god you are great!

Holy shit... holy shit... holy shit... holy shit!!! Honey... no disappointment here! I can barely breathe!

 

I cannot WAIT until Part II!

it's getting hot in here........ ;P yummy chapter hahaha

ok. wow. give me a sec to think..... FREAKING AMAZING!!!!! i know that eventually this must end, but is there anyway that you can write something along these lines everyday for the rest of my life? lol. LOVE IT. SO worth the wait!

Oh my lord.

That was fuckin' hot! Wow...I'm speechless.

I was surprised that she showed him the tatoo..for some reason I was thinking she would wait until after the wedding, but I totally loved how he found out about it! It was hot, and sexy, and sweet all at once!

And Edward being demanding and dominant is sooo hot! Phew..

Great chapter! Seriously, I love this story so much. It's probably unhealthy :) haha

Author's Response:

Yes, I debated the best time for the reveal of the tattoo, but as he'd already seen her chest naked before, and she knew he was planning to allow them to play over this weekend, she came to the conclusion that there was no way to keep the tattoo hidden until the wedding unless she was willing to give up on being intimate this weekend.  Glad you liked!

STUNNED. DUMB-FOUNDED. FROZEN. AROUSED BEYOND BELIEF! (I'm seriously pinching the bridge of my nose right now...) I need a minute here....(breathing's still a bit erratic)

Just one more minute...

Are you like some kind of sex and lust guru or something? I can't begin to tell you just how HOT that was! My God, I'm gonna need a cold shower after that!

WOMAN, you did NOT disappoint! Everthing I could have EVER hoped for was in this chapter, and more! It was exciting, romantic, funny (poor Bella spilling butter on her outfit! So like her, too!), and HOLY HELL...sexy as sin! YIKES! I got a chill just now.

In all seriousness, I really appreciate how you approached the whole "bleeding Bella - Edward's temptation to 'taste' at the source" thing. It never felt uncomfortable or unpleasant to read. Just the opposite. You stayed true to character by not having Edward "surrender" for fear of losing control with Bella. That her safety was on the forefront of his mind in such a blindingly erotic moment was indicative of his overall need to protect his love from all harm, especially himself.

But thank you for giving us that final scene of Edward "releasing" himself in the shower farthest away from Bella. It would've been disappointing if he hadn't surrendered to THAT need. By not doing so, it would've made his shared moment with Bella that less intense in that he would've been able to easily suppress his need. But by allowing him that release, his moment with Bella is now evermore sexy.

BTW, just where exactly is Bella's tattoo? I figure it has to be low enough that it's not visible through any clothing, like a tank top or especially her wedding gown. Right above her nipple? Just curious.

And let me say in the end that I loved how Bella revealed her tattoo to Edward. It was spontaneous and exciting. And Edward's reaction was priceless. I was expecting a more sexually charged response, like him grabbing and ravishing her (without going all the way). But your way was better. It gave the gesture a more romantic and meaningul purporse, rather than just an invite to a sexual encounter.

And they've only been at the resort a half a day! Lot's more where this came from! WOO-HOO!

No lie, this is the hottest thing out there. You DESERVE every praise and acknowledgement! NOW BRING IT ON! MORE!!!!

(PS: thanks for the link to the resort. Helped heaps in mental images of the scenes.)

Author's Response:

This is an incredibly awesome review.  On the tattoo--if you picture a breast as a clock, the tattoo would be located about about 10/11 o'clock but low and inside so as to be hidden by most tank tops, etc.  I loved your sex/love guru question--hilarious, and I wish!!!  Initially I had planned to end it before he went to the other bedroom, but he was screaming in my ear for release and it just didn't feel right.  That last paragraph came out in about 20 seconds.  And I couldn't agree with you more about how important it is to the chapter!  So glad you enjoyed!

Cold shower anyone?  Anyone?  What a great chapter.  A great LONG chapter.   How the frell did you write it and not end up in a big puddle beside your hard drive?

It's a damn shame that Bella's memory of this weekend is going to be toasty once she's been changed.  Otherwise, she would know exactly how to serve up that pint that Carlisle drew from her when she was human.  (And I can't believe I just wrote that.)

I guess as long as I'm embarrassed, I will also point out that if Bella was concerned about the blood issue on her wedding night, any gynecologist can take care of her hymen relatively painlessly.  (Again with the can't believe I just wrote that.) 

Author's Response:

Who said I wasn't a big puddle!??  Don't be embarrassed.  I'm already considering whether her hymen might be broken ahead of time to avoid the virgin blood issue, but haven't decided what if anything I want to do there.  So glad you enjoyed!

ok. i just wanted to review before i read it so i skipped down to the bottom. im excited!! lol.  ill review again to rave about how much i love it!

This chapter was so hot! Wow. I am proud of Edward.

I am glad that you put the little bit about Edward thinking that going down on her wouldn't be a good thing...that he would be degrading her. I feel that he would really feel that way because of the time he comes from and how proper he is. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

I agree.  Though he ain't gonna hold out on that forever.  Jus' sayin'!

this chapter was so awesome. it was tasteful yet smutty at the same time. can't wait to read about the rest of the weekend.

Truly truly the best story I've ever read!  This makes me love Edward and Bella even more.  So awesome the way you word things and how you literally bring them to life.  I feel like I am there or something!!  Gosh, to be really honest, I wish I was the Bella in your story...

There was no disappointment in this story whatsoever...anything but!  I don't know how you do it!  But please keep doing it!!!!

Hey!  You marked #17 as 'accomplished'!  What about her "donation" that was left with Carlisle?  You won't forget that little thread, will you??

...damn that boy's restraint!  Nose and lip... bah-humbug.  LOL

Author's Response:

The blood donation scene will still play out.  A lot on the list has been only really partially accomplished, so there will be much more list accomplishing once they're married and then again once she's changed.  Now you knew I couldn't get you (or them?) all the way there just yet!

oomg!!! its veeery sexy!!!! i love how u write!!!!!