was just, ungh...
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Wow, I have no words. You keep out doing yourself. I loved the tattoo reveal. I can't wait to see how the rest of the weekend unfolds. Update soon.
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
hgnahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....*carries on whimpering for about an hour*
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