Reviewer: manyafandom (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Oh Edward. I love it when Edward makes Bella blush. he so knew what was up, he just wanted to hear it from her. And of course Alice knows and might just help Bella out.
Loved it!
Reviewer: manyafandom (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I love Bella's thinking and inner thoughts in this. It's so funny. And good thing she didn't explode, that would have been a mess.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness! Look who's here! Thank you so much for the multiple reviews! I'm a huge fan of ALL of your work!!!
Reviewer: myedwardismine (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OK, I know I've already written a review for this chapter but after having to read it over 3 more times since then (yes I just can't help myself!), I just had to write again!! It is soooooo good!!!!!!
Also wanted to mention this tidbit... We know from Rob's GQ interview that he's read Twilight FF and even mentioned that it's surprisingly well written and hard core. Well with all the attention your story is getting, I can't help but wonder if this one is on his "list"!!! Is Rob out there reading this along with the rest of us??!!?!?! Hmmm, I wonder if he'd submit a review?!?!
Laura, think about THAT while cranking out the next chapter!!! Would that be....."inspiring"???
(And quickly please...goes without saying of course!!)
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
you.are.evil ;]
Reviewer: dreamermuse (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
this is one of my favorite stories ;) please update soon!
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OMG! I just thought about this: Why don´t you have them do some public place where Seth accidentally catches (sees) them, he can tell all about it to Jacob. Of course you can write it so fraking good that we only think: Public Place, ha, ha,
Reviewer: amber cullen (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
UNBELIEVABLE!!! The tension is almost unbearable and by far the best I have ever read. The prose is absolute perfection!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Oh Laura, I am so very sorry for any "poor" soul who would be lucky enough to be dominated by you. I think not even Edward would stand it!
Reviewer: HUNTRESS88 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
I simple don't know what to say.......thank you?! LOL!
Reviewer: HUNTRESS88 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
oh my EDWARD!!! you go Bella!
Reviewer: HUNTRESS88 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
oh.....my.....I will never look at another tree quite the same way......LOL!
Reviewer: sexaiijess (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
omgggg
i have been readin for god knows how long but last night up till 8 am
now its 4 am
you must update soon you are
just fantastic i love it
i love your thoughts and i love you ideas
deff one off my fav authorssss
plz updae wen u get the chance
your great love you
and sorry for the delirious ritin
im tired lol
ciaoo
jess xoxox
Reviewer: HUNTRESS88 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
for the love that is holy - that was a good tease! love it!
Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
THIS IS THE HOTTEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!! GREAT JOB AND PLEASEEEE UPDATE SOON!!
Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
omg!! im in love with this story lmao!!god i never read anything like this continuee the amazing work ;)updatee sooon cant wait to see what happens next :Dyouu soo deserveee a 10 :)
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
NUMBER 17!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO!
Oh thank yoouuuu this was incredible. Absolutely freaking awesome.
I have to tell you, Dominant Edward squicks me out. I actually totally tried reading The Submissive and.... oh GOD I was SO wigged. it wasn't good. I couldn't finish-- But YOUR domward is sexy. And cute. I think it's because we know what he's thinking. I'm not about the spanking thing but who.freaking.cares-- this chapter had #17!!!
Oh. and DAMN that last bit with Edward in the shower alone? holy. shit. ugh. THAT is the reason you're on the top ten most reviewed.
I can't wait for the rest of the weekend!
p.s. that villa is absolutely gorgeous. good god.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Revenge is sweet!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Ah Emmet what are we going to do with you! haha
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I have always wanted a baby grand piano. Now I want one even more.
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Lovely
Reviewer: June (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Wow - that was hot. Nicely done!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
This is the best fanfic ever!!! This is all I'm going to say!! F***!
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Her mouth opened and closed several times before I saw her eyes and jaw set with a fierce determination. She took a deep breath and said, "Taste me."
I sucked in a breath. She did not just offer her blood to me. Yes she did. Mother of God.
She whispered this time. "Taste me, Edward. I want you to."
"Bella, you...don't know...what you're saying." Take it back. Take it back or I won't be able to resist.
"I do know what I'm saying, Edward. I know you can do this. I want you to."
Dear lord...Quiver worthy. Again brilliant!
Reviewer: unicornaddict (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Delish!
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
wow! that was perfect! i was a little apprehensive about the whole blood play thing but dear god you handled it beautifully and tastefully! and that last line? wow
just wow.... so great! and i'm finally caught up!!! :D i can't wait to see what's next!
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