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Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
0.0 Nice job !!!
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Holy. Fucking. Hell.
First of all, thank you for cranking out such along chapter! I adore you more than I can say.
And secondly, this chapter kicked my ass. In the best way possible. :) I have to say - I kind of wanted the tattoo somewhere less traditional. I'm not sure why. But I loved his reaction nonetheless.
"This is mine, Bella. Mine." and "I was dismissed. I was dismissed?! Fucking little beautiful tease.
Wow. Just. Wow. I am not being very articulate right now, so maybe I will type out a better review after I have recovered. Keep it up, my dear!
Reviewer: Team Edward (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I'm supposed to be working and studying for midterms and I haven't been able to stop reading ur story. I definately need to get myself an Edward ASAP...LOVES IT!
Reviewer: Arafinn (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Holy. Freaking. Hell. You dealt with such a potentially controversial subject in such a different way...and it's perfect. And so realistic in the sense that Edward struggled...that he didn't just go for it, but did as much as he could possibly handle even tho he thought (thank you for that description) about wanting to do more. Thank you! *wink*
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
"Remember that night at Goat Rocks when...." hahaha way to make the chapter both smexy AND funny!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
-fans self- I have GOT to stop reading this at work! Much love, lady.
Reviewer: csa03 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Nice work! Really enjoying the way you've put it all together. Curious about where it will lead and how you will end it. Can't wait for part 2 of the weekend.
Reviewer: Krrristi (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
so hot! and i always wondered how they responded to periods...nice :)
Reviewer: Zico1225 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OMFG - this is intense! Amazing. So. Hot. My heart is beating so fast I may have to go have a cold shower to calm down! This is fantastic. I love everything...when he asks her to kiss him; watching her eat.... and the entire shower scene is FUCKING INCREDIBLE. You are seriously, seriously talented - you manage to convey passion, lust and love so brilliantly. You are an awesome writer. I heart you so much.
PS - one day, please write the chapter of when they play this game after Bella has been changed!
pps - no need to reply to this review (you gonna get 1000's I'm sure) - it's enough that you will read it.
ppps - (last one) count me in for the villa rental!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
okay, laura cullen, it is official. you are a freakin super genius.
Reviewer: Nicoli412 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I am SPEECHLESS!!! That was incredibly awesome! I am more and more convinced that I need to find myself an Edward..haha. Great Job!!
Reviewer: Lj_action (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
i am addicted to this story!!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Congratulations on reaching the most revieved list! You really deserve it! This story is brilliant and don't worry, this chapter deffinately lived up to expectations. I'm thrilled that the weekend is lasting for another two chapters. I can't wait! >.<
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
my GOSH! please post the half.... im so wowed right now. U EXCEEDED OUR EVERY EXPECTATION LADY!!!. we really hope you keep them coming. (=
Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
wow... just wow.. I love the way he still takes the time to just say "I adore you" and makes it a point to make it not just about their physical love... it's the Edward we all know and love *swoon* ... although I'd be lying if I said the sexy scenes weren't blowing my mind as well! You rock!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I loved it, of course. The only thing that may have bothered me a little bit was the big reveal of the tattoo. I guess I was expecting more from Edward somehow? Like kissing it, licking it, that kind of thing? Playing with it I guess? Don't know if that sounds ridiculous or not. That, and I honestly was looking forward to him eating her out. I am guessing some of your readers were a little icked though. Seriously though, from a vampire standpoint it's got to be incredibly hot bloodplay.
Anyway, I did enjoy his dominating side, it was good to see! Not to mention spanking, I bet that was something he never thought of with Bella.
Reviewer: Selene08 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Way hott!! Gotta love Domward!
Reviewer: gkk (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
OMG! Edward has *GOT* to find this list!
I don't want to sound impertinent but... ::grin:: What if he found it, added some of his own "items" and that would be how Bella would discover that HE KNOWS! LOL
Not that you need any ideas from ME! You're doing a killer job all on your own! lol
WILL he discover the list???
Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
WOW! that was...intense! lol! i cant wait for hte next chapter! payback...lol
Reviewer: 8th-cullen-is-here (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
that was great lol personal fantasies are they lol nah jokes gud job aye
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OMG! That was freakin' hot! Can't wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: StarMachina (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
That was another fucking great chapter!
Reviewer: StarMachina (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Shit, that was awesome!
Reviewer: StarMachina (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I love the two points of view! This is amazing and totally hot! :)
Reviewer: Lilibet Reine-DelaCouer (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Damn you! I have been OBSESSED with this story...I don't even remember how I found it but this is one of the first fanfics I have ever read and now i'm addicted to it. I find myself logging on just to check for updates and I think it is making me even more in love with Edward! ha ha ha... this is a great story, very well written from an academic standpoint, I LOVE IT! I am off to read Chapter 15 right now, but before i delved in I just wanted to say THANK YOU!
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