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Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
i anticipate dominate, bring edward cullen to his knees bella hahahaha. good job.
Reviewer: Krrristi (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
umm sofucking hot. that was so damn creative
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
all i can say is wow. there are no words to say how amazing this is and if there are i can think of them right now.
Reviewer: meghan (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Amazing as usual i cant wait until theres more!
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
So.Fckin.HOTT!!!! lol ... I friggin loved this chapter. I think I might need 2 go take a really really cold shower now!! lol I can't wait 2 find out what happens next
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
i have nothing to say except WOW. please write fast. i can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: NicoleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
um. wow. like really. wow. you, my dear should write romance novels or something...your way way too good at this to not get paid for it.
Reviewer: lauraleeor (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OH MY. Thank you.
Reviewer: clumsy like bella (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I don't think any review ever will come close to saying how damn incredible this story is, and how talented you are.
Every time you update it's like Christmas, and the presents just keep getting better! Thank you so much for sharing!
Reviewer: IleanaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Okay...well lets just say that I will never be able to listen to Beethoven again without thinking about Edward...Thank you for that. I just downloaded it to my ipod!
I will never be able to look at a piano without smirking to myself again....thank you. Not to mention the candle wax from the chapter before...thank you again.
And I guess there is only one word left to say...
MORE!
Reviewer: PatzRob (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
You've out done yourself again Mrs. Cullen:) the only way that this chapter would be better is if bella and edward got a little help from the butler! Robert ;) good one!
Author's Response: Yes. That would be good. But I'm pretty certain this Edward wouldn't be into sharing. Particularly when he wasn't so pleased with Bella pleasuring herself. But it's still nice to think about!!!!
Reviewer: amp23 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I love this story and I am amazed that you have somehow made going down on a girl during her period not just tolerable, but freaking sexy!
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Oh my good god in heaven. That was seriously the hottest fucking thing I've read. Insanely so. I'm finding myself without adequate words. His control was amazing. Her gift, incredible. Holy hell. I think *I* forgot to breathe during part of this. I can't wait to see what else they get up to over their weekend together.
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Once again, I have to say WOW.... just WOW. I love this story and can't get enough of it. And don't be concerned about the blood thing... I mean, Edward's a vampire. I think what Rosalie said about blood and sex being intertwined for them was perfect. I can not wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Please hurry!
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
oh god that was fucking HOT.
i think i need a cold shower now... haha
great job.
Reviewer: Beckylady (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Amazing. Just, freaking, amazing. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Please pardon my french ahead of time. Holy Fucking Shit!! Oh Oh Fuck!!! Damn Fuck Yea!!!! Ugh yes yes yes!!!!!!!!! That was just fucking.....fucking.....amazing!!! Jeez amazing!!!! A-fucking-mazing!!!!
Reviewer: amycullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Wow, that was hot! I am loving this story!!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Thank you, thank you, that was so HOT!
Reviewer: Dr Jones (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
oh! Oh! oH! OHHHHHHHHHH! you are an evil, evil, evil woman and I am going to hell along side you! What if Edward were to use the showerhead on Belle??!!! OMG - That image just ..... well... DAMN.... mmmmuuuuuggggh!
Author's Response: Hmmm...that IS an interesting suggestion!
Reviewer: MIna (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Awesome, thats all i can say, Hope its not going to be too long for the next part. I don't know how they are restraining themselves. Will they make it too the wedding...... This is great i'm really enjoying reading this. please continue soon
Author's Response: Yes, the restraint issue is becoming, well, an issue. You realize, dear lady, that you wrote my 1600th review! 1600. Incredible--thanks!
Reviewer: Dr Jones (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Just read it again... I think I'm self-combusting... I'm going to turn into a puddle before you update again! That growl is the hottest damn thing ever.. Have you heard the moan Edward (RPatt, of course) gives at the end of Twilight when he latches onto Belle's arm to suck out the venom, and then the growl? OMG!!!!! Listen to that and read this chapter, and if it doesn't give you an instant orgasm, you need your libido checked!! Thank god I have both a husband and a detachable shower head!!
Author's Response: Thanks for mentioning and appreciating the growl. That's definitely one of my favorite things about this chapter. I mean, come on, can you imagine???
Reviewer: angelsbabe01 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I'm loving it! I hope you write at least a couple chapters after there married and she is a vampire, so they will be both on equal grounds that would be hot! :)
Reviewer: shell29bell (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
damn. Awesome!
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Um ok, lady, you done good. I'm not sure how, but you keep topping yourself...it's amazing. Seriously--I can barely type.
*dies*
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